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    The Real Deal Ch 14

    Story written on March 14, 2007 by catseye.
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    Shane to Carmen, “Would it be wrong if I kiss you now?”

    Ch 14

     

    Day 125, 21 September

     

    Dearest Carmen

     

    Do you know how horny and jealous you made me feel tonight at the movie wrapping party?

     

    I knew you saw me tonight as you played my favorite track – twice. I noticed. 

     

    Jenny invited me to the movie wrapping party, she told me you were DJing tonight. 

    Is this fate disguised in form of Jenny?  I had to come as I haven’t seen you for over two weeks.

     

    You were dancing in front of the turntables. Your eyes closed, with one hand pressing your headphone to your ear, swaying your body and arm with the flowing beat.  She was behind you, touching and grinding your bodies together.  Your arm felt back, running your fingers through her hair, her face, leaving a trail of fire on her skin.

     

    I was sitting at the back, watching you.  You knew I was there.

     

    Love

    Shane

     

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    Hotel in LA

     

    I am standing outside the hotel room of my mother.  There is only one door separating us.  I raise my hand to knock but hesitated for a moment.  Why now?  Has she been in contact with Dad?  Where has she been when I needed her?  All the questions are in running through my head.  Anyways, I take a deep breath.  She can’t possibly be worst than Dad.  If she is then I consider myself a decent human despite my DNA and should celebrate for the lack of parental guidance.  

     

    I knock at my second attempt.   The footsteps are approaching the door.  I am getting nervous, my palms are sweating.  It’s been many years since I saw her, I don’t even remember what she looks like now.  The door knob turns, the door swings open. 

     

    I look at the middle aged woman whom is standing in front of me.  A pretty, slim, long dark hair, woman is holding the door open. 

     

    “Shane?”  Luckily, she calls me first as I am still contemplating what I should say.  I wanted to call her mum, but after all these years, I don’t seem to be able to bring myself to say that word.

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    1. oh man! that letter to ilene was hilarious but you were right for the most part so i’ll give you a hell of a lotta props for that!oh no… one or two more chapters to go..? that made me sad, really. i had fun reading your story and i sure am gonna miss that… two more chapters! instead of just one! please!!! thanks a lot!

    2. =( i’sad that this story has to end. Please two more chapters please please. By the way the letter to ilene was totally great LOL i wish she could read it. thanks again and PLEASE TWO CHAPTERS LOL

    3. Wow! At last they’re free to be a couple again. I hope! The letter to IC was entertaining indeed. Made real sense to me! Please update soon. Let Carmen see Shane’s journal. I hope Shane feels it’s time to let Carmen have it.

    4. OMFG!! That’s *exactly* what I was thinking, almost to the letter! Paige is an excellent character and a gorgeous woman, and she even has a voice like velvet. Lovely gal, but she’s a fricken Amazon next to Shane. They’re physically mismatched. Carmen was perfect: petite but not meek. Anywho, I really like where this story is going. Sorry if I don’t leave comments, but, you know, things happen. I’ve still been following every chapter of the story and I think it’s great. Yeah, thanks. (It’s just so weird that you wrote that part in Shane’s letter to IC that I had to write something. It’s uncanny.)

    6. Oh no I don’t want this story to end =( It’s the best fan fiction I have ever read…I hope you’re going to write a sequel. Once again this chapter was awesome. And the letter at the end was great, too. I totally agree with you! ^^

    7. LMAO “She makes me look like an anorexic midget when I am standing next to her” AND AGAIN!!!!!! hahahahaThat was awesome!!!! And ur story is great!!!!! PPS!

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