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Dan jumped for all he was worth, grabbing onto the bottom rung of the ladder. He can see Angie scrambling up the ladder above him. Holding on he tried to swing himself up to the next rung to get to the point where he can plant his feet on a rung and push himself up with his legs. Swinging frantically he is trying to secure himself on this ladder before the wave of water hits them.
Looking up as he struggles to get his foot on the first rung. “Angie keep climbing. You’re doing great there girl.” Dan yells.
Getting his foot on the rung, Dan is just starting to straighten his legs when the water hits. The full force of a ten foot wall of water hits him almost forcing him off the ladder. Dan quickly holds on hugging the ladder and locking his arms. He looks up at Angie to see if she is in the water’s path praying she is above the water line.
Looking up he can see Angie’s face. She is screaming at Dan but he can’t hear her only see her mouth moving. She was OK up there above the water. Dan feels a sense of relief at having gotten Angie to a safe place when something slams into him. The force of which almost knocks him off the ladder for the second time mere moments. Looking at the source of the force Dan recognizes the metal frame as part of his plane. Immediately his mind clicks this is not good.
Chapter 19
Only passions, great passions, can elevate the soul to great things.
Denis Diderot
The noise was like none he had heard before. He always thought it would sound like a freight train but in reality it was more of a popping sound in his ears from the pressure changing. The force surprised him it was like being hit by a sledge hammer.
The wall of water rushing towards Dan hit him so hard he at first was able to hang on but then the wreckage of his plane floated by with pieces of the fuselage crashing into the base of the tower. The impacted jarred his already weakened grip. Despite his best efforts to hang on he was no match for the coming forces. The feeling of slipping off the ladder rung was like a free fall and then an immediate tugging downwards. He felt caught up in a powerful current that was pulling parts of his body in different directions. Dan was swept away into the swirling waters. All Dan could do was pull his knees up to his chin and try to keep his head above water. He was flipped around giving him a good view of where he had been. He could see that Angelica was well above the water line. “Thank God for that favor.” He thought while he bobbed his way along.
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Not good,? I was holding my breath while reading this. This was very good.
Damn, rescue that girl already. I would have called Peggy Peabody, she would have known someone and not only would Angelica already be saved, but Bette and Tina would be flying in her jet to meet her. Damn Imiss Peggy.
Thanks for taking the time to write…I also agree with coop, how about the P-jet. Looking forward to what comes next.
So thrilling. Edge of the seat excitement. Moms to the rescue. Don’t fuck around w/a Mom’s child.
Oh no. They should fly into Raleigh. I will be glad to pick them up! That’s much closer to where Angie is than Charlotte!
Oh no….poor Dan! Angelica will need all the therapy money can buy to erase that memory from her mind. I was on the edge of my seat, it was great Jwet!
Lol, not good…U did an amazing job with this update. I loved how T & B leaned on each other to overcome their fears. Excellent, Excellent update.
so it took a further crisis for Tina to acknowledge that when she needs her Bette is this…great…now get that girl home and those 2 together….and u r nearly home as well…take care…have a rest etc etc!!!!!! catch u later.
Thanks, Jwet, for finding the time to write and post.
Fly Bette and Tina, fly! Phew – what an adventure this is. Nice job.
As you’re the author could you make so that Dan just has the world’s greatest body surf, maybe have him land at some bar or something. I’m sure he could use a drink after that. I liked him and would prefer he not drown.
Jwet, Great chapter. Thanks
Pageturner. Glad you’re able to write while travelling. Look forward to the next one.
I felt like I am Tina or maybe even Angelica as I was reading this chapter. I know in my heart that Dan is gone but can you let him live? Hopefully, they will get to NC and see their little girl soon.
reading j. just got back from san fran for pride. im catching up. excellent. thanks.
Damn this is awesome!
This was great! Bette and Tina can’t get there fast enough. Thanks for posting!
Oh thank god that someone’s going to rescue Angie… but what about poor Dan? Thx for posting Jwet!
WOW, rivetting! I felt myself holding my breath as I read each paragraph. It is wonderful that they have one another for support through all this. Please post soon!
NOT ANY GOOD???? WTF…..the high altitude of all your flying around the country must be messing with your brain cells…..this chapter and all the others have had be on the edge of my seat, my butt is getting sore! LOL. Ah, Super Bette is taking action & Tina is trusting her again! Awesome. Angie will be OK. And Dan too??? Thanks JWET for posting. Looking forward to the next chapter. Take Care!
Not good?!! Are you kidding!? I was hanging on tight, reading the words as fast as I could just to read what was going to happen next!!! Geez…my stomach is still down around my toes!! And what dedication…posting this story while sitting in the airport, just to give us some pleasure! Thanks J…what a ride!!!
My first thought was also Peggy or at least Helena
Thanks for another exciting chapter. I liked Dan. Please write soon.
AWESOME! JUST AWESOME!
that was a great update. i held my breath! poor angelica… i could feel how scared she was in this chapter… great job. thank you for the update. i hope the next chpater has b/t cradling Ang safely in their arms.