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    Destroying Angel 3

    Story written on May 24, 2007 by New Dawn Fades.
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    Nothing seems to show. The feelings come and go…..

    Destroying Angel 3

     

     

     

    Emotions never known
    They talk though what you show
    So easy you let go
    What’s left is torn and thrown……

     

     

     

     

    Ch 4

     

     

    There she was hair a mess, her scent all over me. She was walking away. After I searched so far and wide. After I waited, rational leaving, escaping. I followed. The guard on edge he could sense her fear like a tiger. I could feel him wanting to turn around, wanting to see why she came out looking so worse for the wear. I kept my distance till we got back to the blackjack table. People walked by us, around us…..not in our world. They had no idea that I had no mind, that she took what was left of me, the cocktail waitress strolling by champagne in hand noticed not my want to kill the guy Carmen walked with, instead she noticed how I grabbed two glasses off her tray and kept walking drinking one then the other in a flash. The little penguin suited dealers playing their games didn’t know how much, or how far I had crashed and burned…..all because Carmen left, instead they noticed how I lazily left the empty glasses at one of their tables…..

     

     That cryptic note she left…..that idea I couldn’t shake. It was all happening so fast.

     

    If I was only one of you…..

     

     

    They arrived back at their table. Carmen she had trouble keeping herself from feeling me inside her. She was distracted, unsure. I could see her mind racing a thousand minutes a second. How did I find her? How did I know there was something to not seeing me again? And suffering, and want…..and nothing at all………

     

    Pavel looked at her taking in her slightly messed appearance. I could see him calculating the time in his mind. No it shouldn’t take that long to powder your nose. I watched her till my eyes burned a beam directly at her. She knew I was there. She heard my footfalls, she wanted to leave. I wasn’t finished talking to her. I got the distinct impression she was fearful of my presence.

     

     

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    1. i liked it a lot .Interestied in seing who Carmen really is. You know what? A couple of days a go I read all of your stories again.Everysingle chapter! And i enjoyed it so much remeber.I remebered how it made me feel the first time , especially , Missing , A means to an end , As sure as the sun , Blvd Knights , The line begins to blur and La Mer . I know everybody is telling you that , but you really have a great talent. Dont ever stop writing!Ok that’s what i wanted to say. Oh , and pleeease post soon!!!

    2. Damn, Shane took them out! Although I wanted her to break free from the hold her past life had over her, the way she executed those men was f*ckin’ fantastic. Great as usual.

    4. You always take us on a journey with your stories and I like where this journey is going. You have a way of taking these two into different worlds but we always remember what they mean to each other! Looking forward to reading more!

    6. Thank you so much for the dedication you put into your work. It’s awesome that you actually *make an effort* to continue writing, because there are so many of us who absolutely looove the stuff you come up with. And, of course, this story is no exception. Thank you, thank you, thank you!

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