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    Coming up for air – part twenty nine

    Story written on February 18, 2007 by anker.
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    … Tina’s Top Twenty…

    “ …hmmmm…. I think I’ll start with number twelve on my list… Number twelve is looking at you,” Tina said and took a step back so she could take a good look at Bette from head to toe.
    “From the very first time I laid eyes on you… I wanted to look harder… I wanted more… more time to take in all the exquisite details…. I missed being able to look at the most beautiful creature I’ll ever see… and that baby, is you.”
    Tina had held Bette’s gaze while she talked, but with a smile she broke the eyes contact and took another step back. “Twirl for me, babe…” Tina whispered, knowing she was walking thin line.
    Bette let out a throaty chuckle and with a smile and an elegant move, she twirled for Tina.
    “…. mmm, look at that….” Tina breathed, “I don’t know what I missed the most: looking at you, like now, when you are completely aware that I’m taking you in… that I’m committing the image of you to the very depths of my memory… or when you don’t know that I’m watching… when I get to sit back and watch the way you move… the curves of your body… and all along I know that you belong to me…. Looking at you never ceases to amaze me, baby….” Tina said, hoping Bette knew, she was speaking the truth.

    Tina stepped up close to Bette again. She looked her straight in the eyes. “Do you know what number twelve does to me…? Please tell me you know…”
    “… I know, T… you’re the only one I’ve ever wanted to look at me like that….” Bette whispered as she leant forward and kissed Tina. Only their lips touched as slow, deep kisses followed.

    Tina let go of Bette lips, resting her forehead against Bette’s. “Number nineteen!” she giggled. Bette moaned a frustrated sound against Tina’s lips.
    “Oh, baby…. you told me, you could last through all twenty points on my list… reach inside yourself and hold on to that stamina you’ve been bragging about…. please….”
    “… I’d rather have you reach inside me….”
    “… nnnn, all in good time…” Tina smiled at Bette’s impatience.

    “Number nineteen… is this….” Tina said and took Bette right hand. She raised the hand to her lips. She bit down on the fleshy part of Bette’s fingertip. She released and sucked the fingertip into the warm, moist hollow of her mouth. Bette watched as Tina let her teeth rake down the digit, only to let the smoothness of her tongue take over. She watched as a buzzing sensation started deep inside her stomach, sending shots of pleasure down her thighs and up her chest. Bette knew she was blushing at the sight of Tina teasing her fingertips with her tongue.

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    1. jp22 said it perfectly about you having “a gift for bringing the heat and then combining it with real emotions”. I would just like to say to you my friend that not only did you give me my double fix, but with this chapter I overdosed. LOL! anker, I just love your writing talent and will never get enough of it. You paint a picture of love with words that is just so beautiful. Saying Thank You doesn’t even seem adequate.

    2. Oh Anker…That was awesome and the top 20 isn’t even over yet! I knew Bette couldn’t hold out. I don’t think many of us would of!!!Favorite line…”OH LORD” FLMAO. Thanks for making it funny and sensual.You are just sooooooo talented. Sorry Anker, but you f*cken rock……xoxo

    4. i agree with azmama….what a hell of a fun way to count to 20…..mmmm….i love this fic….gosh, i wish i were the one doin the count down with Bette…..lol……dont we all though??? guess i should just stand in line eh???….post again soon…..this was amazingly erotic……i loved it…..best yet!!! 50 stars from me!!!***

    11. Awesome list. The way that Bette says Tina then smiles and then adds that wink sends chills that run up and down my spine. God I think just being in the same room would be on least on my list somewhere.

    12. Uh…. top twenty? I know you said we missef some. Maybe you should start at twenty and count down again???? What a soulful, intimate chpater! Hope you had fun on your night out and it ended as well as this post. Thanks for writing!

    13. Oh….so worth the wait!!! LOL! You definately did not disappoint. I loved how Tina gave Bette the list out of order. Very HOT! But then you know that. Don’t you, Anker? **wink, wink** You have a wickedly, sexy imagination and then to take that and put it into these chapters is just….WOW! Okay, enough with the compliments**are you blushing,yet?**Bring on the rest of the LIST! I’m as “insatiable” as Bette when it comes to this story. Post soon.

    18. “…. but I’ll try to refrain from making too many repetitions…” So does this mean that I can get a top 30 with both B&T together….ok ok (getting, well trying to get my mind out of the gutter I can dream can I:)). Thx Anker

    22. Fuck you just melted my laptop!!! That was beyond hot and sexy, no words seems amazing and wonderful enough to describe this post and your writing in generel….WOW!!! Great they talked in the last post, I love a vulnerable Bette. And these lists, you’re killing me, but what a nice way to go LOL. BTW I’m waiting for that email you know LOL, just kidding :o)) Post soon, I can’t wait…

    26. I knew she could top Bette… Great gads, that top 20, that Tina didn’t even finish, was so… Torrid? Scorching? Sultry? Nuclear? Solar? You know what I’m getting at, anker. You’ve got a gift for bringing the heat, and then combining it with real emotion. I loved the chapter, thanks for posting it so soon after the last one. Cheers, anker

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