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The Real Deal Ch 7
Ch 7
WAX – Friday night
The music is pumping loud inside Wax. The gang is here.
Papi arrives and goes over to say hi to the gang.
“Hi Alice, Vanilla, Jenny, Helena.”
“Hey Chocolate.” I retaliate every now and then when she calls me ‘Vanilla’. Tonight I am certainly not in a good mood.
“What’s up man? Did someone die? You all look so miserable?” Papi asks.
“Shane talked to Carmen this afternoon? She has been pretty quiet since.” Alice blurs out.
“Hey Al, do you have to tell everyone?”
“You are amongst friends now.” Jenny said.
“What do you expect? The usual lesbian drama, I apologized, she cried, we hugged, life moves on as usual. I am with Paige, she is still with Cat. Everyone is happy.” I lay it all out for them.
“Sounds like you are in deep shit to me, Vanilla.” Papi says.
“What do you know about love?” I challenge her. She is annoying the hell out of me.
”More than you!” I really want to wipe that smirk off her face.
I take a deep breath, I raise my hand, wanting to tell her to fuck off but Paige appears next to me suddenly and pulls me away.
“Enough.” She says. “I don’t know what that was about but it was unlike the Shane that I know.”
“There is a lot about me that you don’t know and you probably don’t want to.” I am still fuming.
“Fuck you.” She says and starts walking away.
Shit, I am doing it again. I am pushing her away. Why do I feel like déjà vu? I run after her and manage to catch her arm before she open the car door.
“Wait, wait. Look, I am sorry. It was a fuck up thing to say.” I apologize for the second time today.
She looks back… I can see that she is contemplating whether to accept it or not.
“Do you want to know what I do when I am upset?” She asks.
I shake my head.
“Get in the car.” She orders me like a child. I have no choice but to obey.
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(35 votes, average: 3.40 out of 5)
Hey Catseye, I missed my 1st comment spot…work intervened, but I’m loving this story. So, I’ll forgive the cliff-hanger as long as you update us soon. I can understand why they are both so wary, because Carmen doesn’t trust Shane not to hurt her again and Shane doesn’t trust herself not to hurt Carmen again. I like Cat but I’m not at all into Paige. So if it isn’t Carmen for Shane (sob, sob) find her another girl please. Thanks. PPS.
ok wow, omg stressful or what wow. this is a great fic but yes you are evil. omg they are so still in love and its actually painful to read them dancing around it….i love your writing but please please let them find there way back soon i dont knwo how much more i can take lol. great post pps
omg.. dude you can’t leave me hanging like this.. love your story.. also im wondering did could shane have pushed her out of the way in time and gotten hit herself.. then she would have kept her promise.. just thinking.. anyways great update and please post soon..:p
Can’t wait for my girls to get TOGETHER! They will, right??? Soon??
IM LIKING THIS, PPS !!! SHARMEN 4EVER!!!! I MISS SARAH IN TLW SO MUCH :'(
I like this please keep on thanks
I like this please keep on thanks
I’m frustrated. But I like your story. Don’t stop!
Please don’t keep me hanging too long!!!!
cliffhanger?!