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Love and Pride chp 34
LOVE AND PRIDE Chapter 34
Bette pulled Tina on top of her and gave her blonde lover a long passionate kiss
“I know that it takes a lot for you to allow me to do this- thank you. I just want to make you happy and if I thought that this would make you unhappy I would never suggest it. If you are uncomfortable with it I want you to tell me okay ?
“I know you are doing it for the best reasons in the world “
“I am doing it for the only reason in the world that I will ever do anything for you – love — pure and simple true love “
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Bette looked at the sleeping form of her partner with pleasure. They had shared a wonderful day in Edinburgh. Both loved the history of the cities they visited and Edinburgh was seeped in the past. They visited the castle and marvelled at the view and listened with fascination to the soft spoken castle guide who told them the history of the place.
After the castle they walked to Princes Street and strolled happily together. They talked excited about their experience and took in the sights. When they got back to their hotel room Tina fell asleep in their bed. Bette had got into bed beside her and laid just looking at her in awe. All Bette knew for certain was that she was in love with Tina and wanted to spend her life with the exciting blonde. She didn’t care about that they were so young – she had met her life partner and so what if they were both still 18 ?
Bette got up and strolled into the bathroom – she closed the door before turning the taps on and pouring as much bubble bath as possible into the huge tub.
The bath took ten minutes to fill up – Bette took the pack of tea light candles she had bought and put them on every surface she could – she lit them before shedding her clothes and turning the light off so the room was just lit by candles. The effect thrilled her and she knew that Tina would like it as well.
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Ally, I missed you and your stories so much! Glad you’re back, congrats on fixing the computer! Phew, now it’s time to read both chapters
I almost made a puddle of my own here at the office. YIKES! Time to run outside for some cold air. PPS!
ALLY!!!!!! yeah, you’ve made it back! loved both updates! this story is so sweet…. please no heavy drama in it! BTW what is wine gum?
welcome back ally! congrats on fixing your computer,you were missed,and WHATS WINE GUM? p.p.s.
oh yessss…. I absolutely missed this story! young, sexy and in love!
I have been checking for a dose of Allyism. Glad you got your computer fixed. Nice update.
I positively love Scotland, especially Edinburgh and the highlands
glad your back..
wonderful! Tina is doing great don’t freak out and is right becuase that is the way Bette live and if they will be together she needs to used to. Glad that you computer are repair because i am missing this lovely story
Did you heal the computer by laying hands on it. When mine gives me trouble I usually resort to something like incantations. Well, curses actually. Geez, ally, you’ve pulled all the Brit stops on this one: wine gum(?), pissed as a newt(?), talk cobblers(?). And to think 2 of these phrases were uttered by Americans. How long have they been there? Well, in any case, we’re glad to have you back here, where ever that might be.
Hey Ally – I did wonder where you were, glad it was “only” computer problems :o)) Must admit I’ve missed your stories a great deal and what a comeback this was….WOW!!!! They’re so cute together.
Wow, amazing, wonderful Loved it Welcome back
Hey Ally, I’m still catching up on my reading, even having to go backwards BUt ANYWAYZ LOVE THIS YOUNG COUPLE!!!
Well i Knew better then to read your NC-17 stuff at work…but i did…and now…you own me a new chair!! LOL Very well written and Welcome back. I love this story!!
I know a Newt is like a salamander {I think it is} but what is wine gum??? That was some Hot bath, WOW. now we all need the shower, Thanks for posting.
Damn that was hot and love it, they are cute and sweet, love them!
Ally, That was terrific; all passion and tenderness as Bette and Tina fall deeper other one another’s spell. There is such a sense of love and respect in your words. These gals sare enough to share their most intimate thoughts and desires. There may be rough times ahead as they try to sort out Helena’s jealousy and Tina’s parental discord but doing it together is what matters. Perfection in words! Thank you so much for returning to this awesome adventure. Your Loyal Fan.
Wow, great update! Those two are sure so cute.
lol@funnyone. glad your back and the “sickness” has left your computer. thanks.
1st brb