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Masked Feelings CH 69 Facing What’s in Front of You
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Dana – Pregnant? Oh my God….
Alice – Wow… I wasn’t expecting that.
Kristen – I’m still trying to get over the shock myself.
Alice – What are you going to do?
Kristen – What do you mean, what am I going to do?
Alice – Are you and Derek going to try to work things out? I’m sure he wants to be a part of the baby’s life.
Kristen – I don’t want to work things out with Derek. I haven’t even told him about the baby yet.
Alice – Are you sure he’ll be satisfied with being only a part-time dad?
Kristen – He really doesn’t have much say in the matter, plus I haven’t told him yet. Why is it any of your business anyway?
Alice – Because Kristen… I actually care about you.
Kristen – No, I don’t think it’s that. I think you want to know what is going on between Dana and me.
Alice – Now, you’re the one whose got it wrong.
Dana walks into the kitchen. Alice follows her in, with Kristen hot on her heels. Dana is leaning on the counter with her back turned away from them.
Kristen – You’ve been quiet. What’s going on, Dana?
Dana – Give me a minute.
Kristen – A minute for what? You’re the one who wanted me here… so are you going to tell me the real reason I’m here?
Dana – Alice, can you give me a few minutes? I promise I’ll come get you when I’m done.
Alice – Sure… I’ll just wait in the living room.
Alice leaves.
Kristen – Can you at least turn around? I don’t feel comfortable talking to the back of your head.
Dana turns around and takes a seat at the table. Kristen takes the seat across from her. She had every intention on easing into the conversation, but she had one question that was burning in her mind and it had to come out.
Dana – Why did you kiss me?
Kristen sighs.
Kristen – I’m attracted to you. Things are really confusing for me right now, but I do know that much. I think you’re an amazing woman, Dana.
Dana – How long have you felt this… attraction?
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Darlin’, you know that I adore you, but you are one sick bitch. Sorry that I made it so difficult for you to reply back, but I’m a bit tapped out. I definitely enjoyed this chapter & look forward to what comes next. I’m encouraged to hear that you have every intention on continuing this story for the forseeable future. This pleases me. As for making the story all smut … what ever gave you that idea? I mean it wouldn’t be the worst thing in the world … but I have no clue why you think I would do that. Same with killing off Roxy … why would that ever cross your mind? Maybe you’re just projecting your on feelings onto me. You should really consider that. Get some help. Talk it out.
Fantastic update – from onf of a legion of devoted Danish fans – Dana will never be dead to us, especially when we have such fantastic writers as yourself around – long live Danish!!!
Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr, that was fucking HOOOOOOT! I’m glad I didn’t read it in school. Otherwise I would have jumped my professor, lol. So there are more surprises to come? Well, can you tell me why I don’t wonder? I wouldn’t expect anything else though, lol. You are so mean telling me that Dana never will be mine. You hurt my feelings. Don’t knowif I’m going to survive this. Bad girl! Loved the sex scenes! You made a fantastic job, my dear! Wouldn’t mind being Alice in this steamy situation, lol. I hope Kristen realizes that Al is the right woman for Dana and let them be. If not, Al has a perfect phrasewhich she should use at some point. “Step off, bitch” that is, lol. Dana wasn’t too convinced when she set the rules. It’s just my opinion but I smell some cheating there, lol. Andrea was an ass. She could wait for her talk with Roxy and first help that poor womanout of that mess. But nooooooooo! Women! So happy, Roxy somehow managed to clean it all up and I truly hope she didn’t leave any evidence. Don’t want to visit her in jail, lol. Let’s see how she handles her “mishap” with the mob. Tony isn’t a dumbie, so it’ll be the most difficult part to convince him. Good luck, Roxy:-) So you think Roxy is a match for me? Okay, let’s straighten it out: I’m not that insane, lol. But I do still love her character:-) I knew something had to be wrong with those Perkins twins. No wonder they’re not like her sister. In the end you’re going to reveal that they’re kids of theGambino’s and only because the twins had red hair and din’t look like real, dirty, smeary mafiosi they gave them away, lol. Well, I still believe Lara’s alive. You just want to tease around, lol. Thanks for updating that fast, darlin’. But I would like to know if you deserve being called “speedy gonzales” at times, lol. Actually, it should be”speedelita gonzalita”, lol. Live up to your name! Can’t wait to read your next chapter. So pleeeeease, accelerate, lol. You know I need my fix:-) You’re the best!!!!
I agree with you about S4. I haven’t enjoyed it all that much either. Especially since IC refused to acknowledge the fact that Dana is dead until season finale. And while enjoy seeing Dana grace my screen anytime, that little cameo she made really didn’t make any sense to me at all. But as long as she was on is all that matters. Anyway this was an excellent and HOT HOT HOT chapter. I’m so jealous of Alice. I still want Roxy to go away and I’m starting to want Kristen to go away also. But no worries, I’ll be here until the day you stop gracing us with your wonderful Danish writing talent. Keep up the good work and Long Live Dana!!!
Interesting twist with David find out that he and Lara were adopted, does that mean that Sara was adopted too? David and Roxy, two loose canons, seeking revenge and focused on destroying Danish (or in Roxy’s case one part of Danish), with the most recent twist I wonder if they share even more in common. Even Dana and Alice becoming closer together seems ominous, given David’s plan to give Alice everything she wants and then take it all away. Glad to hear that Dana is thinking about continuing to get professional help, she needs it help to deal with her anger about Roxy (and I have a feeling she’ll need even more help getting over the potential trauma that is going to be inflected on her by your cliffhangers:)). PPS
Dear Twisted Sister, Once again you have managed to write another insane chapter. Well done! Roxy is totally losing it and becoming more of a wild card then ever. You have me fearing what she may do to a loved one. Would you maybe consider having her snap and kill Jenny instead of Dana? Loved the sex scene, very hot as always. You have a way with sex and gore, do you ever wonder what that might mean? I’m looking forward to the next chapter. You are on a roll.
Another great chapter to this adictive story. Will there be another victim? Hmmmm if it is please do not let it be Dana, let David have his wicked way with Roxy instead. I am still itching to know who it is the mob have, is it Lara? Anyway brilliant as I said PPS.