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The Starting Line: Chapter 10
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Time seemed to pass by quickly over the next little while. I started doing more cuts and less shampooing, my reputation around town was starting to really be established, which I was enjoying the benefits of on a nightly basis. Alice had started grilling me every morning, fruitlessly searching for details so she could believe at least one of us in the group was having a passionate love affair with someone in this town. Her little chart in the back of her notebook was starting to shape up like my little black book, something I wasn’t so sure about. Why she was so concerned with my sex life I couldn’t figure out. I personally thought it had more to do with the fact that she had once again been shafted by the evil Gabby. But there was no talking sense to that girl when it came to Gabby. Oh well, live and learn I say… Despite the front I was putting on, the stability of my life at that time, added to running into Clive and that john that day, it was all starting to get to me. I was waiting for the other shoe to drop, for it to all fall apart. But in my true fashion, I figured I may as well go out in a blaze of glory, or at least high as a kite. I at least kept it together during daylight hours, made it work on time, and kept my cool at The Planet with the others, but night time was completely different. I was on the prowl, bullet in one pocket, ciggies in the other, beer in one hand, girl of the night in the other. I’d usually pull myself into my apartment around dawn, collapse on my futon for a few short hours before getting up and doing it all again. I swear the only thing that kept me going in that period was Marina’s famous espresso shots that she provided me with daily. I thanked the day she upped me from a double to a triple shot.
I collapsed into a chair at the table of the café. The others all looked me over.
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I let you know on every update how fabulous this fic is. And it truly is. Great update, your Bette is so amazing. All the characters are. Thanks for sharing. ADx
Loving the story! Will be a Carmen and maybe a happy ending for them different from the show?? :P
Howdy Doody. Not only do I like your writing but I’m ever so pleased you update so regularly. pps
kdknight – you are an amazing writer. I love this story so much.Please keep it happy and positive and oh yeah if you could see to it, to add a little spark or whatever between Shane and Bette or Shane and Alice that would be coooool. Seriously though thank you so much for putting fingers to keyboard.See ya.FAY
Great story. Just gets better with every post.
Yep, you’re feeling better kd, I can tell!!! This was great…Bette knows exactly how to talk to Shane without being preachy or judgmental..just saying, ” I care about you,and I see you going downhill, but now I am with you…it’s ok” was right on. I wonder if I have any chance of lobbying for Paige instead of Carmen…So here’s another warmfuzzy for ya, and who knows,maybe someday I will get my name in a shoutout!!! :)
do warm fuzzies shed? Just wondering…
Love the way Shane leads other chicks as she does nothing but stare. Bette scopes on Shane very coolly and maturely. Thanks always for every great chapters.