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“No… No” Angelica screamed. She was screaming for all she was worth trying to get Dan’s attention. Red faced and out of breath she continued trying to warn him about the large mass of twisted metal coming towards them. She saw it hit him, his struggle, the battle had waged to hang on and then she saw him loose the battle. Dan’s head bobbed up and down along the water, Angelica was able to catch him looking at her and then he was gone.
Angelica looked in horror at the water. Gone was the pilot and any security she felt being in his care. Lost and terrified now more than ever Angelica looped her arm through the rail to reinforce her grip. Clinging onto the ladder rung, Angelica began crying out for her Moms. Despite the warmth of the air and water, Angelica’s entire body shook almost making her loose her grip. With tears streaming down her face, Angelica didn’t know what else to do other than hang on.
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Bette and Tina both just stared at the TV screen. The picture was of a lone figure, a little girl desperately clinging to a metal tower of some sort just feet above raging waters. It was a shot from some distance way and the figure looked to be in silhouette. The tower looked to be completely surrounded by water, with the waves beating against the tower base. It was only as the camera began to zoom in closer could the viewer make out the figure to be a little girl around the age of 10 her hair wet and dangling off her shoulder. As the wind picked up it whipped her hair around her face giving her head a fuzzy halo look. The camera operator pushed the zoom in closer trying to capture any detail about the girl’s face. The extreme close up made the picture grainy and a little out of focus adding a level of difficulty to identifying the little girl.
It was when this extreme close up appeared that both Tina and Bette moved closer to the TV screen. They were examining it for any tells that this was in fact Angelica. Tina moves close enough to touch her daughter’s face as she outlined the image with her hand trying to comfort the fear she saw there. They both knew without a doubt that this was their daughter.
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Not good,? I was holding my breath while reading this. This was very good.
Damn, rescue that girl already. I would have called Peggy Peabody, she would have known someone and not only would Angelica already be saved, but Bette and Tina would be flying in her jet to meet her. Damn Imiss Peggy.
Thanks for taking the time to write…I also agree with coop, how about the P-jet. Looking forward to what comes next.
So thrilling. Edge of the seat excitement. Moms to the rescue. Don’t fuck around w/a Mom’s child.
Oh no. They should fly into Raleigh. I will be glad to pick them up! That’s much closer to where Angie is than Charlotte!
Oh no….poor Dan! Angelica will need all the therapy money can buy to erase that memory from her mind. I was on the edge of my seat, it was great Jwet!
Lol, not good…U did an amazing job with this update. I loved how T & B leaned on each other to overcome their fears. Excellent, Excellent update.
so it took a further crisis for Tina to acknowledge that when she needs her Bette is this…great…now get that girl home and those 2 together….and u r nearly home as well…take care…have a rest etc etc!!!!!! catch u later.
Thanks, Jwet, for finding the time to write and post.
Fly Bette and Tina, fly! Phew – what an adventure this is. Nice job.
As you’re the author could you make so that Dan just has the world’s greatest body surf, maybe have him land at some bar or something. I’m sure he could use a drink after that. I liked him and would prefer he not drown.
Jwet, Great chapter. Thanks
Pageturner. Glad you’re able to write while travelling. Look forward to the next one.
I felt like I am Tina or maybe even Angelica as I was reading this chapter. I know in my heart that Dan is gone but can you let him live? Hopefully, they will get to NC and see their little girl soon.
reading j. just got back from san fran for pride. im catching up. excellent. thanks.
Damn this is awesome!
This was great! Bette and Tina can’t get there fast enough. Thanks for posting!
Oh thank god that someone’s going to rescue Angie… but what about poor Dan? Thx for posting Jwet!
WOW, rivetting! I felt myself holding my breath as I read each paragraph. It is wonderful that they have one another for support through all this. Please post soon!
NOT ANY GOOD???? WTF…..the high altitude of all your flying around the country must be messing with your brain cells…..this chapter and all the others have had be on the edge of my seat, my butt is getting sore! LOL. Ah, Super Bette is taking action & Tina is trusting her again! Awesome. Angie will be OK. And Dan too??? Thanks JWET for posting. Looking forward to the next chapter. Take Care!
Not good?!! Are you kidding!? I was hanging on tight, reading the words as fast as I could just to read what was going to happen next!!! Geez…my stomach is still down around my toes!! And what dedication…posting this story while sitting in the airport, just to give us some pleasure! Thanks J…what a ride!!!
My first thought was also Peggy or at least Helena
Thanks for another exciting chapter. I liked Dan. Please write soon.
AWESOME! JUST AWESOME!
that was a great update. i held my breath! poor angelica… i could feel how scared she was in this chapter… great job. thank you for the update. i hope the next chpater has b/t cradling Ang safely in their arms.