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Like a Fairytale, chapter 24
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Once upon a time in ‘Like a Fairytale’ :
Once every 999 years, when the right person attemps to cross the river at the right time, the chance exists for ‘The Pure Water’ to evolve into ‘The Water Of Pure Love’.
The voice was September’s and echoed over the water as Tina’s just had done…
Bette still shivered… Had she dreamt it? The voice she would have recognized everywhere, but now, it missed the twinkling laugh that had always been in it and it sounded more… Full… And mature… She was barely able to pay attention to what September wat saying…
Today, that day has arrived…
A golden fog surrounded them instantly, and Shane tried to get a hold of Bettes hand, unsuccesfully.
Dana, who had opened her eyes carefully to look at the throbbing object in her hands, found that through the fog she merely felt the strong pounding of the heart, before it slipped through her fingers… Trying to get a hold of it again she felt the smooth surface of the object brush against her fingertips before it was beyond her reach…
Not knowing the consequenses of losing the heart and not being able to see anything made Dana feel as alone and helpless as when she had wondered around the streets before Shane had found her…
She felt a weakness overwhelm her, and she almost went through her knees when it felt as if her heart was injected with a large amount of love… The golden fog turned into the same caleidoscope of colors as the water had done earlier and the harmonious melody once more resounded over the river…
Light seemed to emerge right above Dana, who only now realized that night must have fallen hours ago, for the moonbeams at once became visible and brought a mysterious tone to the bright light that blinded her.
Shane and Bette stood at the shore, stunned by the colors of the fog and the light that made Dana clearly visible for them, and shiverred in the cold night air.
All sounds had faded away, except for one, and a strong heartbeat was audible in the same rhythm as the wind that tugged at their hair and clothes…
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you posted! *happy dance* i am so happy that you did it, and a very good way as always. I can read this before i leave, now you will make my travel easier thanks again.
and i have to add that Love can do everything and Dana and Alice have so much love! I hope B&T will be together soon because Tina is already waiting for her! and yes lament you are first!
You know what? Those butterflies… they settled in my stomach as soon as I started to read this… Oh, and still there by the way! Oh J… *happy sigh*… so so so sweet! So happy that both Dana and Alice are okay! They are so damn cute… But I feel for B&T and long to have them reunited! For a moment, I thought that Tina’s soul was in that butterfly in chief and that she would give her a kiss… Maybe they could meet in a dream or something… Gosh, i’m such a softie when it comes to these two. Oh, and totally behind you about these letters to IC, Captain! This ship is surely lucky to have you as its captain you know! Long live B&T’s true love!… This story is the most amazing fairytale ever! Please don’t let those Disney sharks get hold of it! ;) Thanks!
*sniff, sniff, BLOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!* Damn this was a nice long chapter! And I mean that in a good way too. xD Back to my nap. LOL
Beautiful Chapter Mom =)You could have told me you were going to post..(not talking to you) LOL Just joking, I love that you brought Alice back to life, I knew you didn’t have itin you to kill her off for good. I can’t wait to read the next next chapter.. =)
Thanks for updating this. Now that one love has reunited, it just a matter of time that B&T share one fate under the magical power of true love. Sweet!
I’m sooooo late for work now.. but will read again and give a real comment after my work ;)
Been a wee bit under the weather for days. After the coughing and all that goes with I still feek terrible. Plus after 16 weeks I might get to go with out the sling. will know tomorrow if the shoulder and shoulder has mending. IWILL SAY THIS YOU MADE MY DAY. SEEING YOUR NAMES AND MY FAIRY TALE I DO FEEL A WEE BIT BETTER. THANKS YOU SO MUCH FOR POSTING. YOU LET A LOT OF PEOPLE KNOW WHAT TRUE AND PURE LOVE IS THANKS
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that’s why i love fairytales because they always end happy…but they have to hurry now or they won’t reach tina in time, i can’t wait for the moment of their reunion, i know it will be sweet and hot
Hey were have u been!!!!!!!!!!! 4 p0ages it will do but u know it should be longer, BOF man u need to update and make it long!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bette is one step closer to the other half of her heart. Butterflies are beautiful delicate creatures that endure so much to get to that point in their life. For them to become those brilliantly colored creatures of flight they must transform themselves from a caterpillar that traverses the earth on it’s belly. The caterpillar must do all the work for themselves when leaving the cocoon or they will not survive. Love is like that at times. We have to work so hard to get there but once there it is worth all of that pain and anguish that it took to get to that person that holds our hearts.
First of all, don’t say you’re not as good as Jobadge, Allyemmerson, Nocturnal, Lamentamini, Zabo, BetteAndTinaForever, Dani, Lacoop or any of the other great writers you’ve mentioned. You are you, you are unique just like the other ones. You make me proud, proud that a long time ago I learned to read and can take all these wonderful things you write right in my heart. You give us with you writings warmth and tenderness, heartwrenching dilemmas and despair, but above all you give us hope, hope that in the end everything will be alright. You have the gift girl and you use it so very well, thanks for that. He meid, je hebt het weer voor elkaar, dit was weer een geweldig hoofdstuk ik heb er ontzettend van genoten, hoe speel jij dat toch klaar elke keer, ik kan er gewoon niet bij. Ik lees dit nog voor het ontbijt dus moet ik je bedanken voor één van mijn betere dagen, mijn dag kan gewoon niet stuk nu door jou.Veel succes nog met je stage en nu kijk ik gewoon uit naar vervolg van….Pretty Woman en The beginning of friendship.
‘Captain, my captain’, with you our precious TiBette ship will never sank, whatever happens through IC’s pen, and will always follow its magical journey through the TrueLove Ocean… I said it a lot of times to you but that’s something I truly mean and so I love to say it again here : you, dear friend, have the heart and mind of a poet. And how I love the way you and I, the so talented author and her faithful and delighted reader, obviously share the same conception of the two most beautiful and so essential feelings one can feel : friendship and love. We’re two hopeless romantics, but isn’t it great to be able to feel this way ? Even a one-way love is a miracle, beyond the pain – and worthing the pain after all. This fairytale of yours is not only one of the most original tales on this site ever – and I vote for it in this category, as I was so happy to give my votes to your jewel of love story (B.of a F.) and for yourself as the wonderful author you never realize you are – but above all being such a sweet, powerfully metaphoric and deeply poetic tribute to True Love. Whatever happens, you already wan the Therese Award (!) for this so endearing talent and sensitivity of yours. Thank you so much for everything !! ^_^ faithfully yours – A. (P.S.: god, tell me that the maid’s daughter and her princess will at least meet each other soon ! The waiting is killing me here ! *wink & smile*)
beautiful… your way of writing… it somehow calms me :S if that’s possible… anyway, good chapter :) please post soon(er) :P
Count me in for being a hopeless romantic ;) I come back home from one of the most pressured day at work (hate being an adult sometimes)… head throbbing, eye weighting, wet from the heavy downpour… but, remembering there’s a fairytale awaiting… reading it, seeing how those words form a fairytale motion image… A pure enjoyment… thank you my dear friend… what you don’t know is that your stories are the ones that truly touching :) Long live TiBette!!
And yea, ditto to fan4life… your story do have a calming effect… believe it or not… my head throbbing is not as bad ;)
Wow, 4 lovely pages!!! But I still want more! :p They gotta hurry before the Queen do something stupid to Tina again. So when can we have another post from you, sweety? :)
Oh damn my friend that was so fucking awesome and love it, happy that Alice and Dana are ok. The butterflies is amazing and Love is beautiful and that its will happen to everyone who’s believe in Love, Love is never died and always in ours heart forever. Can’t wait to see B&T see each other again and please don’t let any bad thing happen to B&T. Ok post soon please, thanks!