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Lucky in Love (Chapter 31)
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There was total silence in the middle of the noisy crowd. Tina heard the fear in Bette’s quiet voice as she told Winnie that she was scaring the children. Her world stopped for an instant and then she was all business.
“We’re on our way Bette,” she said, “You can do this. I know you can. You are not alone.”
She practically dragged the officer she’d been speaking with to Helena and Alice, whose security chief had just reached them. Lara and Shane got there just as he brought them up to speed.
“They are on the next street,” he said. “My men have closed access from both sides, but before we could move in, two of your friends approached Ms. Mann and her team.”
“Dana,” Alice said softly.
“I have an open line with one of them,” Tina said. “Bette’s trying to reason with Winnie right now.”
“That’s a bit of luck. Put it on speaker and come with me,” ordered the security man. “Officer, I have all of the paperwork regarding the custody order here. This is an attempted kidnapping, however I know your policy is to treat it as a domestic matter.”
Winnie’s smugness did not begin to outweigh her anger. She could not resist the opportunity to bring the high and mighty Bette Porter down a few pegs.
“Why should I listen to a word you say,” she spat. “After all this is a play directly from your book isn’t it?”
“My daughter was too young to be aware of what was happening,” Bette replied in the same calm voice, choosing not to take the bait. “Jun Ying and Wilson are very much aware of everything that’s going on, of every word you are saying.”
“Keep her talking Bette,” Tina said softly. “We can see you.”
Winnie didn’t notice as Bette moved so that Winnie and her man turned away from the SUVs. The drivers from both vehicles exited, leaving the children unattended.
“I don’t care,” Winnie’s voice began to creep higher. “Sooner or later they will know exactly what kind of woman Helena is and they will completely understand why I had to get them away from her.” Dana seized the opportunity and moved quickly to the back passenger door on the far side. “They are going to be just fine and so much happier without that controlling bitch in their lives. Why do you care so damn much anyway?”
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I can understand why Alice is reacting like this, she almost lost Dana to cancer and for her g/f to risk her life again in a situation where anything could have happened must seem devestating and crazy and almost selfish. she almost lost Dana once and for Dana to do that to her again…well yeah I get it, unless I totally don’t and am rambling as usual hmmm…. anyway awesome post :) PPS xx
I loved that, esp Dave cuddling up with unconditional love…I’m waiting for the update…maybe Hels should order her ‘security’ to deal permanently with Winnie!!!
I don’t know why, but I was a little surprised at how smoothly Bette handled the situation with Winnie. For some reason I didn’t expect her to stay so level-headed. I feel so sorry for Helena, the poor thing. It’s a good thing Lara’s there to catch her. And much as it pains me to say it, I can’t help but feel a little sorry for Winnie. She’s obviously got some problems that a single session with a therapist can’t cure. As for Alice’s feelings, I have to go with De_Leish on this one. I’m glad Dana’s not snapping back at her and is just letting her take her time in getting it out, which I’m sure she will eventually. This, as alwasy, is fucking fantastic and once again makes me realize that my writing can’t hold a candle to yours.
Another awesome chapter baby! I cant wait to see what happens with winnie! Dave was sooo cute this chapter,whats up with AL? Yep,im almost on my way there,LA here i come!! U rock,not me! PPS
Aww so cute! I hope Alice allows Dana to help her! Winne sux…buh bye…Yes the New Year has treated well thus far! Thank You for the update!
This story keeps getting better and better – How? How is that possible? Tell me. Yeah so I’m thinking of learning another language – you know so I stop sounding so damn repetitive when gushing about my wuv for this story.
Would never want to get rid of you – keep your wonderful writing coming. Another wonderful chapter in which you capture everyone so well, we can almost hear them and feel their emotions – wonderful!!
hey! I hope Alice will talk about it with Dana next time. I’d be pissed as well. A lot of action in this one! wow, loved it as usual, and especially the alice-sandwich at the end. ;)
I like that Bette was able to remain level headed when talking to Winnie. Bette & Tina are just HOT! And Winnie needs her head examined. Thanks for posting.
Okay, so this was another superb update. I’m really running out of adjectives to describe how freakin good this story is. I really love Helena and Lara together, and their whole dynamic is so well written. Not enough danish for my liking, but I know there are other characters involved too *sighs*. Can’t wait for the next installment, and I really hope you explore why Alice was so upset. I think it can bring them even closer if they discuss it.
Another great chapter, I love how you described Alice’s irritation it was spot on I’m anxious to see how Winnie keep wiggling through these legal ropes and how Helena’s going to finally react. I couldn’t really see Lara and Helena together but the more I read it the more I can see how good of a match they could be. I always mention this but your portrayal of Bette and Tina is so much more interesting than anything I’ve read on the site (or honestly seen on the screen) Keep up the great work I can’t wait to see how Dana pulls Alice out of her shell (or maybe Alice will do it by herself….hmmmm nah lol). Post soon BMB
I know I´m reapeating myself but your sharmen scenes are the best. I love them.