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Stained – Chapter 19
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Chapter 19
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Bette wondered if it was healthy if you could feel your own heart beat. Regardless, the rate at which hers was beating sure wasn’t.
“Will you stop doing that?” she asked the organ politely, before ringing the door to Tina’s apartment.
She realized asking your heart to stop beating probably didn’t constitute sanity. It wasn’t just her heart; her mind as well was going a mile a minute. What kind of idiom was that anyway? A mile a minute means 60 miles an hour and 60 miles an hour isn’t really that fast. I mean, we’re talking neurons and nerve impulses here. Nerve impulses travel as fast as 260 miles per hour, so if your mind was going a mile a minute, you’d probably qualify for disability support.
The fact that it took Bette about a second to think all this up is proof enough. The next four seconds were spent trying to convince herself that the weird feeling in the pit of her stomach must have been caused by something she ate, because butterflies definitely couldn’t survive in the acidic environment. It was followed by the thought that people shouldn’t cut down rainforests, leaving her four more seconds to acknowledge that she had never in her life been so nervous to go out on a date with someone. What was that about anyway? She’d already met the woman’s friends for crying out loud!
When the door opened, thoughts on the speed of thought, butterflies and rainforests we’re replaced by one repeating sentence. Don’t screw this up. Don’t screw this up. Don’t screw this up.
“I’d offer you a penny for your thoughts, but it looks like they’re worth a lot more than that.”
The moment Bette laid eyes on Tina, she wasn’t so sure.
“Not anymore,” came the dodgy reply, accompanied by a matching grin.
“Bette!” Tina exclaimed and playfully slapped her date’s arm.
“Sorry,” Bette said, the big grin still on her face. “What I meant to say is that you look beautiful.”
And she did look beautiful in the simple, yet classy black cocktail dress.
“Thanks. You don’t look half bad yourself.”
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nice job, Noc… now I’m going to have to go back and read the other earlier chapters… ;-)
I don’t care if it’s a hole in the ground; if it makes you smile like that, I wanna see it.” I’d laugh if it was a Marine Corps-style fighting hole. LOL! Dammit we need to find a way for you to be able to give us a chapter more often. :(
ok so 2 things…..1) what took u so long, and 2) when’s the next posting??????????!!!
What would Tina have said if Bette’s favorite place was her bed? Hmmmm…that would have been interesting. This story is interesting and we want you to continue.
Its been so long, I will have to go back and read a few chappys. I really enjoyed this one, but bring on more sooner, so I don’t forget. I have CRS(can’t remember shit).
BBR3…I get that all the time…sometimes it’s hard to remember all the stories.
This is such a good story I don’t need to go back and refresh my memory…it’s all up there…tks noc…pls post soon, and that wasn’t near long enough!!!!
Good chapter. They are so cute and sweet, funny. Ok post soon please, thanks!
nice… loved the look into their minds… please continue
it’s about time we get a new chapter…hole in the ground LOL, i wonder what place made Bette smile like that…post soon
It does not matter how long it takes you to post because when I do see a post my heart speeds up because I know that I am going to enjoy it. Something about those anatomy classes that at times make you laugh, or blush.
is good to read another chapter from you, i like the date but Bette should be more careful with her presents.
I’m ecstatic to see another post from you, I love this hilarious story….I wish the author was just as funny LMAO!!! I’m only kidding, I always look forward to your author notes, they have me in stitches :o)) There is no risk that I’m forgetting this story, but it would be nice with more posts. Have a great Sunday :o)
Thanx for the chap noc…The b-day party is still my fav chap, but I love what these are possibly lesding up too? Keep up the good work kid!
Okok how about ‘cat’ and ‘dog’ as names for your goldfishes? Actually, mommy had goldfishes once and we called them ‘appelmoes’ and ‘stoofpeer’ LOL Ok as for the story: ‘wow’ the sentence ‘It started with a kiss’ comes to mind… I love this story! I love this selfconcious Tina ;) Very nice! And I was right about the card! There was a silly line inside! Not as bad as ‘I want to have your baby’ but then again one who could defo fit into my story Pretty Women LOL! Thanks so much for this chapter! Now lets see what this fav. spot is… And off course I want to know how T will handle the fans!