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Masked Feelings CH 68 Blindsided
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Dana – Al? Did you hear me?
Alice – Yeah.
Dana – Yeah, you heard me or is that your answer?
Alice – I heard you.
Dana – Oh…
Dana pulled back, feeling like such an ass for asking. She knew it was risky, but she was actually hoping Alice would say yes. Dana had decided this was what she wanted to do since Alice said that she wouldn’t leave her. Was she wrong in assuming that she meant that Alice wanted to be with her… to make a commitment?
Dana – I guess if you wanted to marry me, I would’ve heard the answer by now.
Alice – Dana… you know that I love you, but this doesn’t feel right.
Dana – Getting married to me doesn’t feel right?
Alice – No, that’s not what I meant. I know that you love me, but I don’t think that is what’s pushing you to ask me to marry you. I’m not going to presume what is going on in your head, but this feels rushed. A couple days ago, we were ready to walk away from each other.
Dana – You were the one to walk away, Alice. I never wanted you to leave.
Alice – Communication hasn’t been our strong point, at least not since we’ve become more then best friends.
Dana – What are you saying, Al? You want to go back? I’m not sure I can go back to being just friends with you.
Alice – Sometimes I wonder if you know me at all.
Dana – What is that supposed to mean?
Alice – Dana, don’t get defensive.
Dana – How am I supposed to act when you say something like that? I know you… better then anyone else.
Alice – Then you must also know that I might be saying no to your proposal. I know you too Dana, maybe enough to know that this about your fears. I just want you to admit what this is really about.
Dana – Fears?
Alice – I know you want us to be together, but don’t take away from something as huge as a marriage proposal because you’re scared of losing me.
Dana – But I do want you to spend the rest of your life with me….
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I don’t even know how to comment on this update. I’m just not in the right head space. It truly was wonderful, although you were right, not nearly enough sex for my taste. I’m have to give a more thorough review in a day or so. You did well darlin’.
Wow, what a chapter! You really surprise me each time and that’s not easy. I’m sure you already have ideas for your next installment which I’ll be awaiting intently. You don’t think I’ll back off that easily when it comes to Dana, huh? Dream on, darlin’! If I were in the army I would consider that kind of order. But I couldn’t promise that I would also act on it:-) I’m still waiting for her to ask me, lol. Liked the fact that Alice isn’t jumping head over heels into that kind of commitment. They need to talkand clear whatever there is that’s standing in their way. Kristen won’t be much of a danger for the both of them unless Dana thinks withher…ehhhhhhmmmmmm, you know what I mean, lol. Now that you compare Andrea to a devil I love her even more. Let’s see what she comes up with. Kristen being pregnant wasn’t what I expected from the beginning. I truly thought she was having a flu. I hope, she and Derek work things out at the very end. It was a pretty awkward situation for Kristen to find Alice in Dana’s house. No time alone with Dana. Maybe it’s better this way. Who knows what would happen?The sex betweeen Dana and Alice was great! Just blame Alice forhaving lame excuses as for being tired. Actually, that’s my part, lol. Roxy was my favorite in this installment. The talk with Tony was terrific and I felt even more in love with her if that’s possible. When she arrived at the bar and talked to Jack I wasn’t sure if she would pull it all through. But yay, she did! Poor guy, yeah…Please, don’t think I’m crazy but I had actually more pity with Roxy than with Jack. She definitely needs some help, this stubborn chick. But I completely understand why she reacted this way. Thanks for showing this other side of her! Just hope, she doesn’t have this kind of blackout when she has another argument with Dana. What’s left to say about David? I’m speechless. I thought he would care a bit more about his family. Maybe I should blame his parents for having a talk while their son was in the house? Yeah, totaly their fault, lol. And yes, I still believe that Lara’s alive:-) I’m not convinced that she’s dead yet. Now you’ve got two possibilities: either you prove me wrong or you declare that I have a good nose, lol. I didn’t know I had to push you with your writing, darlin’. But you know, I’m always guilty at some point, lol. I’ll reconsider this:-) You have all my respect! Looking forward to your next post. Till then I stay tuned:-) You’re brillant! Keep up that excellent work of yours, geronimo!
Well because of your update I was up passed my bedtime and was tired all day! Luckily I didn’t have any bad dreams as a result of reading your thriller. So… David is a pretty bad dude, a real f*cker! It was like nothing to him to kill his folks! I enjoyed Kristen’s little moment. She’s such a Lez! ‘If she’s here I’m leaving’, what’s that crap? She’s the one with the crush and the one who was way out of line and making unwanted advances on friend while she was sleeping. That is lame and gives her no right to throw a hissy fit! Dana and Alice should kick her ass for being so lame! Which brings me to Roxy. I can only hope the mob will take her out. I don’t really know what to say about her beating a man to death while she’s naked. The only thing that pops to mind is that the FBI would probably not be into her doing that. Well Darling, you did a wonderful job and I look forward to the next one.
I have just recently found this website and have spent about the past week tryin to read this whole story and i ABSOULTY LOVE IT! keep up the great work.
I don’t know who to be worried more Alice (the focus of David’s anger) or Dana (the focus of Roxy’s hate). I am a little supprised and worried that Roxy is so out of control. Now even Tony knows that Roxy’s feeling for Alice is Roxy’s weak point, that can’t be good. If the sequel is coming soon then that also means the cliffhanger is too. Wainting to see who survives and what shape they are in. As long as Dana isn’t dead (and forgotten) and Alice hooks up with Lara, I’ll be reading. PPS
WOW!!! I started reading this about 2 weeks ago and I finally finished it and all I can say is WOW!!! You have only reinforced more my belief that IC is the dumbest person in the world for killing Dana. This is the one of the best fics I have ever had the privilege to read. I don’t usually leave comments but I had to make an exception in this case. You are doing a fantastic job of keeping Dana alive and I for one love it. Dana and Alice so belong together. And as for Roxy all I can say is PLEASE DIE NOW!! I have no sympathy for her no matter what her past is like. Anybody who tries to come between my Danish get no love from me. Pls post soon.