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You (Part the Thirty-Eighth)
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Two weeks later, sleeping hadn’t gotten any easier for Dana, and it had nothing to do with Phyllis. She’d stopped calling all the time not long after Dana had complained about it, so she figured Bette had had something to do with it. She didn’t exactly mind, of course, since it was more than nice not to have some woman she didn’t really know going on and on about how great Alice was all the time. Still, without Phyllis calling every two seconds, Dana had nothing to excuse her insomnia with other than her own jumbled thoughts.
Not that what Phyllis had said wasn’t true, though. As she lay awake most nights, Alice was pretty much the only thing Dana could think about. The more she did it, the guiltier she felt, but Alice was pretty adamant in wanting her to stay at the hotel, no matter how often she suggested going home. Deep down, Dana agreed. She knew it really was the best thing for both of them, but at the same time, all she really wanted to do was check out and go home. Of course, Alice would probably just make her turn around and go back, but after three weeks of loneliness, sleepless nights, and the confirmation that she already had what she’d have wanted had she actually taken this time for herself before, Dana was almost ready to fight her on it.
She’d started have flowers delivered to the apartment every afternoon. Alice never mentioned it when they talked, so Dana didn’t know how she felt about the gesture, but it made Dana feel better. The florist always assured her that they’d been delivered, so she didn’t know why Alice didn’t call her out on it. Some of the cards she thought up to send with them were incredibly sappy…she’d been expecting at least a sarcastic comment or two about them. Still, there was nothing, and Dana didn’t really know how to feel about that. She wasn’t confident enough to come right out and ask about it, but it made her feel good to do it for Alice, so she did. Over the years of their friendship, Alice had often shared that the only time her girlfriends ever brought her flowers was when there was a fight going on. Dana wanted to change that, because in her mind, Alice deserved flowers every day for the rest of her life. She’d had those thoughts for years now, but only spending time away from Alice at the hotel had made it into something real.
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That was soooo good! Really loved that chapter, Danish love is so sweet! and also hot lol. The flowers thing was really cute too
Aww totally loved this chapter as usual, thx PPS
Wehey I did like the chapter, no wait, I loved that chapter, Danish are so frickin’ cute. Thank you MutedT xx
Awesome! You have to leave Word open. You have to be prepared when the inspiration hits. :-) Keep up the good work.
Yay, hotel sex, and very good I might add! I find it amusing that Dana seems hell bent on getting down to it, yet it’s sweet to see Alice reign her in and slow her down. It’s flattering to see a couple suggestions make it into the chapter, thnx! So Helena seems to forego the gambling route?! That was “almost” the dumbest story arc ever. All things considered it’s great to see Alice and Dana not so Far Away from each other anymore…
Yep you are melting my brain again. Damn you are good. If I beg could jealous Dana make an appearance. PPS.
I havent’commented in a whie, but I just wanted to let you know I’m still reading your story and I’m still loving it! :D Good to see Dana and Alice back together again (as in in one (bed)room. :D) I wonder how Dana will cope as a receptionist at Wax. Btw, I love the way you hdnled the Phyllis-storyline. This was much better than the storyline on the show…I couldn’t stand Alice and Phyllis together. I’m looking forward to the next chapter.
Wow! MutedT. There’s just something magical about the words “Dana,” “robe,” and “open all in the same sentence. :)~ I’ve always thought that you have a flair for writing dialog, and it’s really apparent in this chapter because these six pages just zip by. I liked the way you shifted gears between the quick banter and the final, slower interaction between Danish in the hotel. Really good descriptive writing. Thanks for the new chapter. As always, I’m looking forward to the next installment.
sooooo good no great, u know what im gunna go crazy and say fanfrickintastic lol neways i enjoyed that always love your chaps ahah and writing :)
hey there, i cant believe i didnt comment on the last chapter b/c i loved that one too. this one was great though, and im so glad you stayed up for the past 3 nights writing fan fic if it produced these results! there’s really not much else i can say that i haven’t said already. you just totally rock!
I’m glad that Dana leaves the hotel and goes back to Alice! 3 Weeks are wicked long. Good job with the Tasha handling, btw. Loved it as usual, I know I’m so predictable that way. ;)
Fantastic MT – you must keep this story going on and on, and on. You write it so beautifully. More please and soon.
What can I say that I already haven’t! Awesome Chapter, Just Awesome! I love them, so many great parts to this chapter…Loved the flowers and the sappy notes and the usage of the hotel…You can feel that Alice is stronger…I love it…Nice Hospital scene as well…LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY! Keep up the great work!