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    Change Part 2

    MK and Carmen sat and looked around at their once again destroyed place. 

     

    MK:  “I just can’t seem to keep this place together.”

     

    Carmen chuckled a little.  They both sat pensive in the living room on opposite couches in silence for a while.

     

    Carmen:  “I spoke to her.”

     

    MK:  “How’d it go?”

     

    Carmen:  “Brief.”

     

    MK:  “Good.”

     

    Carmen:  “You?”

     

    MK:  “Yeah.  Almost got her ass kicked.”

     

    Carmen:  “Almost?”

     

    MK:  “Stopped it.”

     

    Carmen nodded.  Of course she did.  More silence.

     

    Carmen:  “She looked really good.”

     

    MK:  “Tell me about….Wait no.  Stop it.”

     

    Carmen smiled.

     

    Carmen:  “Sorry.”

     

    MK:  “We’re supposed to be strong here.”

     

    Carmen:  “I know but its so hard seeing her all the time.”

     

    MK:  “I know what you mean.  Maybe me coming back wasn’t such a good idea.”

     

    Carmen looked at MK hurt.

     

    Carmen:  “Oh thanks.”

     

    MK:  “No, I’m sorry.  You know what I mean though.”

     

    Carmen:  “Yeah I guess I do.”

    Silence.

     

    Carmen:  “I’m glad you did.”

     

    MK looked across at her.

     

    MK:  “Me too.”

     

    They both smiled at each other a little bit.

     

    MK:  “Should we get cleaning?”

     

    Carmen groaned.

     

    Carmen:  “Awww Mickey can’t we hire someone to do it.”

     

    MK:  “Oh thank you, yes we can.”

     

    MK got up and walked around the couch.

     

    MK:  “Who’s the rich girl now?”

     

    She took off down the hall with Carmen right on her heels.

     

    The next day a few of the ladies met at the Planet mostly to recoup after the party.  Shane grabbed her double shot and wordlessly sat down as Alice looked on.

     

    Alice:  “You’re not going to say anything to me?”

     

    Shane:  “Why should I?”

     

    Alice:  “Shane I said I was sorry.”

     

    Shane:  “That still doesn’t change how I feel.”

     

    Alice looked down.

     

    Alice:  “Well I’ll say it again I’m sorry and I didn’t mean to embarrass you or Bette.  I was trying to help.”

     

    Shane:  “Well thank you but I didn’t ask for your help.  So when it comes to that please just leave it alone.”

     

    Alice nodded that she understood.

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    1. Hey Vibes, thanks for the update. Are you going to put Bette and MK, Shane and Carmen out of their collective misery soon? I’m loving this story just as much as all of your others. PPS.

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