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Lucky in Love (Chapter 30)
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The realization that one is being watched is an odd and, often uncomfortable, feeling. It made Dana smile, but only because she knew Alice was watching her sleep and, even with her eyes still closed, she was bathed in Al’s deep, radiating love. They’d gone directly home from the radio station the day before and had been unable to keep their hands off of each other. Aside from making love, they just had to be in some sort of contact with each other. It was a physical need beyond their control. They held hands while walking Dave. Alice answered the emails during the radio show, clad only in one of Dana’s little tank tops, sitting between her legs, wrapped in her arms. They’d made love again and wordlessly fed each other a late supper while watching Beth’s appearance on Letterman. Dana smiled again, betraying her rather lascivious thoughts.
“Took you long enough,” Alice whispered, her breath warming Dana’s neck.
“You wore me out,” Dana whispered back, opening her eyes to find Alice’s glowing face less than two inches from her own.
“Hmmmmm, did I?” Al trailed her fingertips around Dana’s lips and moved even closer. “Are you sure?” She repeated the gesture on Dana’s lips, this time with her tongue.
“What time is it?” Dana managed to get the words out before sucking on it.
“Early,” mumbled Alice and gently withdrew. “We have time before we have to meet Regine.”
“What do I hear?” Dana tried to focus, but Alice’s beaming face made that impossible.
“Shower,” Alice said, backing away, pulling Dana with her. “Come on.”
Dana’s heart literally skipped a beat when Alice stepped back into the cascading hot water and tipped her face up, letting it flow over and through her bed head. She encircled Alice’s waist and moved closer, lifting her chin into Alice’s waiting lips. Their bodies fused into one another as the water sheeted over them. Ahs and ohs echoed off the walls and back through them as their excitement mounted. Dana savored every inch of Alice’s soft skin within her reach. She parted her legs slightly to allow Al access, her legs and ass tightening with sheer delight. Alice smiled into Dana’s pulse point when she felt her wetness. In return Dana sucked harder on Alice’s pulse point and feathered the lightest of touches across the special place on the back of her neck. No one had ever known their bodies like they knew each other. It was a symphony, complete with adagios, well timed rests and, of course, the building crescendo that would supercede every other note.
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Dude, Helena’s security guys are horrible failures and don’t deserve the money I’m sure she’s giving them. Sheesh. As to the nominations, you deserved every one. I’m constantly more impressed by your talent.
Why do I feel Dana is in the wrong place at the wrong time, I hope she doesn’t end up getting shot or something awful. Fantastic opening scene with Alice and Dana, hot and loving, your writing really is an inspiration hun :) Can’t wait til the next post. xx
You and your ultimate finger gnawing cliffhangers! Can you tell by my use of “!” how excited/nervous I am?
Aargh! Winnie the evil scourge of the universe! I have to side with De_Leish_ous, I hope Dana is onto something heroic and not another tragedy. I’ll be on the edge of my seat until the next installment!
Congrats on the nomination! Completely deserved in my opinion. As for this chapter, I feel like I could do a better job at guarding those kids than Helena’s inept bodyguards, and I sorta fear Winnie so that’s not saying much. Not only did they let her take the kids, but they’re gonna accidentally shoot “crouching tiger hidden Dana” aren’t they? Okay, did I really just write that? I’m clearly sleep deprived, but I just had to read your update before going to bed b/c I’m admittedly addicted to this story!
Yet another great chapter, Danish lovin 100% perfect…and smoking hot everyone knows you deserve that leaky pen, popularity should be a factor yes but smooth and glorious talent oozing from the computer should definitely be weighted more heavily. You know you’ve always got my vote and I love the Winnie Dana standoff very edgy of our dear athlete. I hope Winnie doesn’t get anymore bright ideas this stunt will definitely land her in the clink. Can’t wait for the next chap mama…Post Soon
Blimy!! Awesome chapter. Drama. PPS
ok ok…so…first let me address the fact that it is so hard out here for a pimp…you know??? I mean the things I do for you and the rest of the girls…if you only knew, damnit! I will give you your cut as promised along with a holiday bonus for this little beauty of an update. You never were one to dissapoint…and that’s why you are my number one trick :-D Seriously tho babe, this was killer and the Danish…I mean damn…I fucking love you! Now the end I think we need to discuss because it’s not that I don’t trust you…it’s just that…I don’t exactly trust you with this story…ok fine I trust you :-D This was wonderful babe. Keep up the great work and thanks for all the words of wisdon…my wise little employee. PPS!!! and more danish please…can’t forget that.
This is one hell of a story!!! Danish are so hot,phew. Please keep it going, thanks.
Ack! You can’t stop it there!! *whines* Helena needs to fire her security team. They’re absolute rubbish. Thank goodness for Bette (and Dana?)… Well, do I need to say it? Please, post soon!
Hey Sammysgirl, thanks for the reply to my comment; about the FanFic nomination…u deserved it and IMO the nomination is sufficient recognition…your story is entertaining and thats what its all about huh!!! I’ve been away from homes 24 hours celebrating the New Year but will be home for a week to write…and then off for a week’s holiday…so hope you can post again while I’m home and of course when I get back…is that enuff time??? becuz I really DO NEED to know what happens next!!!!
OOOO! I can’t beleive you stopped right there! lol! This looks very ugly soone to get even more uglier!
Oh come on you can’t end it like that you will have to post again very very soon!!!!!!! But keep up the good work I am totally hooked on this story. Anyway I’m going to get back to the party now so please post again soon I’m begging you!!!!!Happy New Year!
Awesome cliffhanger babe!!!I knew you could do this and it was great! Freaking winnie UGHHH i hope she gets what she deserves!!Thanks for the kind words,nooo baby you rock!!PPS
Sammy….GET RID OF WINNIE! This is not open to any discussion. Thank you for posting you know how to keep this stroy interesting. I hope they get those kids away from her safely.
Damn … I can’t believe you stopped there! You need to update & quickly. The beginning of this chapter was fucking hot by the way!
Wow – what a way to end a chapter – keeping us all hanging on in suspense like this. What can I say – you are a superb writer and you must continue ‘forever’, so all readers, let us make sure that we keep on telling her how good she is .. Happy New Year.
OMG SammysGirl…you’re frightening Goldrun, and I know that’s not what you want to do! (I just had to steal the line!). Seriously though….given your track record, I can believe that Bette will get shot and Dana run over before this little confrontation is over. Surely not??? And, awwww, how sweet is Jun Ling?
happy 2007! Exciting way to start the new year. I think I’m with everyone else here, when I say it’s about time to get rid of Winnie! Great stuff
unbelievable. Thats all I can say I’m glad they got to her before she got away
Wonderful update! Hope the new year finds you well and rested!!!I love it!