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Previously
“Ops, hold on there I’m coming right up for you. Now just remain calm. I’ve got you.” The voice that had been calling her name said.
Now free to look down Angelica could make out a man in a red and blue rubber suit that came all the way up over his head in a hood. Happy to have someone here with her, Angelica felt a sense of happiness come over her.
The man climbed the stairs quickly up to her. “Angelica right? It is Angelica?”
Suddenly unable to find her voice Angelica just nodded.
“All right now what do you say we get you out of here OK?”
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Bette understood what Tina was saying but just couldn’t bring herself around to the point where she could let herself off the hook. “I just never meant to put her in danger.” Bette begins but is quickly cut off by Tina.
“Look Bette, I know that. I never will doubt that again. But you can’t go off on your own again either. We’re good when we’re together aren’t we?” Now Tina is pleading to Bette’s sense of togetherness.
Realizing that Tina was way ahead of her, Bette conceded. “Yes we’re good Tina. Very good and I want nothing more than to keep it that way.”
“Great, then we work as a team from now on?” Tina says leaning close to Bette, their faces only an inch apart.
“Team” Bette confirms closing the distance to seal the deal.
Chapter 24
“We could never learn to be brave and patient if there were only joy in the world.”
Helen Keller
Tina and Bette remained hand in hand as the flight wore on. Neither spoke much other than to silently reinforce their need to comfort each other. One might squeeze the others hand when they felt the need for reassurance or one might lean into the others shoulder looking for support. It didn’t matter who started the action it was always quickly received and returned. This was the constant line of communication that Bette and Tina kept opened. They didn’t need words, these forms of physical encouragement gave them each renewed faith and hope that Angelica was hanging on.
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I happen to swim on a military base and have the pleasure of watching the Navy train Rescue Swimmers. I can honestly tell you that they work very hard. As a lay person watching all the skill and energy that it takes to do their job, I am in total awe of them. The chapter was beautiful and lifted my spirits.
I post from Jwet, what a sight for sore eyes, thanks for taking the time to write. : )
WOO HOOO!!! I was just thinking of this fic the other day, and wondering when you were going to post an update!! This was absolutely perfect. The pace in this story was beautifully done. Your a superb writer J, and hope to see you continue on with many more chapters….what? A person can hope and wish right??? : – ))) Thanks again.
I’m glad they didn’t bite Alice’s head off. The reporter just might get a brief interview after all. She should interview Dan as well to pad things out.
Beautiful chapter. This story has been so exciting and thrilling. I look forward to your posts. PPS.
hurray, angie is saved…can’t wait for reunion…thanks
Been hotter than hade here in Dallas. over100 for acouple days,but its raining tonight. Couples that plays together and prays together can make anything work. Angie and Her Moms are three lucky people. Thanks to Alice for getting them there . Thanks for writing and posting
just catching up also. just excellent j. i was holding my breath in anticipation. cooled down a bit here today. i think its only 99. yeah!!! thanks.
YEAH they finally got Angelica. I am so looking forward to the reunion. Bette’s not gonna let her go for months.
Yeah Jwet! I am so glad you posted…along with many readers. Your story just gets better and better. Take your time and keep us up to date with this story, but don’t take too long. Thank you again for keeping in touch with the fans. I bet baby A is glad to be in arms of comfort, and safety.
Glad that rescue was drama free. On to the reunion.
Great story. I’m so glad Angela is safe. I kept worrying about her!
I’m so happy you came back to writing this story. Poor Angelica would have always been in my memory, hanging on the tower. I hate to think how it would have invaded my thoughts every time I would have seen Baby A in S5.
Thanks god Angie is safe, let see they reuine!
Thanks for letting Alice “off the hook” and that She is a good friend. Can’t wait for the reunion chapter. Thanks!
Hey JWet, that was termendous. I could feel Angelica’s fear and terror which was calmed by the soothing voice of the rescue driver. What a termendous heroic job these people have. They are genuine heroes as they delibrately put themselves into dangerous positions to save other. Thank you for showing their dedication and bravery. I applaud them all. Alice was a start in dealing with the mess that she created. Just shows that her heart is in the right place even if her head iften isn’t. Think this was a case of doing the wring thing for the right reasons. Getting Bette and Tina there was the priority which is what Alice did. The simplicity of Tina and Bette’s reactions at the most marvelous news was heartfelt and real. Thank you for all the hard work and effort in bringing this superior story to life. JWet, your talent knows no bounds. Your Loyal Fan.
Just catching up….Great story Jwet…..I’m so glad that Angie is safe….PPS
Hallelujah!!!!!!!!!
I am SO glad that Angelica has made it to safety and that Dan lives! his death would have haunted her for years (not that this overall experience won’t). I can’t wait for the next chapter… is it going to be 34 pages long? Reunion for Moms and Angelica; bette & tina ‘healing’ (wink wink); someone pushing that over-the-top reporter out of window! lol. thanks for the great story!