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    Coming up for air – part twenty nine

    Story written on February 18, 2007 by anker.
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    … Tina’s Top Twenty…

    Coming up for air – part twenty nine

    Bette stopped just inside the bedroom. She took one look at the bed and knew she had to change the linen before they went any further.
    “T…. do you mind if I fix up the bed… ? I wanted to do it when I got home, but I fell asleep…” Bette said. On one hand she hated to stall what was about to take place, but on the other hand she wanted everything to be just right for her and Tina.
    Tina let out a quiet laugh, “no, I don’t mind… you always were my little control freak… do what you need to do. I can explain the set up of my list while I watch you work… how is that?”
    “That’ll be just fine…” Bette said, giving Tina a chaste kiss before she turned to the bed.

    Tina sat back on the chaiselong, watching Bette with a playful smile on her face. “Well, this corresponds nicely with number ten on your list, Bette… I know I’m feeling the anticipation of you right this moment…” Tina giggled.
    “Is that a point on your list too, T?” Bette smiled as she looked up at Tina.
    “…hmmm…. it could be…. but I’ll try to refrain from making too many repetitions… so no, not this time around…”
    “Really? I can think of a few points on my list, I’d hate to see you leave out…” Bette chuckled.
    “Well… you’ll just have to wait and see what I’ve come up with…”

    Bette stopped what she was doing and looked at Tina with a lopsided smiled, “you just love having all the control… don’t you…?”
    “… sometimes…I do…. but baby, I’ll make sure you’ll love it too…” Tina growled as she got up from the chaiselong and sauntered across the floor to where Bette was standing with a crisp white sheet in her hand.
    “Just to keep you on your toes…I will give you the points on my list in random order… They are interchangeable, you know… depending on what kind of day it is… what you’re wearing… my mood…. is that okay?” Tina asked as she pulled the sheet from Bette’s hands.
    Bette felt her heart rate go up at the look in Tina’s eyes. It was pure unadulterated lust. She swallowed and nodded.

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    1. jp22 said it perfectly about you having “a gift for bringing the heat and then combining it with real emotions”. I would just like to say to you my friend that not only did you give me my double fix, but with this chapter I overdosed. LOL! anker, I just love your writing talent and will never get enough of it. You paint a picture of love with words that is just so beautiful. Saying Thank You doesn’t even seem adequate.

    2. Oh Anker…That was awesome and the top 20 isn’t even over yet! I knew Bette couldn’t hold out. I don’t think many of us would of!!!Favorite line…”OH LORD” FLMAO. Thanks for making it funny and sensual.You are just sooooooo talented. Sorry Anker, but you f*cken rock……xoxo

    4. i agree with azmama….what a hell of a fun way to count to 20…..mmmm….i love this fic….gosh, i wish i were the one doin the count down with Bette…..lol……dont we all though??? guess i should just stand in line eh???….post again soon…..this was amazingly erotic……i loved it…..best yet!!! 50 stars from me!!!***

    11. Awesome list. The way that Bette says Tina then smiles and then adds that wink sends chills that run up and down my spine. God I think just being in the same room would be on least on my list somewhere.

    12. Uh…. top twenty? I know you said we missef some. Maybe you should start at twenty and count down again???? What a soulful, intimate chpater! Hope you had fun on your night out and it ended as well as this post. Thanks for writing!

    13. Oh….so worth the wait!!! LOL! You definately did not disappoint. I loved how Tina gave Bette the list out of order. Very HOT! But then you know that. Don’t you, Anker? **wink, wink** You have a wickedly, sexy imagination and then to take that and put it into these chapters is just….WOW! Okay, enough with the compliments**are you blushing,yet?**Bring on the rest of the LIST! I’m as “insatiable” as Bette when it comes to this story. Post soon.

    18. “…. but I’ll try to refrain from making too many repetitions…” So does this mean that I can get a top 30 with both B&T together….ok ok (getting, well trying to get my mind out of the gutter I can dream can I:)). Thx Anker

    22. Fuck you just melted my laptop!!! That was beyond hot and sexy, no words seems amazing and wonderful enough to describe this post and your writing in generel….WOW!!! Great they talked in the last post, I love a vulnerable Bette. And these lists, you’re killing me, but what a nice way to go LOL. BTW I’m waiting for that email you know LOL, just kidding :o)) Post soon, I can’t wait…

    26. I knew she could top Bette… Great gads, that top 20, that Tina didn’t even finish, was so… Torrid? Scorching? Sultry? Nuclear? Solar? You know what I’m getting at, anker. You’ve got a gift for bringing the heat, and then combining it with real emotion. I loved the chapter, thanks for posting it so soon after the last one. Cheers, anker

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