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Destroying Angel 6
Destroying Angel 6
Ch 11
As I walk away I feel it move. That metal piece itching my brain. Everything spins a little. Colors swirl and mix together. I feel light headed, I could taste the blood dripping from my nose to my lips, my hands are covered with so much blood its pointless to wipe my face. I turn the corner as per Pavel’s instructions. A new set of guards…..all dressed the same as I…..black suits and shirts and ties….
“Get in…..” The one with the aviator sunglasses instructs.
I get in my head swimming….my vision blurring….pain in my head, in my hand…muscles sore from the tucking and roll routine….One guard he looks into the mirror…and he nods…the other hands me a towel. I wrap the towel around my hand and lean back enjoying the ride. The city and the lights and the waterfalls made of casino fire…they disappear……
“We had a bet that the Tiger was gonna kill you….no offense…” The man in the mirror disclaims…..
I smirk a little meeting his eyes in the mirror.
“None taken.”
“What you did….that took guts….….”
“Thanks…”
“You gotta teach us some of them moves…..”
“I could….I could teach everything I know…..but then I’ll have to kill you…”
Chorus of laughter.
“I am actually being very serious…..”
Sound pressure silence.
“Come on doll…..we‘re all friends here….just fooling……”
“Don’t call me doll………I don’t like it.”
“What should we call you then?”
“How about Angel…..call me Angel….”
“Yeah…..we like that guys…heh…Angel…”
“Yeah…like that song from Slayer….…Christy this chick is a regular Angel of death…….”
How is that for irony?
“Angel?”
“Yes.”
“Your nose its bleeding….”
“I know.”
The drive continues. The air gets quiet and I suddenly feel able enough to breathe. What day is it? I don’t know. What year is it again? I think its 2007. Can that be right? I keep thinking its 1999…..If only I could stop and think and process everything. If only I could get Carmen to leave this nonsense with me, if only my head would stop throbbing……the car stops and we all get out. And trying to make sense of how fast this is all moving….well I’d rather not.
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(23 votes, average: 4.35 out of 5)
Like always THE BEST!!!!! This is like a drug addiction!!! I want more! Thanks
#$%#*#!!! Amazing!
OH MY GOD!!!!!! Finally we are going find out the truth behind all this mess!!!Great chapter. I agree, the conversation between Shane and Carmen was great. Please post sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great job…the suspense is killin me.
o goddddddddddddd dont stop there!! your mean!!! man im crying of the thoughtof them killing carmn!! man im not prepare to hear what carmen has to say!! man god helps SHANE!!
AAARGH !! What a cliffhanger !!!!
oh my god!!!!!!!!! Carmen’s going to tell Shane the whole story, right?? Oh my god… I hope Shane will understand… and that Pavel guy… f**k, I don’t like him! Hope that Shane&Carmen will be together, without problems. But it’s not possible, is it??
Oooohhh, cool! I love it! Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Ahhhhhh!!! Look what you’ve done! Made me come out of lurking around. I love when its just the two of them. I can just picture all of it…alrighty, I’m a pervert.This killing me over here. Keep up the good work and update as soon as possible. pretty pleaseeeeeee!!
If Carmen teams up with Shane, then they can take out the major ones trying to ice them, starting w/ Porter & work their way down. Is it wishful thinking on my part? Possibly, but you can make it believable. Luv it.
AAAAAAAAAAA, you did NOT stop there!! I was leaning in closer to finally read Carmen’s secrets and tbc appeard! AGH.I love the sweet moments between the two of them., when they are alone and it’s not all about the killing.
Love your story! But don’t kill Carmen PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PPS