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Lucky in Love (Chapter 33)
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As noises go, it wasn’t particularly loud. Under the circumstances, however, Shane closing the door to the guestroom sounded like canon fire, both to her and to Alice, whose head lifted from the pillow, but whose eyes remained tightly closed against the mid-morning sun. Her hands involuntarily traveled from her ears to her eyes as she struggled to negotiate her way to a fully conscious state. She became aware of the warmth of a body stretched nearly the full length of her right side and delicately peeked out to see Dave’s worried face resting on her shoulder. His ears perked up and his deep brown eyes met hers with a look of loving concern.
“Yeah,” she hoarsely, “I’m up.” She rubbed Dave’s ears before resting her hand along his soft back. “Sort of.”
The sounds of dishes clattering and the aroma of coffee lured Alice from the warmth and comfort of her bed. She was a little surprised to discover that she was completely nude and couldn’t quite place how that had happened. Al felt off but not really hung-over. She was starving. Her light and sound sensitivity had more to do with her headache. While she was a little foggy, Alice didn’t really remember drinking all that much, certainly not in comparison to Shane. She pondered all of this as she splashed some water on her face and pulled her hair into a loose ponytail. When she was ready, Dave led the way, tossing an occasional glance over his shoulder, as she made her way towards the kitchen. Shane sat at the table, sunglasses on, looking like death warmed over, an untouched glass of milk next to her triple shot espresso.
“I don’t care if you feel like it or not,” Carmen said from the counter where she was slicing a bagel, “you’re going to get this in your stomach and we’ll wait to see what happens before we go.”
Shane grumbled something that was intelligible only Carmen who clucked back at her. Dana slipped Dave a treat and met Alice’s gaze with a soft smile. Only then did the missing pieces of the night before come flooding back. Alice’s eyes widened slightly as she recalled passing out at the most inopportune time. She really had tried to stay with Dana, but her own pleasure had wiped her out. Dana’s smile grew as she approached Alice and kissed her.
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Awww so cute :D I’m def left happy with that last scene. Glasses and Dave, what more could a danish fan ask for from you? Thanks again x
Yay! Fanfrickindangotastic it is then. I heart intense and lusty Danish. I’ve shared my ridiculous jig and have now coupled that with a slaphappy grin.
okay…I was a little worried last chappy on what might be bothering Alice. I was hoping there was no tremendous ‘let’s have a break’ kind of thoughts going through her head. I shouldn’t have worried, though cause I know you will keep Danish going strong! Good update…as always I’m amazed at how you keep so many stories sailing along so smoothly!
*happy sigh* I guess this kind of distraction is fine with me. ;) But talking is good too, and it’s nice to see the start of it from Alice and Shane as well. Great as always!
You never disappoint – another awesome chapter to keep up enthralled and with a happy Danish thrown in. Thanks for your wonderful efforts and keep it coming please.
Man Sammysgirl I wish I could see all this played out on the big screen…Winnie needs to vanish
Ok wow I didn’t understand Alice’s anger until now but I completely get it and its so true to character. This whole story rocks my fucking socks off (I don’t know if I’ve said that before) I stared reading it last night but the lovely half gallon of NyQuil that was coarsing through my body made it hard to hold my eyelids open to read. I can sense something big behind this Winne situation and I’m on pins and needles trying to wait and not beg you to tell me. Post soon I don’t think I can wait much longer BMB
Winnie the evil scourge of the universe. I can’t wait for her day to come! Nice balance for everyone this chapter, even Shane got more vocal. And what the heck is going on with Jenny? I suppose that answer will come soon enough, just keep the Danish coming and we’re all good here! Very Nice update!!!
I just did my happy dance!!!!
Will Winnie never stop interfering in the lives of Our Gang? Will her nefarious meddling ever cease? *shakes fist* Damn you, vile woman! (â„¢&© S.G. Griffin) Actually… I hope it doesn’t. It’s much more fun seeing Winnie seething with rage as she gets thwarted at every turn, the evil cow. On another note, I can understand Shane’s sadness at everyone’s lives moving on. I don’t think her friends are going to leave her out or behind, though. And besides, she has Carmen. Great chapter, SG, post soon!
Wow! That was amazing…the deep bond Al & Dana share is written so freakin well it literally jumps off the page when you’re reading it. Hmmm, I’m not exactly sure what I mean by that, but I’m running out of ways to construe how excellent you write this couple. Anyway, as for the dog thing, yeah dog’s lose interest relatively quickly when it comes to that stuff. It’s actually our cat that we have to worry about, she’s all nosy and stuff. LOL, too much info, huh? Alright, I’m ending this rant.
I absolutely love the way you write all the characters. I finally caught up with this story, and I have to say, it was worth it. I can’t wait for the next chapter.
Wow just love the ending! “I wasn’t really alive until I fell in love with you.” That made me mist my eyes. I love this story baby and you write it so freaking well. Glad Alice finally opened up to Dana,communacation is what ya need in a soilid relationship! 2 more W2s and im so gone from this sh*tty town and off to sunny LA! Cant wait! Thanks again for the wonderful update and cant wait for you to post again! Thanks for being such a gr8 writer!
Yet another flawless installment. You make me jealous, you know that? I feel sorry for Shane, but it’s good that she’s at least willing to talk about it. I’m glad Alice was able to articulate what she was feeling, and Winnie needs to stay locked away. I don’t know how she could ever legally get out anyway after an assault and an attempted kidnapping. As I said, flawless. Still love this story.
Another brilliant fanfic, thank you for posting, I read you are ill- get well soon! (Btw yes I am from MB I did change my name, will prob have to change it on here as well soon)
Okay where do I begin…I just love this story…I love Dana and Alice…they are just adorable,sexy,fun,loving and so on…You really have managed to write thier characters very well, and develop them, but also make them your own…Yes I can see how Dave writes himself…I love Dave…Keep Up The Great Writing…