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SWEET MEMORIES – Chapter 4
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Chapter 4
Being that Bette had the advantage of seeing directly into Angelica’s eyes, she saw the sheer mischief that lay there regarding her request much sooner then Tina. She took a deep breath, realizing that in discussing their past, they were raising Angelica’s hopes. Those hopes were of something that was not planned for in the future. After so many years of going back and forth, both her and Tina vowed friendship would be the only relationship they focused on to move forward with each other.
“I’m not sure that’s such a wise idea.”
Alice saw recognition flash in Bette’s eyes. She knew that Angelica was easy to read and decided to help her favorite niece with her request by pushing a different angle.
“Come on Bette, we’ve got nothing to do for hours.”
“I thought your big plans were to dabble in illegal substances and eat yourself into a carb coma before hitting bed?” Bette smiled as if daring Alice to refute her earlier statement.
“This is much better, think of the brain cells you’re saving me not to mention the unwanted pounds Doritos put on.”
“I just don’t think it’s wise.”
Bette made eye contact with Tina, who looked as puzzled as their daughter did.
“It was so long ago Angie,” Bette tried to muster an explanation. “Why do you want to know?”
“I just want to hear it,” Angelica pouted. “It’s not like you’ll un-ground me so I can do something else.”
“Wait, you’re grounded?” Alice asked.
“For fighting in school,” Tina said. “Although I will say she was defending her lesbian moms so I might consider being a tad more relaxed about this punishment.”
“Way to go PJ, you need to always come to the defense of people that are frowned upon merely because of who they love. It’s not right, I think you should be rewarded not punished! I’m very proud to be your Earth Mother.”
“Careful there Al, that soap box is kinda high for you. Ya might stumble off it.”
“Laugh it up T, but I’m serious. The things she’s experiencing in school she can’t learn in any book. It’s times like these that our community can break the cycle of hatred by teaching tolerance and love of others. You don’t see me going around nagging on people because they’re straight do you?”
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Gosh there are so many areas of the story that I love. I love the way that Aunt Alice is understanding exactly what Angie is trying to do, and playing right along with it as well. I think that it must have been very hard on the gang to watch Bette and Tina crumble, especially where they saw such an amazing love between the two. It is sad to watch something so special fall apart anytime, but I am sure for Angie, she doesn’t completely understand because she sees love in both parents from them to her, and from her to them……as well as very likely seeing a highly amicable relationship between the two which is so very important when couples seperate.I hope that whatever happens, that Angelica will realize that there is a love there, but sometimes love just isn’t enough at times to make people fine one another again after crumbling so far apart, and that life takes turns in directions that perhaps is best to not go back….and just go forward. Whatever happens in this story, I am here for the ride. Hats off for a simply amazing chapter……
Angie will shit her pants when she finds out the Brit Tina dated is her Aunt Helena. LMFAO! Gumby, this story kicks so much ass it’s not even funny. I don’t mind at all that this chapter was long before I never got bored. I have a feeling that Kristen isn’t as good to Angie as Tina thinks she is. Not that she’s mean or anything, but just not the mother type. Man this reminds me so much of The Parent Trap (the original one, not the shitty remake).
before = because WOW major typo
This is so funny because Angie does not have a clue as to what she is doing or why Bette and Tina broke up. I love her effort and mischief. Will Angie be the one to get Bette and Tina back together in future seasons? I highly doubt it but it is nice to dream. Keep the dream alive chicki. I love it better than chocolate. Oh my God i did not just say that. Anyway love the characters so roll on.
Angie is so cute! I am fearful of when she finds out about the affair and how she will react to Bette. I think it will be explosive! It’s really funny how Tibette is trying to pretend that they don’t want to pursue a relationship and fuck each other’s brains out, lol! Good to see that Dana is walking among us! I’m excited that your taking this approach in telling thier story rather than using a flashback. This is refreshing escpecially with gang’s ,including Angie’s, remarks. Post soon!
I really like this wonderful story. You are a fantastic writer I never get bored reading your story. Please keep going.
This story is crazy amazing!! I like how you’re able to shift between the past and the present so easily. I’m looking forward to reading future chapters. I feel a little sad for Tina. Never seeing anyone else. Of course, I am B/T type of gal (and that Kristen is ridiculous!). Please keep posting! You are fabulous!
i love angie!!!!! lmao..she is the girl to get the ball rollin….please continue soon….
I love Angie for getting them, what I think, is started again. Kristen, bubye, stick a fork in her ’cause she’s done! Angie’s going to freak when she finds out who the Brit was…
To answer your question im good and loving this story! Alice is soo funny..im glad she saw what Angie is trying to do. Hey no way if i was Angie i would stay hidding on the stairs when there is pizza near :P I love pizza lol can’t live without it!. Why Bette is trying so hard if deep inside she knows Tina is the one..her soulmate. Sorry but Kirsten has to go and fast ;) Post soon!.
Oh Snap now. let the truths come out now!, but I am totally hooked on this story lol! this is too gd, maybe when Angie is older and tibette aren’t already together, she can plot this, would be super cool.
Love Angie, she is a smart kid and I bet all my my icrean on it. She will get her Moms back together. Hope I dont lose my ice cream. thanks
OMFG 7 Pages!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! going to read it now
I love Angie; Kirsten needs to leave the picture; B&T need to get together already!
This story is delightful….so great. All the dialogue, sounds just like the characters. You’ve got some skillz, woman. Angie will be greatly disappointed in her Mama B if she finds out about Candace. Alice is a hoot. Angie is still naive cause she thinks dating is dating while here on The Chart, it’s who you’ve slept with. Are you going to have Angie blurt out that she saw her Mama B have sex in the pool? Do you think that would be more disconcerting for a 13 year old to observe versus hetero sex. At that age kids (if there not having sex themselves) talk about men and women “doing it” and it isn’t what she observed that night. I really love your long and frequent posts. Not boring at all b/c the chapters are so well written and interesting.
this is amazing it reminds you of season1 plus al is funny and you get to see the small details this could be sooooooooooooooo much longer lol
Absolutely fabulous. The dialogue was perfect! Thanks!
Simply hilarious…good on Angie for trying to bring the moms back 2gether…hope Ange doesn’t get hurt in the process of her investigations…maybe Bette should tell Ange about Candace not wait for her to find out….often it’s the guilty party who is too scared to try to get back with the other but Bette did try…I wonder why Tina is not dating, she apparently dotes on Bette…of course I want them back 2gether….PPS, this was a wonderful chapter…
kristen sounds like a leech to me, i hope she’s ll be gone soon…i love the way angie is trying to bring her moms back together, i hope all her plans willl work, maybe she needs to get alice to help her, can’t wait to see angie talking to aunt helena LOL
This was 7 pages and still not enough (greedy I know) I love Angelica in this story she is determined to get her moms back together…I think she will be pissed at Bette when she finds out Bette was a major reason why they split. What will Auntie Helena possibly tell Angelica? Will she give the whole sordid story? Keep posting please.
this story is great! i love how Angie wants so much to help their mom to be together. Alice is a good help. honestly i don’t understand why shane didn’t want to help in this issue. I am so sorry for Kirsten because she loves Bette but she is right she will never have all Bette’s attention or will be her priority. Bette loves so much Angelica and Tina is the love of her live. They need to take the risk to try again.
I so enjoy reading your updates. Thanks again for sharing it. Just wondering why Bette is in a committed relationship with Kristen when she hasn’t really moved on from her previous one. Her need just to have someone in her life has left her in a dilemma. Continue her relationship with Kristen just because she feels obligated, but under such circumstances the relationship is unlikely to last. Or, try again with Tina (who is currently very available and whom Bette has not really moved on)….which would make Angelica a very happy child.
This is so funny and love the gang!
Wassup! I’ve been following your story, but this time had to comment. Absolutely love it! Laurel and I are just enjoying you telling our story of how we came to be the awesome-together-forever-no-one-can-come-between-us-not-even-gumby-and-her-partner-for-life-jennysmom-couple! Keep the stories coming you’re an amazing story teller. I’m always reading even though not saying much, but always here G. Much love, T. P.S. Laurel and I just celebrated out nuptials, perhaps you and your blowup Laurel can join us. Hee-hee!
hahahahahahhaaaaaaa The GANG has arrived! OMG Angelica is gonnna be so devastated though when she finds out its Helena! O.o! In the last chapter, I loved the little slip of the tongue where Tina said she ‘the love I have’ and not ‘the love I had’ for Bette… MG we’ve got to get rid of this Kirstin-lady… She’s annoying me for the same reason as she is annoying Angelica… She is not Tina ;)
Absolutely perfect! Your characters live and breathe. I can just see Helena spluttering when she has to answer Angie’s questions about the mystery Brit! Your chapters are always so long (a good thing) that I hate to ask for you to post again soon, but really enjoying this story so much that I’m impatient for the next chapter.
this story os great.. you have captured the characters as though you were their creator… no disrespect to IC… and it is so well written… i am really enjoying this… my only hope is that angie isnt too hurt when the truth about their breakup comes to light…
WOW!!! 7 pages JUST GREAT. I just hope BOO can handel all of it when the truth comes out and she will not be to mad at her MamaB. Kristen does have to go and give Bette some time alone to think about what she really wants. I so love you story Gumby. Thank you and PPS
haaaa ohh this gets better with every post
Yup, [this is good].
whats Angue gonna do when she finds out Helena is the one who came between her mothers, let the fireworks begin I soooo love this