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Chapter 17
Tina couldn’t believe that Bette had just completely opened her heart to her, she had gathered from what she knew of Bette herself and from what she had known from others that this would never be the conversation anyone would expect to have with Bette Porter.
Tina knew in that moment that it had taken great courage, strength and a huge amount of trust for Bette to be able to have bared her darkest personal fears and emotions to someone she barely knew.
Tina knew this was monumental for Bette and she felt extremely honoured and very special that she was the one that was able to penetrate the façade and scale the wall of the fortress to find the soul within.
Tina’s hand lifted Bette’s chin so that she could look directly into her eyes. “Bette, baby you’re the most warm hearted, passionate, successful, beautiful woman I have ever met and I…, I am completely blown away by what you have just told me…”
Bette gave a slight laugh, “commit it to memory T…, it’s not something I’m likely to say aloud again…”
“But why Bette…, you are who you are, and it’s not a bad thing to be afraid of failure, but in the same breath it takes the bigger person to admit they have failed, even for the most smallest of things…, and you are the bigger person Bette…, you are so much more than you think you are…”
“No I’m not T…, I’m just this shallow bombastic bully that walks all over people without a care just to get where ever I want to be…”
“Bette…” Tina pleaded as Bette’s words became shorter and sharper by the second.
Bette suddenly got up and paced the grass; her hand ravaged her hair as her anxiety raged through her.
Tina followed Bette’s steps and stood behind her, she immediately brought her arms around her waist, pulling her close and resting her cheek against Bette’s shoulder as she whispered to her, “you’re nothing like that Bette…, you really are an amazing human being…, please don’t say those things about yourself…”
“But why not…, it’s how I see myself…”
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Wow JO, that was so worth the wait. Not sure if they can handle it when they actually make love.
That was sad. sweet. and yet so joyful. thanks
I think Tina will find it so easy because they’re already there, they just haven’t said those three words to each other yet. I’m guessing that’ll happen soon, the way they’re going. Excellent, Jo, thanks.
Jo u r definitely one of my favourite writer:)))))PPS
worth the wait, I really enjoy this , cant wait for morestory
So bittersweet and enchanting chapter. Thanks Jo, for sharing this with us, your loyal fans.
WOW! The emotions in this chapter brought tears to my eyes. To keep a child from their mother because she has falling in love with someone else is unforgivable. The unnecessary turmoil that Melvin created for Bette during her childhood is the cruelest abuse you can put anybody through, let alone a child. Thankfully, Bette’s mom was able to get letters to her and see her before she died. Tina is compassionate, loving & a great listener. Bette needs to share all the bottled up emotions with someone she can trust and by sharing that with Tina, allows their relationship to move to the next level. What can I say Jo? You are a fantastic writer and all your stories evoke such emotion & passion. It’s always a pleasure to read anything you write. PS.
This is truly a beautiful story. I can’t wait for the next chapter. Thank you Jo.
WOW… just don’t know what to say :-) You’ve just made my day :-) ’twas beautiful, and emotional, and so moving… can’t wait for the next chapter ;-)
What a chapter, Jo! Your last sentence gave me goosebumps. The mental picture and emotions that you are able to create through your imaginative writing is just brilliant. One can never wait too long for your chapters.
Fuck. I have been waiting for this chapter for a long time..and that did not disappoint. That was amazing. Beautiful to see Bette really let someone in for the first time. I can’t wait for the next chapter. I bet that Bette’s friends are going to flip out if they sense how much Bette is into Tina. PPS.
Has anyone seen my blood pressure medicine? I’m quite sure I’ve had a heart attack. I felt such a range of emotions on this chapter. Gosh Jo! Love love love your writing. Keep em comin’!
Thank you so much Jo… Today was one of those days, and I couldn’t have dreamed of a better medicine to make it all better… The loving was amazing, as you only can make it, but the whole of this chapter was pure beauty, and in spite of the sadness of the evoked events, I found the whole tale absolutely wonderful and the context, with Tina, that special person being there for Bette, an amazing turning point to the story and their bonding… Jo, believe me when I say that I really needed this tonight, and thanks to you, my day ends on a very bright note, which is rather unexpected, to say the least… Thank you.
So glad to see your post. Another great chapter. Looking forward to more.
Thank you, Jo. As you know I had requested info on Bette’s mother. She’s someone that is mostly ignored all together or simply glossed over, so it’s really nice to see someone address her with some detail and in a manner that makes sense within the context of what we know of Bette (and Melvin). I wonder if Mom was sending the girls some extra lesbo mojo from on high. Look Ma, no hands! And fully clothed. So, I guess that means you’ll have to show how well the girls get on when they have full use of their fully naked bodies.
Man, That wasincrediable. Thank you for taking the time.
That was a work of art. Beautiful. More soon please!
Great story, great writing..
The sweet union of love, passion and pain in a very special place has got to be the most romantic setting yet. The letting go of precious memories and then the joy of new memories will last for years to come for Bette and Tina.
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh….as I’ve told you already, amazing!!
Damn that was awesome!
I’m speechless. Really, I am lost for words…This was…WOW ! It was definitely worth the wait. Jo, as another Tina would say : you’re simply the best !
Hey Jo, I can hardly type as the maelstrom of emotions charge through my mind and heart after reading this latest chapter. What a spectrum of feelings you lovingly weaved through this tale. I do believe that part of love is bringing out the best of yourself or wanting to be better that you are for another person. This is exactly what Bette is feeling right now. Finally she has met the love of her live; a person who she can hide nothing from and most importantly doesn’t want to. Tina is seeing the true Bette; raw and revealed. The sadness and sorrow of losing her mother twice ran to the joy of reuniting with her during the heartbreak of her illness. Watching someone you love and adore slip away is one of the toughest things life can throw at you. Bette survived by closing herself off to love and replacing it with carnal pleasure. Now Tina is here and forcing Bette to see herself as she is now and as who she wants to be. Tina was overwhelmed by Bette’s honesty and maternal revelations. Tina is able to put a mirror up to Bette’s soul and let her see everything that the rest of the world sees. Bette wasn’t happy with this and is beginning to appreciate that life can and does offer more. Only if you are prepare to reveal some of yourself first. I just loved that Tina held Bette is her arms and took in all that was said. This ultimately proved Bette’s love and the change that the last few days have brought about. Th special nature of this church was embossed on her heart. Here, Bette went through the best and worst of times. All of this turmoil led directly to their intense, erotic and fully clothed orgasms. You have showed how love can be in the head and heart as well as the naked abandon of physical proximity. The slow speed of this sexual awakening made it all the more sexy and sensual. Girl you are one of the best at showing love making rather than the coarse fucking of other authors. Both have their place on this site but being able to show the gentleness and intimacy between Bette and Tina is a glorious gift. Thank you for giving me the pleasure of basking in your wondrous words. I will recount these scenes for the remainder of the day and smile as you have helped me believe in true love. Thank you so much. Your Loyal Fan.
a beautifully written piece
Well hell. Who knew a predominantly sad chapter could end like THAT? I think you just won. I don’t know WHAT you won, but you won it. lol
Wow! That was beautiful! Thanks Jo!