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Stained – Chapters 20 and 21
Chapter 20
After about a twenty minute drive, Bette pulled over.
“Alright,” she said, unbuckled her seat belt and got out.
Tina followed suit, even though she didn’t have a clue why they where there. It was kind of a bad part of town and the only thing she could discover were three strip clubs. She was so busy praying to every single deity she could think of that Bette’s favorite place was not in fact a strip club that she almost didn’t notice her date was walking towards a tiny little bar sandwiched in between the strip clubs.
Bette waited for her to catch up and then she opened the door to the inconspicuous little establishment.
“Lord have mercy, am I havin’ a heart attack or is that really Elizabeth?” the tiny, wrinkled African American sitting at the bar yelled out. He mockingly reached for his heart with one hand, the other remaining on the half-empty beer glass on the counter.
“Heart attack? Ha, you’re just farshikkert, again,” his companion told him. The equally grey and wrinkled little heap of person had his back to the door and apparently felt no need to try and verify such a ridiculous statement.
“Far-whatever-it-was-you-said, my sweet behind! Just turn around, Simcha, she’s right there.”
“Please leave your tuchis out of it.”
“Wha’s wrong with my tush? Ain’t nothin’ wrong with my tush! Ask Bette.”
The other just mumbled something under his breath that sounded a lot like “Meshugine.”
Then Bette decided that it was probably time to announce her presence.
“Hey Earl, how’ve you been?”
Upon hearing the familiar voice, Earl’s companion spun around with remarkable speed for someone his age and when he spotted the source of the sound, he almost fell off his bar stool in surprise.
Earl’s laugh reverberated around the room. There was no describing it, really. His entire body shook and he laughed with long hauls.
“Heeheehee. Oh, I been good, but as you can hear, my fine piece of ass needs defending.”
Bette made her way over to the still stupefied senior and kissed him on the cheek.
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(43 votes, average: 3.44 out of 5)
Awwwww so sad, but still beautiful. I actually had the image of Bette as a hooker in my head. O.O And man do I fail. I was wondering, “What kind of name is Simcha?” And now I know, and knowing is half the battle. G.I. JOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOE!
Really like your story, and especially this chapter. Thanks.
Okay, I don’t know what was better…your author’s notes at the beginning or this fabulous story. You definitely have a way with words and I enjoyed both very much. Thank you for sharing your thought provoking story, as well as your rather interesting caffeine induced rant.
This story is GREAT!
No more Coke for you…….;)
Baby, start hitting that cokebottle, because if this is what comes out of your keyboard then… My god! So… incredibly… I cant even find words for it… wonderfull is an understatement!
That was so beautiful. Not friends just someone to hang around with That was sad. That is call friendship. Yet they called each other misfits. I like the word and the meaning in this chapter. We all have misfits in our life thanksGod thanks
Wow, it is nice to meet others who helped Bette through tought times. I would love to have non-friends (but really friends) like those men. Now Tina is meeting these very special men in Bette’s life.
Wow this is awesome and love it!!!!!!!!!
whoa, harsh lives…great stuff…
Luv the story…More please.
Definitely a sweet story! Succeeded in getting my obsessive mind off B&T for a while… That speaks volumes! ;)
Love their story. Love your story-telling skills. It’s all so captivating. Reached a point at which I thought I might actually, unbelievably, be more interested in their story than in B&T.
maybe you should try 7up… lol… love this story… please continue
this was nice i hope it continues a bit in the bar b4 B & T head off 4 some nookey.
That was absolutely enthralling!! Thank you!