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Goodbye My Lover, Chapter 13
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“T”
“Yeah babe.”
“Did you mean all that stuff that you said about aching for me even though you hated me?”
“Of course.”
Bette began to sob. Tina gathered her close and let her cry. After the crying slowed and she heard Bette draw some even breaths she began her questioning.
“What’s going on, Babe?”
“I can’t believe that you still love me like that. I thought that I had destroyed that. When you left me the last time I was sure that it was over. I am so sorry that I hurt you. Do you think you can ever forgive me?”
Forgive, that was a tough one.
“I want to.” Tina answered simply.
“What gets in the way?”
Tina thought for awhile. “I know it has a lot to do with knowing that you betrayed me and let another, no two other women touch you. I think I am built differently than you Bette in how much our physical relationship means to me. You seem to deal with me being with Helena and Henry so much better than I dealt with Candace and now this nameless woman in NY. The only reason you are still in my bed at the moment is that there was only one other. If I had to deal with the dozens I imagined I don’t think I could get over it.”
“T, I hate that you have been with other people. I hate it. Maybe the only reason I don’t talk about it is because I don’t feel like I have the right. If I hadn’t slept with Candace you would not have been with Helena and certainly not Henry. As beautiful as the day we shared at the final sonogram with Angelica was I was furious that I could feel Helena having been with you. I wasn’t sure at times if you were making love with her or with me. I was determined that you only feel me at that moment. It was my mission.”
“Mission accomplished. I only felt and wanted you. God that was good. I reclaimed you that day you know.”
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Call the fire department…I have self combusted!
Damn that was so fucking hot and amazing, love it!
Wow if this get any hotter my PC will burn up. It is cold shower time. Did I say that this is hot. thanks so much for posting so soon PPS
Hello Kelika, I am a recent convert to your fabulous story. There is a geniune intelligence about your writing. These are two women who have done everything to destroy and hold onto their relationship. You convey the sense of love and hate that exists stimultaneously between them. It is a tightrope walk where every step, although fraught with danger and the chance of lossing it all, is a step closer to their final goal: home. Home can be a physical place however to all of us it is a state of mind and emotions which you demonstrate with the heart to heart conversations you so skillfully craft. There is so much hurt and mistrust between these characters and yet so much desire and want to move forward and be together. I do love your way of helping them get back on this road. It may be a rocky ride but the rewards are priceless. Thank you so much for this brilliant drama, A Fan.
Beautifully written Kelika. I must say, I’m running out of COLD water! I may have to raid the fridge:p But I love the way this story was woven and well, the imagery and mood are excellent. PPS!
i can’t believe how many post have you did in the last day! thanks! thaks so much! i like it so much this story, B&T look like they are doing great and maybe it won’t be a goodbye! fortunatly!
yeah I told you I hated that song!!! Iam so glad the story took over and its HULLO LOVER!!!! Go Tina!!! Pleaszzzzzz keep posting FAST!!!
this is just so incredible. pronouncing in this way the love between bette and tina is amazing.
I’ve enjoyed this story immensely. If Tina really felt this way it is so sad that she couldn’t talk to Bette in S3. Bette was so open to listening to her then and was begging for a connection. Tina could have saved them all of the post Josh and Henry drama. She damaged her marriage, friendships and almost her daughter’s life by not speaking her mind, so so sad.
Kelika, I just recently got caught up on your story by starting all the way back at “Babe”. I totally agree with robbeedee assusment of you writing and story development. Anything of TRUE VALUE is worth fighting and working hard for. I see that both B&T are really doing the HARD work of digging deep and working through the problems of the failings of their relationship. As lwsho2005 said it is sad that Tina didn’t realize this in S3, but what we all need to realize is that people and therefore relationships don’t come with “Instruction Manuals” and we are effected differently by the many different realtionships that we may become involved in. I think that this intensity of this relationship kind of knocked both B&T off kilter. It was something that neither of them where accustomed to or had previously experienced or will ever experience again with anyone else. I think that they are finally at apoint that they can both carish and value what they have. They are both HOME. PPS :o)
I have never heard the song kelika..so it could be either one and I wouldn’t know the difference. It is just a fabulous story and thank you for sharing it with us. PPS
Should not have read this first thing after getting into work, but I just could not resist. What’s amazing about this story is that you never faulter. Our girls have their moments, and then you reel them right back in. You’ve done such a fantastic job of having them compliment each other with the good and the bad. Love it “Claim Me Again, T”, awesome. Keep it up, because I so look forward to your updates. I know they can do it.
DAMN WOMEN!i need anotherCOLD SHOWER!YOU COULD THE THIS STORY HELLO/GOODBYE WE WOULDNT CARE AT THIS POINT…thanks for sharing it with us.p.p.s.
Hello Indeed!
WOW!!! THAT WAS OMFG!!!!HOT!!!! You write this story so very well. Thank you so much for this story. PPS
Loved that they talked to one another about the past. I wish the show had handled it this way.