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    Broken Phone Calls Pt 8

    Story written on December 18, 2006 by lrowen69.
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    whos behind door number one… and will shane finally let go of her past…

     

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     As the knocking got louder, Carmen was pulled out of her thoughts and she quickly untangled herself from Shane, trying not to wake her, grabbed her robe and ran to the front door, expecting it to be one of their friends or even her mother and maybe a sibling …. but the second the door flew open she couldn’t of been more wrong..  

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      She stood there frozen in place.. the gentle breeze causing her rob to sway gracefully as she looked upon the man standing in front of her.. her voice caught in her throat.. and she frowned…

    "can i come in.. " the man asked.. his voice shaky and masked with regret.. but his head held high…

    Carmen stepped back… "ya.. i mean yes.." she said ushering him in… quickly closing the door.. "Gabriel, why are you here.." she asked.. still shocked that this man would ever show his face around here… but not completely surprised..

    "i made a mistake…"he said in almost a whisper… lying shay down on the couch… "i thought by coming here.. i thought i was doing the right thing.. but as usual i fucked up even more.. " he said taking a seat across from Carmen in the living room… "its just… i thought Shane would be better off, ya know.. but" Gabriel stopped… his eyes shifting to look at his sleeping son..

    "but what" Carmen urged… her voice calm.. still not sure why he was here, but willing to hear him out..

    "but i was wrong… when i saw the look on Shane’s face yesterday when shay went off on her… it.. something in me broke, OK… her whole life, people have come and gone.. most of them taking some part of her and leaving.. and i am one of those people.. i used her in more ways then i care to count… but Ive never had to think about what Ive done to her until yesterday… and it scared me… i don’t want to be one of those people… not to her and not to shay…" he said honestly… and Carmen had to ask…

    "but why are you here" it was a simple question… and she needed to know..

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    1. Ah, the long awaited talk. Well, you did an excellent job again and I’m waiting for whatever happens next:) So, please post soon and thanks for this one!

    2. Ja Ja Oui Oui Si Si. This is good. They should talk. But for some reaosn I can only imagine it being awkward since they both don’t like to talk :/ Oh well, I’m sure you’ll make them spill their guts.

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