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    Broken Promises – Broken Heart

    Story written on October 3, 2007 by Kiwi.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=67075
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    A look inside my head – the one who won’t read it is the one it is written to.

    Broken Promises

    Broken Heart

     

    I fell in love with you the very first time I heard you speak. Your voice was like music to my ears. I remember being in awe of you and thinking that I didn’t deserve such a beautiful and wonderful woman.

     

    I have always been in love with you – before we met – I know I loved you. When I actually saw your face and took my hand, I thought I would die. I had never felt such a feeling of “home” in my entire life.

     

    The way you looked into my eyes – the way I looked back at you – almost afraid to look away for fear that you would disappear. And now you have.

     

    Your hands…your fingers were just so beautiful – so perfect. If the song is true “God must have spent a little more time on you.”

     

    Your skin was perfect – dark – and your eyes beautiful and showing so much love and trust. Those wonderful brown eyes. I remember wanting you. needing you and thinking that if I did nothing else in my life I would prove to you exactly how beautiful and deserving of love and respect you were.

     

    The noises you made. The way you responded to my touch – the most beautiful thing I had ever experienced in my life.

     

    Holding you…oh my God, holding you was like finally finding that missing piece of my soul

    I wanted to know everything about you. Everything.

    I miss you and I loved you.

    Those words will not bring you back to me.

    It appears nothing will bring you back to me.

    You promised you would disappear and that is what you did.

    Now I feel alone – abandoned – like second choice – and that is really elevating my self. We know who first choice is.

     

    Life is unfair – and short.

    I want to love someone with all of me…

    I thought that someone was you…

    I appear to have painfully wrong.

     

    I wish you well – and the children you want.

    I will love them as much as I love you – they are a part of you…..

    What do I do now?

    As Amy Winehouse says

    “To walk away I have no capacity….”

    But that appears to be what you want.

    Please confirm that if it’s the case – I really need to know. then you can move on with him and I can….we won’t get into that…

     

    I never felt so much love in my life for anyone other than my son. See where it got me.

    I am alone!

     

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    3. it WAS beautiful..so how do you mend a broken heart? well, i usually eat a lot of chocolate, and i mean, a lot a lot…it’s like chocolate with chocolate feeling covered with chocolate…

    4. That was very beautiful and heartbreaking. Not knowing any more of you than this offering, I would say it is very definitely her LOSS. It takes time, and I do mean time to get over the loss of someone you love that much. but the pain will lessen a little at a time. Everntually you learn to live with it and realize whose loss it really is. HERS. And I feel sure, everyday, she knows it. Someone else will come along when you least expect it and knock your socks off. God Bless and Good Luck.

    5. Hey Love, Yes — I know you more as Lisa then Kiwi. And, as I continue to express to you — if ya need me, you know where to find me. You know — I’ll walk right beside you & will always be around to help ya. I hope you realize — that everything you write, goes right to my heart & I feel for ya!!!!!!!!

    9. Some of you guys know me. I write under lsrenaski. kiwi is written from my gut and heart. I really am like I write…….thank you for the encouragement! Lisa

    10. Kiwi, you are not alone…my girl of three years just broke up with me last month. I am feeling exactly what you are feeling and if you ever want to talk about it dont hesitate to message me. Thanks for writing that, it gave me some comfort knowing im not alone..in feeling alone.. :)

    11. So raw and so emotionally exposed, I felt as though I were eavesdropping on a private moment. Beautifully written, Kiwi. I only wish it was fanfic and not your broken heart. Take care.

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