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Goodbye My Lover, Chapter 13
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“Huh?”
“I reclaimed you that day. If I am correct it worked. You haven’t strayed from me since then.” Satisfied she had the brunette’s attention she went on.
“Bette, earlier you said it wasn’t you it’s us. There is a part of me that knows that’s true. ‘Us’ is incredible. I’ve never felt for another person what I feel for and with you. If you feel half as much for me as I do for you it is off the charts. You have given me reason to believe that you feel more than half as much as I feel for you.”
“I’m so glad that you know that T, I love you more than words could ever express. I’ve never known the love I have with you. I thank God for ever allowing me to have the time I have with you. I don’t ever want to take that for granted again.”
“Then don’t.”
Bette was quiet. She sighed as she became aware of just how good it felt to be lying beside Tina again. The demons that seemed to have been chasing her since she slept with Candace were quiet for a change. Helena, Henry, Josh flickered though her mind. It was just her and Tina. She looked up and met hazel eyes. Tina leaned forward and kissed her. It was the briefest of kisses yet it ignited a flame that had been dormant for to long.
“Claim me again T.”
“With pleasure.”
Tina knew exactly what Bette was asking. Bette so much in control in so many areas of her life would surrender every now and then to the blonde. They didn’t talk about it. It was an understanding between the two of them. Bette needed to be taken to that place where she was simply loved.
She felt Tina’s tongue warm and wet in her mouth. She shivered as she felt the hand slide lazily down her side. She felt her own wetness; she was wetter than she could remember. The hand moved back up and stroked her nipple. Tina’s tongue was halfway down her throat and still she couldn’t get enough. She arched upwards wanting, needing to feel Tina inside her. Tina held her with the kiss. Squeezing and pulling at the nipple that throbbed with the attention. The tongue in her ear was too much. The hand moving down her torso across her belly and spreading her legs, opening her, she was so vulnerable. Her entire being rested on that tongue and that hand.
“Open them wider for me babe.” Tina instructed watching as Bette did as she commanded. “That’s good babe, that’s real good. I love to see you spread open and waiting for me.”
“Tina, please.” She arched her head back and lifted her hips needing the touch of the one woman who could bring her here.
“Please what?” Tina looked into the ebony eyes of her lover. “Please what babe.”
“Please take me, please take me now. I need you so much.”
Unable to hold back Tina entered her.
“Oh.” Tina closed her eyes as she lost herself in the sensation of her super wet lover.
Tina’s hand locked into her hair and pulled her head back exposing her neck. Tina licked her throat as she fucked her with her fingers. She could hear her own wetness as Tina entered her over and over again.
“This is so fucking good.” Tina whispered into her ear. “You are so wet, so fucking wet. Oh I could lose myself in you.”
Bette lost all sense of time and space as she came. “T” she screamed as she was hurtled across the threshold. Instinctively she pulled the blonde to her and held on tight. There were no words to describe the place she had just been. Even now she felt as if she were floating somewhere among to clouds. If two souls could connect through a physical door hers was one Tina Kennard.
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Call the fire department…I have self combusted!
Damn that was so fucking hot and amazing, love it!
Wow if this get any hotter my PC will burn up. It is cold shower time. Did I say that this is hot. thanks so much for posting so soon PPS
Hello Kelika, I am a recent convert to your fabulous story. There is a geniune intelligence about your writing. These are two women who have done everything to destroy and hold onto their relationship. You convey the sense of love and hate that exists stimultaneously between them. It is a tightrope walk where every step, although fraught with danger and the chance of lossing it all, is a step closer to their final goal: home. Home can be a physical place however to all of us it is a state of mind and emotions which you demonstrate with the heart to heart conversations you so skillfully craft. There is so much hurt and mistrust between these characters and yet so much desire and want to move forward and be together. I do love your way of helping them get back on this road. It may be a rocky ride but the rewards are priceless. Thank you so much for this brilliant drama, A Fan.
Beautifully written Kelika. I must say, I’m running out of COLD water! I may have to raid the fridge:p But I love the way this story was woven and well, the imagery and mood are excellent. PPS!
i can’t believe how many post have you did in the last day! thanks! thaks so much! i like it so much this story, B&T look like they are doing great and maybe it won’t be a goodbye! fortunatly!
yeah I told you I hated that song!!! Iam so glad the story took over and its HULLO LOVER!!!! Go Tina!!! Pleaszzzzzz keep posting FAST!!!
this is just so incredible. pronouncing in this way the love between bette and tina is amazing.
I’ve enjoyed this story immensely. If Tina really felt this way it is so sad that she couldn’t talk to Bette in S3. Bette was so open to listening to her then and was begging for a connection. Tina could have saved them all of the post Josh and Henry drama. She damaged her marriage, friendships and almost her daughter’s life by not speaking her mind, so so sad.
Kelika, I just recently got caught up on your story by starting all the way back at “Babe”. I totally agree with robbeedee assusment of you writing and story development. Anything of TRUE VALUE is worth fighting and working hard for. I see that both B&T are really doing the HARD work of digging deep and working through the problems of the failings of their relationship. As lwsho2005 said it is sad that Tina didn’t realize this in S3, but what we all need to realize is that people and therefore relationships don’t come with “Instruction Manuals” and we are effected differently by the many different realtionships that we may become involved in. I think that this intensity of this relationship kind of knocked both B&T off kilter. It was something that neither of them where accustomed to or had previously experienced or will ever experience again with anyone else. I think that they are finally at apoint that they can both carish and value what they have. They are both HOME. PPS :o)
I have never heard the song kelika..so it could be either one and I wouldn’t know the difference. It is just a fabulous story and thank you for sharing it with us. PPS
Should not have read this first thing after getting into work, but I just could not resist. What’s amazing about this story is that you never faulter. Our girls have their moments, and then you reel them right back in. You’ve done such a fantastic job of having them compliment each other with the good and the bad. Love it “Claim Me Again, T”, awesome. Keep it up, because I so look forward to your updates. I know they can do it.
DAMN WOMEN!i need anotherCOLD SHOWER!YOU COULD THE THIS STORY HELLO/GOODBYE WE WOULDNT CARE AT THIS POINT…thanks for sharing it with us.p.p.s.
Hello Indeed!
WOW!!! THAT WAS OMFG!!!!HOT!!!! You write this story so very well. Thank you so much for this story. PPS
Loved that they talked to one another about the past. I wish the show had handled it this way.