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You (Part the Thirty-Eighth)
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Dana reached down and tried to pull Alice’s shirt off, having no luck. Alice just stood up and smiled at her before doing it herself, taking off her sweatpants too. "There, does that make it easier for you?" she teased.
"Don’t make fun of me…touch me, Al. Please," Dana whispered into her ear, pulling her close and shrugging the robe off her shoulders.
"Oh, I’ll touch you, don’t worry," Alice whispered back, resuming her previous path and gasping at what she found when she reached her prize. "Jesus, Dana, you’re so wet," she murmured. "Is this what I do to you?"
Dana grasped Alice’s face in her hands and looked down at her with blue eyes turned dark with desire. "You have no idea what you do to me, Alice. I’ll never get enough of you."
There was no verbal response, but the way Alice buried her tongue inside her, Dana knew she’d been understood. Alice didn’t waste any time teasing her, and while it felt amazing, Dana wasn’t ready to give herself over to the waves of pleasure without doing the same for Alice. "Bed," she begged, pulling Alice away from her gently. "I need to taste you too."
Alice nodded and stood up, walking them to the huge bed and laying Dana down, covering her with her own body and kissing her deeply. Within a minute or two Dana was ready, so Alice repositioned herself. They ate each other lazily at first, but the feel and the taste were too much for them to handle before too long, and soon they were moaning into each other for more. They entered each other simultaneously and rode out the first two orgasms together like that before Dana pulled back. "Come here," she growled. "I wanna kiss you."
Alice didn’t say anything, just obeyed. They lay kissing like that for a good ten minutes before need overtook them again. Alice moved her leg between Dana’s, and Dana brought her own up as they started to move together, still kissing. Dana raked her nails down Alice’s back, and Alice bit her tongue gently in response as their movements intensified. Alice moved her mouth away from the kiss and buried her face in Dana’s shoulder, moving more quickly when Dana’s moans got louder.
"Alice…I need you closer," Dana begged breathlessly.
Alice moved up to meet her eyes. "Show me. Show me what you want," she whispered. Dana nodded and took Alice’s hand, bringing it to her center and helping long fingers to slip inside. "This," she affirmed, moaning as Alice nodded and began thrusting inside her.
"Yeah, this is definitely closer," Alice whispered with a smile. "God, Dana, you feel so good," she breathed a second later, moving faster. Dana clutched at her back, rolling them over and sliding three fingers into Alice’s dripping core.
"So do you," she whispered as they moved with each other, coming as one in a tangle of limbs and sweaty bodies.
"Okay, so like I said, we need to take these breaks more often," Alice said after they’d managed to cool down a little and lay there cuddling in each others’ arms.
"No, we don’t. I want to be with you, Alice. That’s not going to change. I love you so much, baby. I really do. I want to show you that."
"You already do," Alice replied. "I love you too, sweetie. So fucking much."
They didn’t talk any more that night, giving in to the contented sleep that descended on them. And while they both knew things weren’t perfect, they were okay with that. This was coming pretty close, all things considered.
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That was soooo good! Really loved that chapter, Danish love is so sweet! and also hot lol. The flowers thing was really cute too
Aww totally loved this chapter as usual, thx PPS
Wehey I did like the chapter, no wait, I loved that chapter, Danish are so frickin’ cute. Thank you MutedT xx
Awesome! You have to leave Word open. You have to be prepared when the inspiration hits. :-) Keep up the good work.
Yay, hotel sex, and very good I might add! I find it amusing that Dana seems hell bent on getting down to it, yet it’s sweet to see Alice reign her in and slow her down. It’s flattering to see a couple suggestions make it into the chapter, thnx! So Helena seems to forego the gambling route?! That was “almost” the dumbest story arc ever. All things considered it’s great to see Alice and Dana not so Far Away from each other anymore…
Yep you are melting my brain again. Damn you are good. If I beg could jealous Dana make an appearance. PPS.
I havent’commented in a whie, but I just wanted to let you know I’m still reading your story and I’m still loving it! :D Good to see Dana and Alice back together again (as in in one (bed)room. :D) I wonder how Dana will cope as a receptionist at Wax. Btw, I love the way you hdnled the Phyllis-storyline. This was much better than the storyline on the show…I couldn’t stand Alice and Phyllis together. I’m looking forward to the next chapter.
Wow! MutedT. There’s just something magical about the words “Dana,” “robe,” and “open all in the same sentence. :)~ I’ve always thought that you have a flair for writing dialog, and it’s really apparent in this chapter because these six pages just zip by. I liked the way you shifted gears between the quick banter and the final, slower interaction between Danish in the hotel. Really good descriptive writing. Thanks for the new chapter. As always, I’m looking forward to the next installment.
sooooo good no great, u know what im gunna go crazy and say fanfrickintastic lol neways i enjoyed that always love your chaps ahah and writing :)
hey there, i cant believe i didnt comment on the last chapter b/c i loved that one too. this one was great though, and im so glad you stayed up for the past 3 nights writing fan fic if it produced these results! there’s really not much else i can say that i haven’t said already. you just totally rock!
I’m glad that Dana leaves the hotel and goes back to Alice! 3 Weeks are wicked long. Good job with the Tasha handling, btw. Loved it as usual, I know I’m so predictable that way. ;)
Fantastic MT – you must keep this story going on and on, and on. You write it so beautifully. More please and soon.
What can I say that I already haven’t! Awesome Chapter, Just Awesome! I love them, so many great parts to this chapter…Loved the flowers and the sappy notes and the usage of the hotel…You can feel that Alice is stronger…I love it…Nice Hospital scene as well…LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY! Keep up the great work!