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Lucky in Love (Chapter 28)
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The new Mercedes SUV made the time honored Los Angeles Sunday pilgrimage, along a haphazard route, stopping at various listed houses while the occupants in the front seats assessed what they saw, made notes and, occasionally, took a quick walk around, checking out the property and the neighborhood. They were obviously a couple in love and, despite the Angelenos’ famously blasé attitude toward celebrity, Dana and Alice knew they’d been recognized a couple of times.
It was an odd sight, by all accounts. As they made their way back to the car at their last stop, Dana clutched Alice’s hand a little tighter to get her attention, nodding toward Shane and Dave, who were awkwardly sharing the backseat. Both were wearing a seatbelt and they were as far apart as they could physically get, each hugging the window beside them.
“Oh look, honey,” Alice cracked, “the kids are fighting again.”
Dana’s peal of delight rang out, getting anxious looks from both the dog and the human who were not so patiently waiting for them. Alice climbed into the passenger seat, grateful that she wouldn’t have to do it again for a while.
“Guys,” Shane said glumly, “do you realize how far Santa Monica and the Palisades are from West Hollywood?”
“It’s just a couple of places,” Dana answered. “Most of the other ones are in Hancock Park and the Hollywood Hills.”
“She knows baby,” Alice took Dana’s hand as they pulled away from the curb. “Shane, you’ve had something negative to say about every place we’ve been by today. Lighten up, will you? And for God’s sake, just pet Dave already.”
Shane knew she was behaving badly, but she couldn’t help it. All she wanted was for things to go back to the way they’d been before she’d opened her big mouth. And, at the moment, that included not knowing that her best friends were planning on moving or that they had adopted some drooling, nosy beast named Dave. Of course, all she really wanted was to go to Carmen and plead for forgiveness. Again.
With a sigh, she pulled her sunglasses down just enough to send the dog a sidelong glance. That was all it took. Dave lay down as best he could and extended his head to Shane’s lap. A sullen smile crossed her lips as she relented and rubbed his ears, feeling a little better. In the front, Alice and Dana shared a relieved look when Shane and Dave finally made their peace, albeit grudgingly.
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Oh god if I could throw roses at you I would lol. Amazing as usual and I see you are nominated Sammy and it would be a crime if you don’t win! PPS
Sammy,OMG you are such a talented writer and i think your story freaking ROCKS! I loved this chapter andAwwww shucks,thanks for the authors notes! Thanks for this awesome story!! PPS
Awesome!!! That was great Ilove theway Cramen handeled the situation with Shane. Just great!!! I hope they´ll make it through and that Shane will have faith in Carmen.
You continue to amaze me – if you don’t get a Fanfic award for this, then there is definitely something amiss. Love all of our usual characters and Dave is adding even more. Please post again soon. X
Thank you for posting. I hope the offer goes thru on the house so they can start with their new life together…that’s all that matters them being together. Jun Ying was making me sick and I was just reading it.
So fucking perfect! I feel like shit and this is just what the doctor ordered ;) Oooh…there’s an idea…sorry. lol. So babe, this was outstanding. I loved all the AlShaDane moments almost as much as the Danish lovin’! I think those three should never be apart…except for maybe the Danish hotness…ok so yeah. You make any pimp proud! I am one lucky mutha-f*cka. lmao…blame this comment on the NyQuill I just chugged at 5:30 in the evening. lol. Love you babe. PPS
This is the best story by far on the fanfic in my opinion. Have to agree with everyone else and Shane and Dave so cute!!!PPS
Just wanted to let you know I still LOVE this story. And just for you I altered the lyrics of Gimme some lovin’. :P *ok geekiness starts* “So glad they made it/So glad they made it/Thank you for/giving us Danish lovin’/giving us Danish lovin’/giving us Danish lovin’ as mch as you can!” *geekiness ends* :D I also loved the interaction between Shane and Dave. And the little AlShaDane momentAnd Lara seems to be the perfect daughter-in-law. Isn’t she the sweetest? And Shane better will make full benefit of the last chance that Carmen gave her! :)
Wow!
Most excellent update! your love scenes are so fucking HOT!!
I *swoon* to your uber hot writing skills.
OMFG, I read all 28 chapters today and I want about 1000 more! I love this freakin’ story! Now this should be the stuff on my tv screen. Oh and Dexter, nice plug. Keep ’em coming! Yeah that too… hehe
WOW!!! U take my breath away!!!!!!!Sorry not much writing from me this week…but summer holidays start on Thursday so after I collapse for a couple of days hopefully I’ll get back to writing…love Dave…PPS
DAMN you are so good. You get my morning off to a real nice, although wet, start. Gee now I gotta go to work with that running through my poor brain. I love Dave too. PLEASE post soon.
Trying this again: This was beautifully done and extremely well-written. I love the reconciliation between Shane and Carmen, as well as the rest if it.
“You take my breath away”…I LOVED this line. Really really awesome. It’s like you know Danish so damn well, it’s quite great. :)
If you dont win an award, I’m going to hunt someone down. This story is still one of my favorites, and the writing just keeps getting better and better, if that is even possible. You’re amazing babe, and this story is pure gold! :-)
sigh…that was excellent. the whole shane/carmen thing with carmen laying down the law, definitely what shane needed to hear. My favorite line (other than the “You take my breath away”) was Alice’s “Oh honey, the kids are fighting again”, that made me laugh. Very well done.
This is an amazing story. I love it! More please!