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    Those Adoring Eyes

    Story written on August 19, 2007 by Jobadge.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=66610
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    Repost – Part 2 An Evening at the Beach…

    Those Adoring Eyes – Part 2

     

     

    I turned my face into the blonde hair, her words stunned me, they momentarily halted my tears as the force of the quiet words hit me.  But then, the words… the emotion that I had heard, that hit me with a velocity that surprised me, I felt the pain in my chest as the tears began once again.

     

    The sob caught in my throat as I tried to answer her, “I…” the words wouldn’t come, as much as I needed to tell her that I missed her too, they wouldn’t come, the words were there, but they slipped away as the emotion began to wreak throughout my body.

     

    I felt Tina’s hand stroking my arm as the slow tears continued with a fury, I felt the impending sensation in my throat that meant there were more than tears on the way.  I didn’t want to break down in front of her, not today.

     

    “It’s okay…” I heard her quietly say to me.

     

    But it wasn’t, she was telling me that she missed me, and it hurt like nothing had hurt in many months. The words sliced through me, the repeating of her words in my mind, ‘miss you… miss you… I… miss… you…’.  I felt the choke in my throat, I tried to stop it, to close my mouth and slowly take a breath, to calm the raging emotions that her words brought, but I failed, I failed miserably as the choke escaped.

     

    I moved my head down, resting my forehead on her shoulder as it over took me, I couldn’t stop the tears and the sobs, I felt her hands move and I looked up, I felt the emptiness filling my arms, she was moving away from me, panic set in as my blurry vision watched her move away, “please… don’t… leave… me…” I sobbed like a child, “don’t leave me… again… please…” I held my hand out to her as she stood in front of me, I didn’t care how the desperation sounded in my voice, I was desperate, I wanted her, I needed her.  I needed her just like I needed her when we lost our son, I needed her then, but I never told her. I never told her how much I needed her.

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    4. My life since she left me was empty,Like a flower that never bloomed. OMG, how so very sad. Loved it the first time AND LOVE IT MORE NOW. I hVE SEEN WHAT CAN HAPPEN WITH THE TWO OF THEM. THANKS SO MUCH.

    6. Jo, you are amazing. I’m loving the add on to this. Please, Bette stay calm, don’t think so much, ask why, and please let Tina be able to tell her it was because of her.

    8. SOOOO much emotion, I just love your writing Mate! This chapter truly is one that shows me one thing – DESPITE Angelica, they will always be tied to one another for their lives. By this I mean, often you have someone tell the parents of a child that they will always be tied even when their relationship ends because they have a child together. The same is true of Bette and Tina, but that’s not why they’ll be tied to one another. They will always need to be in the life of the other because it’s their destiny, their love, and their desire. Angelica is just frosting on that and THAT….gives me hope for the next chapter! Thanks Mate…LATER!

    10. Gosh, amazing. Love your structure, your description, the emotion. You use a lot of commas; it’s not a problem, it’s a brilliant story. I just wonder if full stops wouldn’t sometimes better serve the purpose.. Perhaps even semi-colons. (there really is nothing wrong with the story, but with everything I write, I enjoy receiving creative criticism, I thought maybe you do too.) anyway, thanks for reposting this, I don’t think I was around when it was first out. So thanks :) look forward to an update. ADx

    11. I was so happy to see this post this morning. It’s all I’ve been thinking about. This chapter was just as emotional as the last, so of course I cried again. Sigh! Thank God Henry’s out of the picture, now maybe you can get them together again. Please!

    17. Well, I must say I remembered this chapter like I had read it for the first time yesterday, but…. What can I say ?… I just love it. This is simply one of the most touching and poignant fan fictions I have ever read. Oh, and of course the other ones that come to mind are also almost all yours, Jo. Thank you.

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