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    Change Part 2

     

    Carmen:  “That’s cool.”

     

    MK turned around and faced her.

     

    MK:  “Ok how bout this one?”

    Carmen:  “It’s fine.  Its just like the last 3 you tried on.”

     

    MK:  “You’re no help.”

     

    Carmen:  “It’s just work.  What’s the big deal?”

     

    MK:  “No deal.  It’s just my first day back.  I want to look as good as possible.”

     

    Carmen:  “Mm hm?”

     

    MK:  “I’m serious.”

     

    Carmen:  “Ok. If you say so.”

     

    MK looked at her and turned her head to the side.

     

    Carmen:  “I didn’t say anything.  Can we go?”

     

    MK:  “Um yeah I guess.  Just let me fix my hair.”

     

    Carmen got up off the bed and stepped behind her.

     

    Carmen:  “Your hair is fine.  You look beautiful…as always.”

     

    They locked eyes through the mirror.  MK looked at her with her serious eyes.

     

    MK:  “Ok.  Let’s go.”

     

    Carmen nodded silently and headed for the door as MK watched her.

     

    Just as Kit had hoped MK brought a new life to the Planet once more.  The women were once again trying to get a stab at her and a few for the first time.  That coupled with Carmen’s DJ skills that were going to now be a more regular staple made Kit confident that she had a great combo on her hands.  Add Lara’s great chef abilities by day and she had an almost 24 hour money making machine.  It breathed a new air into her knowing she would more then likely be out the red soon.

     

    MK did her show and it seemed as if she picked up a few tricks on her travels.  She had a bunch of new exotic drinks that Kit knew she’d have to add to the menu asap.  All the ladies showed up and grabbed a table.

     

    Jenny:  “It’s packed in here tonight.”

     

    Alice:  “Wow.  I’ve never even seen half these women.”

     

    Max:  “Where’d they all come from all of a sudden?”

     

    Bette:  “Its Mekayla.  She brings in the business.”

     

    She looked over to the bar as MK was flirting with a red head in a skimpy outfit.  She remembered when MK didn’t even look at another woman besides her.  As she thought back to it MK never seemed to be interested in any woman when Bette was around.  She thought about the eye contact she and MK had made the first time she roared into town on her bike.  MK had made up her mind that Bette was who she wanted from first sight and she did everything she could to get her.  She was sure how she felt about Bette the moment she laid eyes on her.  It hurt Bette even more to make this realization.  Love at first sight is a rare occurrence yet she had experienced it and had thrown it away.  Suddenly she needed a drink.  She approached the bar and waited her turn.  MK tried her hardest to avoid her but she had to serve her and really really deep down she wanted to.

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    1. Hey Vibes, thanks for the update. Are you going to put Bette and MK, Shane and Carmen out of their collective misery soon? I’m loving this story just as much as all of your others. PPS.

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