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You (Part the Forty-Second)
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Dana woke up slowly the next morning, feeling a little hung over from all the pot she’d smoked. It wasn’t bad, though, unlike the hangovers she used to get when she was drinking. She just felt sort of heavy, and like she could sleep for another thousand years…which, when it came right down to it, wasn’t the worst way to feel.
Before too long, Dana started to become aware fingers gently caressing her face, and of someone watching her. She knew without giving it a thought that it was Alice, but it still felt a little weird, so she slowly opened her eyes and drew back a little at her girlfriend’s proximity. Alice’s face was only an inch or so from hers, and for a fleeting second Dana was reminded, rather disturbingly, of the days when she used to wake up to find Mr. Piddles’ face mere centimeters from her own. Shaking her head a little to banish the thoughts of her dearly departed cat, Dana couldn’t help but smile at the adoration in Alice’s eyes.
“What’re you doing?” Dana asked softly, running a hand through Alice’s hair. Alice grabbed the hand and kissed it before she answered.
“Nothing. I was just watching you. Sometimes I forget how nice it is just to be able to see you.”
“But we live together, Al. You see me all the time,” Dana replied, a little concerned for Alice’s sanity.
“I know, but half the time I don’t appreciate it like I should. I’m so glad you’re here with me, Dana. I love waking up and getting to see you first thing.” Alice stopped talking and just looked into Dana’s eyes for a minute, her own so full of love Dana thought her heart might burst.
“I take it you didn’t have any dreams?” she asked softly, her suspicions confirmed when Alice grinned and shook her head.
“Nope, not a one…or if I did, I don’t remember them. The joys of marijuana.” With that, Alice rested her head on Dana’s shoulder, and they lay there in silence for a few minutes until Alice whispered, “You smell pretty today.”
“So do you…wait. Are you still high or something?” Dana asked, but she was flattered by the adoration still obvious in Alice’s eyes.
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First comment! Woo! Thank you so much for deciding to continue. Another great chapter! I don’t mind a longer break between them — as long as you promise to come back!
You are still my favorite author barnone.
Muted!!!!!!!!!!! you did it, i am so proud of you. Great chapter by the way. And take all the time you need to reboot, well not all the time, you know what i am saying. Can’t wait to see what that brain of yours comes up with next :). Thanks for the update MT!!
I love this story…although I am waiting for the other shoe drop..I just want to see Alice and Dana happy.
muted – that was a great chapter. super cute. enjoy your break – but be sure to come back. there is no need to rush genius.
Hey! What is this bs about not posting much anymore? This is just UNACCEPTABLE! I need you to keep me motivated so that I’ll feel inspired to post to my own story, because after reading that, I totally do. That was truly excellent and so freakin adorable, it made me sad that my own danish creation isn’t happy or adorable enough. Seriously though, I get what you mean about being burnt out and not as eager to post. You’ve already posted 42 chapters, holy shit, you should feel so accomplished. But please, keep it up as much as you can, you are too talented to stop now!
Hi there!Well, this is my first post here…I gotta tell you MT that I’ve read the 42 chapters in 3 weeks or so (I don’t know… there’s something in the way you tell it). Please, don’t give it up. Even when you were not feeling it you’re able to do this!!Thanks!!
Hey MT, you really know just how to write the kind of chapter that I simply adore! This one was so well done that I could gush about it incessantly. Sweet and happy Danish just does my heart good! What a great way to end my weekend. Take your time to regroup, write when you feel inspired, and tell anyone nagging you to slog off! Everyone needs a break and you deserve some time off. Take care of yourself my friend!
i love this story! cant believe your taking a break though! aww i hope Alice and Dana have a baby and live happile ever after! but you have to make it past 100chapters before that happens!lol i hope my grammar was up to scratch in this comment!;)
well done dude you are so good..great chapter ofcourse have fun on your break can’t wait till you get back :)
Thanks for the chapter and don’t worry about having a break. You do what you gotta do. We’ll all be here when you return.
Hey bud ;) That chapter was fantastic but that never surprises me with you, I hope you are feeling better today and you know if you ever need anyone to talk to or annoy I’m your gal. I won’t pretend I’m not sad that you won’t be posting for awhile but you gotta do what you gotta do to keep you on top. :D
Just Awesome!!! Very Adorable…I love how your are writing this…Great!Do what you have to do, I am with Techie, We will be here when you get back!
Too cute!I’m glad you’ve decided to continue. Everyone needs to take a break and it’s well deserved! Loving this story more and more with every chapter, you’re a wonderful writer!
Hey, sorry to hear that you need a break. But don’t worry, we are all here and we understand why you need to do it. Take your time, get re-energized and come back here again. :)Loved the update as always, especially this line:” she managed to move back a little from Dana’s lips, which had taken on the suction power of a Hoover in the past few minutes”. LOLI’m not gonna be able to read your updates in the next few weeks, since I’m gonna be on holiday, but I can’t wait to read it after getting back! :)take care and don’t worry too much.