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Goodbye My Lover
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Bette decided that the next time her cell rang she would answer it. She swung the car around heading back to the Whistler Hotel. Angelica had been crying and she was unable to comfort their daughter and in her heart she knew that she could never separate Tina from their child. Isn’t that what she was trying to tell Tina before everything got out of control? This was not the answer. Angelica deserved better and so did Tina. It was time to surrender. The adventure she had imagined could not happen. She drove not where she wanted to go but where her daughter needed her to go. Angelica as if sensing the change settled down and fell asleep.
She answered the cell on the second ring.
“Yes, Tina.”
“Bette, where are you and more importantly where is Angelica? It’s not your night and you have no right to have her.”
“Listen, Tina.” Bette said not hiding the weariness in her voice. “I took Angel for a ride and we will be back in about a half hour.”
“A ride at this time of night?” Tina was pissed.
“Yes, Tina a ride. She was fussy and I thought it would calm her down as it usually does. She is fast asleep.”
“You haven’t answered your cell phone for over an hour. I was going out of my mind and it’s not ok with me for you to just take her when you want.”
“Tina, you’re right I apologize. I’m actually pulling into the garage now. We’ll be up in a few minutes. We can talk then if you want to. We’ll see you in a few minutes.”
“Ok.” The relief was evident in Tina’s voice.
Bette took a few extra minutes holding Angelica before she knocked on Tina’s room door.
Tina opened the door immediately relief and anger battling one another across her face.
“She’s fed and changed.” Bette reported as she handed Tina the diaper bag.
Tina took the bag then gathered the sleeping Angelica into her arms and shot Bette a look of both anger and gratitude.
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Yes! Bravo…so well-written. :D I like how the emotions come through and well Henry is outta the picture so what’s not to love? LOL, bring it on K! PPS!
They are so civil to one another. I wish it were like that on the show. PPS.
This is awesome and good start. I read all of your stories and love them all and can’t wait to read on this one. Glad you kick henry out of picture, and now let B&T work thing out, get back together again. I think you should change the name of this story let say ” Hello My Lover “. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Great chapter, I am glad Henry is gone and Tina din’t listen to his bullshit. Looking forward to the next one.
Stupendous start! Looking forward to more!
This was very well written.I could feel for them both in this story.Looking forward to more.
I agree with az; your writing is refreshing – you’ve got these two talking and acting like adults.
Sorry I am so late in commenting, but just wanted to say…FANTASTIC!!! This is a really wonderful…strong start. Thanks!!
Awesome, if it could only be like that on the show.
THIS IS A GREAT START IN COMMUNCATING,BRING ON THE REST ITS EASY WERE TALKING ABOUT TIBETTE. LETS SEE WHAT HAPPENS.P.P.S.
Hey Bette…I can think of a better place….but first things first…they have to REALLY talk. At least Henry is not an obstacle anymore.
I believe that I am going to love this story as much as the other one your wrote. As a Tibetter it does my heart well when there are authors out there that put into words how my heart feels about those two. I appreciate the time that you take to bring those words to us.
great post! this is what they need a civil talk! well done girl
Brilliant bloody brilliant…i remember now I was scared, YES scared to read this because of the title,YOU DON’T MEAN IT DO YOU, don’t be an Ilene!!!
Just found this one along with the others and started reading it. And this story line on the show would have been a great thing to see. You are just so amazing at capturing what to me was the love that Bette and Tina seemed to have for one another before the show would have started. Loving this one too.