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Estranged Together
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`Outside`
"Thanks for coming with me…" Bette says to Jodi pulling her close to kiss her soft lips.
"You’re welcome…" Jodi replies luring Bette in for another seductive kiss. "I’m glad to be here with you, Bette and I hope I won’t be in your way to much."
"Shh…Don’t worry about being in my way, Jodi. I love your company and I’m honored to be sharing my home with you for the next couple of days." Bette leans over and tongues her down again.
`Inside`
"What’s taking them so long?" Shane asked peering through the window.
"They’re kissing again" Alice announces as she hides behind a chair.
"They’re madly in love" Shane says shaking her head.
In love my ass! I say in my head as I took another sip from my glass. This shit is fucking stupid and I can’t believe I’m here…I should be out shopping or eating dinner perhaps. The longer she takes…the more my heart can’t take…and I want out so bad…so fucking bad that I’m seconds away from losing it.
"Shh…she’s unlocking the door" Shane whispers taking Angie from me. The room went silent for a second as the door flew open and in came Jodi and Bette. At the count of three everyone appeared saying…
"SURPRISE!"
Bette’s face flushed pink instantly and so did Jodis’. The girls surround the couple…giving them hugs…kisses…and emptying their hands of their luggage. I sat back and watched as Bette and Jodi announced that they were together again. I stood there watching them kiss one another over and over. I think I lost it and dropped my glass to the floor. The red liquid spread throughout the wood like a flood. Alice came rushing over to help…and I pushed her away. I didn’t mean to hurt her but I was angry. I haven’t been myself lately. After cleaning the floor…I stopped for a moment to wipe my face…and when I removed my hand…there was a shoe in front of me…I gaze up and look…and there was Bette standing over me. She smiled down at me and knelt down beside me.
"You ok?" She asked.
There was something about her smile that calmed me down. For a second I wasn’t angry…I was cool.
"Yes…"
She took my hand in hers and helped me up.
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Very interesting. Tina needs to be pissed off at herself for letting this get this far. Now she needs to sober up and get her woman back.
ya i have 2 say om with probie on thiz – itz t who got them in2 all thiz anyway n now she juzt needz 2 suck it up.
First off if I was Tina I wouldn’t have even been there. Now sober up, cos your not gonna get back Bette that way.
Tina so hates herself for what she’s done to herself (and Bette.) She so pissed at herself that she can’t see straight (no pun intended.) I just hope she can drive alright after six drinks! She needs to get her shit together and fast because I also want to vomit when I see Bette’s tongue in Jodi’s mouth (or vice versa)…yuck!! They look like sisters kissing – no chemistry whatsoever. You gotta fix this and fast carter!
Couldn’t agree more….all that anger needs to be directed at yourself, put inwards and get it back with Bette. All she has to do is carry on how she was before Bette went all “tractor” on us and Bette will see the love Tina still has for her. Great start…keep it coming
Yeah I agree with everyone else but I can sympathize. I’ve definitely been in her shoes before, pining away for someone while they are oblivious and not saying anything and then it was too late. togh times. Hopefully Tina will get a better result than I did! Post and we’ll find out! :)
I am not sure how I feel. I love Bette and Tina and am not interested in Jodi. Hopefully, Bette and Tina can work things out.
great start! hope you update again very soon ! and i have to agree with coop if i was tina i wouldn’t have been there.. i would just have dropped angie off and left. pps
So far very good!!! Tina set her self up for all this. Tina would not tell Bette what she was feeling and now she can not stand to be in the same room as Bette. What will Bette be thinking? Thanks
agree with AngieMosby…the B and J thing turns me so off!!!!! the chemistry of Tina and Bette is dynamite, the other is a drag and I want to barf…actually u musta be watching very closely Angie, I never saw Bette’s tongue in Jodie’s mouth maybe cuz I had to turn away everytime they got close…they are NOT hot!!!! lmao…pps
nah right now if i was T I’d go get well and truly plastered and find me someone to help me forget even if for one night!!!!! carrying a torch for one Ms Porter is just too hard…pps
Poor Tina!