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I Want to Come Over, post 33
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They walked along the trail in relative silence for about twenty minutes. Occasionally they stopped at a vista that forced them to just stare at the beauty of the creator. The trail was generally easy and at the few points which were physically challenging Bette turned and offered Tina her hand and they steadied one another through the passes.
Once the physical connection was re-established they held hands as often as the trail allowed and drew strength from one another as they moved along. There were no easy words to navigate through all that they had shared with one another.
Bette found herself feeling sadness without the guilt that had plagued her for so long. She still felt guilt over betraying Tina’s trust but she no longer felt the hopelessness she felt in the face of it before. She had never spoken aloud to any one person all that she had learned about herself and the forces that drove her to betray the woman who she only dreamed could exist before Tina. She had betrayed Tina and she could not escape that. She had betrayed herself and she could not escape that either.
For the first time since their bond had been broken Bette found that she could dream again. Through her relationship with Rosanna she had learned to breathe again. The tightness in her chest that seemed as though it would never leave disappeared in the connection Rosanna and she developed. She deliberately pushed away thoughts of her blue eyed lover. She could only deal with one woman at a time. She smiled to herself as she wondered from this perspective how Rosanna negotiated three. In the small still place inside her she knew that she held Rosanna’s heart, much the way Tina held hers.
The thought caused her to stop short and Tina following close behind bumped into her.
“Umph” Tina looked at her in question.
“Sorry, I got distracted.” Bette explained her sudden stop.
“Hopefully good thoughts of me” Tina laughed and probed at the same time.
“The jury is still out” Bette replied to both the light and deeper question.
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More, please….thanks!
This is pure torture…absolute torture…as sweet as the thought of them together is, I can still feel Ro as an undercurrent in Bette’s heart and ultimately her decisions. My only problem I guess is that everything becomes different when there are children involved. I believe that Bette needs to remember that and if she can be as happy as she once was w/tina then she should try. Not because of Angelica, but with angelica. If it’s an even race so to speak then Tina gets the nod because she is part of the “family” and angelica deserves that. Ok, so have I hinted enough? guilted you into swaying towards tina?
That sweet that Tina holds her heart, but it no answer.(LOL). Hey two ending sound fine, that way you please everyone. This is fanfiction and not really live, isn’t it?
Arrgh!! That Bette Porter confuses me. I don’t think Tina will go for an open relationship. PPS. But first get some sleep.
hey sleepwalker! youre dead tired in your eyes,but you did a damn fine job with this chapter women.i hope everything works out for the audit.. get some sleep now… post when y can!
Hey Kekila, Wow an audit eh? That’s gotta be tough. I don’t know if you are committed to this story or haunted by its characters that you are compelled to write for us after your tough couple of days… but whatever it is… we thank you, because we are the beneficiaries of another great instalment of this story. There’s nothing as liberating as honesty… even in its most painful moments, there’s liberation as Bette and Tina are reaffirming. Get some rest… and then PPS.
Pure torture, but done so sweet and kind. Thanks you PPS
awesome update…..please post again soon……
Bette need to do some thinking if she gives up Tina now she will lose her forever. More please thanks
It can’t be over between them, Bette still needs and want Tina, I think she is just scared! Please let Bette come back to Tina. Both need each other! Please continue!
Longtime lurker who doesn’t comment at all but you have brought me out of hibernation…I love Bette and Roseanna together just as much as I love Bette and Tina together but I hope you go with the pairing of Bette and Roseanna, I really like this pairing. I loved Tina and Kay together and I thought maybe you would build on these two being together, everyone of these characters deserves happiness whoever they end up with, I just think that Bette should be with Roseanna, she has fallen for her hard just as Roseanna as falling for Bette…Tina, I love, I know she will alway love Bette but I do think it is time for her to move forward in her heart and love someone else, I would love to see her date and fall in love with someone new, I was hoping for Kay but we know who Kay is in love with. Will Tina, Kay and Teresa all start afresh with new loves, will wait and see but whatever way you go will read anyway.
I’m with mnky_puzzle, I’m pulling for Roseanna and Bette.
Posting in the aftermath of an audit is going well beyond the call of duty, kelika, so please know that your effort and dedication to this engrossing story is very much appreciated. I’m back on the fence re Tina and Ro, so two separate endings would suit me just fine! It’d be really cool to compare them. In fact, even if you didn’t end up posting both endings, the mere exercise of writing them might help you settle in your own mind the thorny Tina vs. Ro debate.
Good chapter and Im with BeJacks, please let them be together, this is the only hope for us. Ok post soon please, thanks!