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Wax was looking kind of weird, but admittedly pretty cool…although Alice had to admit it looked nothing like a skate shop. Not that it mattered, really, and she had no idea why she was thinking about things like that anyway. She did, after all, have boob cupcakes to take care of here. After discussing their fabulousness with Jenny, she asked if there was a fridge so they wouldn’t melt, and Shane gave her directions to one in the back.
"I like the diversity," Shane said as she walked into the back room to get some more streamers, motioning to the cupcakes. Which were two different colors.
"Yeah, well, I figured I should give people a choice in the matter."
"That’s really nice of you, Al," Shane replied, somehow managing to keep a straight face. "Hey…I know you told Jenny that Dana’s going to be okay with all this, but do you think she’ll be uncomfortable with any of it? I mean, we could tone it down a little for her."
"Nah, I think that’d bug her more than if you just went about this like her surgery never happened. I mean, not that we should forget it or anything, since it was such a huge deal, but she just wants to feel normal. If she knows we’re going out of our way to spare her feelings instead of just doing things normally, she’s going to get pissed." Alice sighed and shook her head. "She’s scared, but she doesn’t want us to coddle her or anything."
"Yeah, I can see that. It’s hard to stay on the right side of the line sometimes, though. I mean, it’s probably obvious to you because you’re with her all the time, but the rest of us never really know."
Alice smiled sadly and reached out to touch Shane’s shoulder. "You’re doing pretty damn well, all things considered. She knows you care, and I think that matters more than knowing exactly what to do, you know? I have no idea what to say half the time either."
"Yeah. The whole thing just sucks. I wish everything just made sense like it used to." She stopped and locked eyes with Alice, finally giving her a little smile as she shrugged. "Fuck it. We’ll figure it out." And with that, she took the roll of streamers under her arm and went back out to the main floor.
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that was so fucking hot can’t wait to see what will happen next please post soon I love it great update
Nice dude, That was a steamy one. Just the way we like out Danish. :-D
once again flawless. i love the slant you are putting on this whilst staying true to the show. fab job just don’t kill dana!! :)
I really like where this storyline is going. You should definitely be a writer for the show. Nicely done! I can’t wait for the next installment.
In the words of Lenore : that was HOT. Good job ! Could use a shower myself…
I just finished speed-reading because I need to go to work. I liked how you set up the date. It made sense in terms of their current relationship, and had a different feel to it than the date on the show. I really need to get ready for work. Hot car scene!
I just finished speed-reading because I need to go to work. I liked how you set up the date. It made sense in terms of their current relationship, and had a different feel to it than the date on the show. I really need to get ready for work. Hot car scene!
HELLO Can you say HOT. Thank you so much for that little wake up call. That is exactly what should have happened. Nicely done.
Thank You For The Update! Dana jeolous is really cute…I am sure it will all work out in the end for them…Post Soon!
At the risk of sounding redundant, I can’t help but agree with everyone else…that was HOT! And I liked how they ended up having sex in the backseat of a car on prom night. The rest of it was excellent as well, I love the exchanges between Shane and Dana, they’re always so right on. Oh, and did I mention the car scene was HOT! :)
May I add oatmeal pancakes to the pancake ass kicking carnage – that was totally steamy – Dana most certainly claimed Alice. Yay!
Yay you posted and what a chapter, firstly 80s Alice rocks :D Secondly I love how you played out the Chandra scene, very well done my dear, and lastly back seat of the car sex, hot hot hot! :D That prom night had to be way better for them than their highschool proms I bet! PPS Peace Out xx
Okay … that was ridiculously hot!!! It is so past my bedtime & I don’t care. I love your take on season 3 & I love the way you have Alice & Dana interact. The smutty smutty goodness is a much appreciated added bonus.