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Estranged Together
Estranged Together
`Chapter one`
TK–We’re throwing a surprise get together for Bette…she and Jodi are to arrive anytime now…I’m wondering how the trip went…she didn’t call as promised and i’m guessing we’re finished for good…well…I take that back…she did call…but she didn’t call for me…she called for Angie…the only piece left to our disfigured puzzle. As i watch my friends decorate the cake…blow up a few more balloons…and set the table with a display of assorted cheeses and fruits…I couldn’t stop the images of she and I as we would do this very thing together…before coming to realize that we’re over for good. An everlasting relationship between me and Bette was done-we’re through!
–We’re throwing a surprise get together for Bette…she and Jodi are to arrive anytime now…I’m wondering how the trip went…she didn’t call as promised and i’m guessing we’re finished for good…well…I take that back…she did call…but she didn’t call for me…she called for Angie…the only piece left to our disfigured puzzle. As i watch my friends decorate the cake…blow up a few more balloons…and set the table with a display of assorted cheeses and fruits…I couldn’t stop the images of she and I as we would do this very thing together…before coming to realize that we’re over for good. An everlasting relationship between me and Bette was done-we’re through!
"She’s here…The cabbie just pulled up!" Alice shouts out loud causing everyone to panic and I could tell that they all wanted to make this surprise the ultimate one she’d remember for years and here I was playing along like seeing her and her new lover wasn’t nothing but a faze and eventually I’ll awake to find myself alone in my very own bedroom…but this wasn’t the case.
I was awake in my own demise and Karma had a way of paying me back big time–a slap in the face more the less…but I’m trying not to stress…because no matter if she’s with Jodi or not…I…Tina Kennard must pull through this…I must face her with a smile or a shed of teeth…I must move with pride beneath my feet…I must show her that her ability to ignore me doesn’t bother me…when over all it makes me weak. I’m doomed…
"Hurry up!…She’s getting out the car!" Alice shouts again almost dropping the cake to the floor. The way everyone is acting…you could of sworn Diana Ross or Denzel Washington was making a grand entrance into this livingroom…but nope…it was just Bette and her new lover…Jodi Learner. "Shane…I want you to present the cake in front of Bette and Jodi"
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Very interesting. Tina needs to be pissed off at herself for letting this get this far. Now she needs to sober up and get her woman back.
ya i have 2 say om with probie on thiz – itz t who got them in2 all thiz anyway n now she juzt needz 2 suck it up.
First off if I was Tina I wouldn’t have even been there. Now sober up, cos your not gonna get back Bette that way.
Tina so hates herself for what she’s done to herself (and Bette.) She so pissed at herself that she can’t see straight (no pun intended.) I just hope she can drive alright after six drinks! She needs to get her shit together and fast because I also want to vomit when I see Bette’s tongue in Jodi’s mouth (or vice versa)…yuck!! They look like sisters kissing – no chemistry whatsoever. You gotta fix this and fast carter!
Couldn’t agree more….all that anger needs to be directed at yourself, put inwards and get it back with Bette. All she has to do is carry on how she was before Bette went all “tractor” on us and Bette will see the love Tina still has for her. Great start…keep it coming
Yeah I agree with everyone else but I can sympathize. I’ve definitely been in her shoes before, pining away for someone while they are oblivious and not saying anything and then it was too late. togh times. Hopefully Tina will get a better result than I did! Post and we’ll find out! :)
I am not sure how I feel. I love Bette and Tina and am not interested in Jodi. Hopefully, Bette and Tina can work things out.
great start! hope you update again very soon ! and i have to agree with coop if i was tina i wouldn’t have been there.. i would just have dropped angie off and left. pps
So far very good!!! Tina set her self up for all this. Tina would not tell Bette what she was feeling and now she can not stand to be in the same room as Bette. What will Bette be thinking? Thanks
agree with AngieMosby…the B and J thing turns me so off!!!!! the chemistry of Tina and Bette is dynamite, the other is a drag and I want to barf…actually u musta be watching very closely Angie, I never saw Bette’s tongue in Jodie’s mouth maybe cuz I had to turn away everytime they got close…they are NOT hot!!!! lmao…pps
nah right now if i was T I’d go get well and truly plastered and find me someone to help me forget even if for one night!!!!! carrying a torch for one Ms Porter is just too hard…pps
Poor Tina!