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The Starting Line: Chapter 10
“OK Shane, I love ya to death, but man, you are starting to look like death warmed over.”
“Nice to see you too, Al.”
Dana leaned forward, “No seriously Shane, Al’s right. You need to get some sleep.”
I shook my head, “I sleep.”
Tina took her turn, “How often? Sweetie, you need to take care of yourself.”
I just glared at her, “You did not just call me sweetie… Tina, man… do I really look like someone’s sweetie?”
The whole table started giggling. Bette wrapped an arm around Tina. “Tee, I do have to agree with Shane, you gotta reel in those pet names you try so hard to give everyone. Or at least be better at naming them. Shane is definitely not a Sweetie… maybe a Foxy Lady…?”
Alice giggled, “Yeah, or a Hot Momma?”
I held a hand up, “Guys, guys… How about I’m just Shane?” As much as I appreciated the conversation turning away from my current living habits, I did not want to hear what they could think up to call me… knowing Alice, something would stick.
Al looked down, pretending to be hurt, then quietly let loose, “Fine Shane… sorry… Shaney-Shane-Shane.”
I rolled my eyes but let it pass. Muffins and bagels were enjoyed and as we were all getting ready to get up and head to our jobs, Kit came running up to the table.
“Oh I’m so glad I caught all of you! I just wanted to remind you all of my show tomorrow night… you are coming, right?”
We all nodded, letting her know we wouldn’t miss it for the world. She beamed at us, and it was instantly obvious how much that truly meant to her. As we got up to leave, Bette placed a hand on my shoulder.
“Hey, we haven’t had dinner in a while… why don’t you come by this evening for some food and a swim? Like old times?”
I was about to come up with an excuse to get out of it, but saw her face. Her face looked concerned, and in her eyes you could tell she was ready to argue with me till I relented. I gave in before we even went there. “Sure Bette, what time will you be home?”
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(20 votes, average: 3.30 out of 5)
I let you know on every update how fabulous this fic is. And it truly is. Great update, your Bette is so amazing. All the characters are. Thanks for sharing. ADx
Loving the story! Will be a Carmen and maybe a happy ending for them different from the show?? :P
Howdy Doody. Not only do I like your writing but I’m ever so pleased you update so regularly. pps
kdknight – you are an amazing writer. I love this story so much.Please keep it happy and positive and oh yeah if you could see to it, to add a little spark or whatever between Shane and Bette or Shane and Alice that would be coooool. Seriously though thank you so much for putting fingers to keyboard.See ya.FAY
Great story. Just gets better with every post.
Yep, you’re feeling better kd, I can tell!!! This was great…Bette knows exactly how to talk to Shane without being preachy or judgmental..just saying, ” I care about you,and I see you going downhill, but now I am with you…it’s ok” was right on. I wonder if I have any chance of lobbying for Paige instead of Carmen…So here’s another warmfuzzy for ya, and who knows,maybe someday I will get my name in a shoutout!!! :)
do warm fuzzies shed? Just wondering…
Love the way Shane leads other chicks as she does nothing but stare. Bette scopes on Shane very coolly and maturely. Thanks always for every great chapters.