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You (Part the Twenty-Fourth)
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Dana wound up being slightly under the weather for the next few days, although she assured Alice that it had far more to do with taking on way too much in one day than with any specific activity she’d undertaken during. This didn’t do much to alleviate Alice’s guilt, but Dana didn’t waver in the declaration, so she decided not to fight.
Alice played mother hen while Dana was ill, watching over her all the time and making sure she was taking her medication and her temperature, and constantly asking how she was feeling and if there was anything she could do. She took to driving Dana to the condo on a daily basis to use the air filtration thing, and it seemed to do her some good, so she kept doing that on top of everything else. Dana wound up getting sick of all this after a day or so, but since she was feeling way too sick to move much from Alice’s bed there wasn’t a whole lot she could do about her particular state of affairs. Finally, during one of her less nauseous moments she managed to call Helena and begged her to take Alice someplace just so she could have a tiny bit of peace.
Helena laughingly agreed, and without either of them saying a word to Alice, she rang the buzzer about an hour after Dana’s call. Without waiting for Alice to agree, Helena just dragged her out to the Aston Martin by the arm as Dana called out a tired "Thank you." Once they were gone, Dana called Shane and asked her to come over in a couple of hours after work. When that was done, she sighed, and after swallowing some more pills and drinking some of the orange juice Alice had left on the nightstand, she was finally able to get some real sleep.
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Alice grumbled all the way to the restaurant, but once they’d taken seats at a table in the back of the little sandwich shop, she calmed down a little and realized how good it was to be out of the house. She felt a little bad for feeling that way, but Helena just shrugged.
"You needed to get out. You were driving Dana crazy, not to mention yourself. You’ve got to have a life outside of Dana or you’re going to wind up exactly where you were before. That’s where I come in, and the rest of your friends too. You have to stop shutting us out of your life. You’ve got this amazing thing going on with Dana, but we all miss you and want to see you." She smiled and reached across the table to take Alice’s hand.
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Wonderful post. I love all the good things that happened to our girls. PPS.
I’m off doing a little happy dance. lol I haven’t been on mediablvd for a while. I’ll have to stop by there to see if I can get more info about what you were saying about Erin.
Yeah I was over then moon about Dana getting some good news, I think Alice is run down abit with looking after Dana all the time too and maybe Dana could make just one night all about Alice….not sex or anything like that….oh well yes sex but you know what I mean?? I hope you do!! This was a great up date PPS
First off, I LOVED the Helena quoting Kramer about the Junior Mints. Great ep. Also great: Spaceballs. I’m restraining myself from inserting quotes here, but I’ll spare you (and myself). Anyway, I knew there’d be good news, Alice is back by Dana’s side so all must be right with the world, right? Right.
Just keeps getting better and better :)
Great update, loved the bits with Al and Helena watching Spaceballs, and Dana and Shane having a talk about Carmen. And I’m glad Dana got good news at her appointment. Can’t wait for your next chapter, cheers.
excellent as always!what an amazing 24 hours! yesterday i find out i will finally meet Erin at L3 and then my favourite story is updated this morning! Loving your work Muted :)
aww thank you for danish love! i really like the friendship between Dana&Shane, though i cant say the same thing about Helena and Alice lol.. knowing that Helena has a thing for Alice! i have a nagging feeling that some time in the future u are gonna throw that in.. i lovee the way you portray ’em. oh and i’m really glad i dont have to hate Lara!!! post soon babe, you’re doing great.
Hey MT, great chapter! I like the fact that they are venturing into reclaiming their identities with their friends. Spaceballs, huh? lol. Also glad to see that Lara has not been turned into the anti-Christ! And a little shot of Howie, “hi lesbo’s”. lmao Keep up the great writing, whether you belive it or not, it’s really good!!!!!!!
I’m so happy that Dana got some good news.Can’t wait for more.
Yay you posted just like you said you would! I’m so glad Dana’s results turned out positive :) and I really loved that you had Dana and Shane talking so naturally, I always thought they had some sort of connection that the rest didn’t. I’m glad the smut was for me and luvthaterin, I’m hoping there’s some more planned in the next chapter though :D Awesome post hun and you should listen to your comments because it is amazing writing ok! xx PPS
fan-f*cking-tastic! Soooo happy Dana got good news, please make it continue :)
Aww – I flove Dana/Shane moments – uber sweetness. See! that’s how to wake Alice – sooo deliciously wicked:)
Oh oh I love riddles! Let me think…if Dana doesn’t propose who will? Hmm, that’s a hard one to crack. I get back on you once I figured it out! :P But serioulsy, thanks for giving me some insight to the future of those two. I can’t wait for that to happen!:D lol@Helena pulling Alice out of the appartement. Although Alice’s clinginess is still present, I’m glad it’s not that big of an issue anymore (as it probably was between S2 and S3 a.k.a. IC’s world hence the break-up…). I’m glad Dana is accepting that part of Alice more and more and it’s good to see their friends are addressing Alice on that kind of behaviour. And the last part was hot, but it also showed the intimate connection they have on a deeper level.
Love it, love it and guess what…love it?! Yeah! Yay on the good news. lol, I actually forgot about the cards, until you mentioned it. You don’t have to use that one, I was just being silly and – kinda – kidding. ;)Can’t wait for the next one.You know, reading all this awesome stories from you and some fellow danish writers like sammysgirl and so many more, makes me really envy your gf’s, since all these stories and the way you tell them and describe danish so lovingly and romantic, makes me believe you are all one of the special romantic kind. lol.
Awesome Update!!! “I Need You”…Very powerful statement..I love them…I love how you are writing them…BTW you may be obsessed writing “You”, but I am totally obsessed reading “You”…Once again BRAVO…Keep Up The Great Work! PPS