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Great Unexpectations Chapter 27
Previously…
After saying goodbye to everybody and kissing Angie to sleep, Bette and Tina retired to their bedroom. They undressed and slipped under the sheet. "That went ok, wouldn’t you say, babe?" Tina leaned into Bette and kissed her shoulder. "Mmhmm", Bette said, trying to remember the question. Their bodies meshed together with the ease that comes with familiarity. "We’re so lucky, aren’t we Bette?", Tina asked softly, whispering warmly into Bette’s ear. "Tina", Bette said seriously. "Yeah, babe?" Bette looked into her eyes and smiled. "No more talking". Tina bit her bottom lip and raised her eyebrows flirtatiously. "Yes ma’am." They kissed softly at first but harder at a quickening pace. And into the night they loved each other.
Chapter 27.
The cool air, invited by the opened window, lurked into the room and met with the soft skin of the sleeping lovers. Tina’s arm draped over Bette’s body, holding her close. Without warning a loud, shrill, ring broke through the air and harshly intruded upon the stillness of the five a.m hour. Bette jumped in Tina’s arms at the offending sound. Tina, woken more by Bette’s movements than the noise, jumped immediately and looked at the clock. 5:03. Nothing good happens at 5:03. A panic rose in Tina’s throat as Bette turned on the bedside light and reached for the phone. "Hello", she said sleepily, with her eyes closed tightly to keep out the too bright lamp light.
Fighting off the disorientation that comes from being shaken loose of a deep sleep, Tina’s first thought was of Angie. Something’s happened to Angie. When a more cognitive thought process began to ease it’s way out of first gear, she realized that no one would be calling them if anything had happened to Angie. They would be the first to know, after all. That realization, however, did not stop Tina from getting out of bed immediately to check on her. Whatever lingering fears she had for Angie’s safety were put to rest when she opened the door and heard the gentle snoring of the two-year old. The nightlight afforded a murky view of the child sleeping soundly. Angelic face. Angelica. Tina closed the door to the room and walked back to the master bedroom. She slipped under the sheet in time to hear Bette say, "Ok, we’ll see you then." Bette hung up the phone, turned the light off, and slid down to her pillow, accepting Tina’s arm around her once again and asked, "How is she?"
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Alright! Looks like they’re getting somewhere. PPS!
Tina did Cagney and Lacey proud with that bit of detective work. Now, to repeat the latter half of Bette’s earlier thought, Will they be stopping on their way back?
I always loved Tina. Great body and also a great mind. Loved Bette’s body and mind as well. Hopefully that will break the case wide open and allow Faye to have some closure before her final breath. My Cubs did not even make it past 3 games but they are not alone.
Great update Red! And some gratutitous sex tossed in as well!! I love it. But ABBA?? Had to you been to Ikea and were feeling the Swedish love? I must admit the meatballs there could turn anyone into lovong all things Nordic! LOL Loved Bette saying “She’s with me.” Very cute. Well done, hope you’re already working on the next update! PPS
Wow Tina is so smart and awesome!
Tina is one smart lady, she knows her business well thanks
good this is heating up; altho if someone phoned me at 5 for an 11 mtg, i’d kill ’em. Luckily B and T found something more constructive to do. Lmao. pps
See why I love Tina so much? Clever woman.. And Bette’s ‘she’s with me’ statement was hilarious :) x
Any time the phone rings after/before a certain hour, the immediate reaction is to worry, and worry hard. Really, Richard could have waited an hour or so. But then, yeah, as Bette said, that worked out OK. And Tina, of course, is brilliant. Her choice of partner is already evidence of that. And I swear, Alice is as cute as Angie is. Great update, red. Thanks (and I’m glad things worked out).
I truly adore this story…thank you.
This is getting soooo good! Our Tina is one smart cookie. PPS!!
You just get better and better, red. Such a great read! Yaaay Tina, sexy sleuth that she is, and I love Bette’s “she’s with me” declaration.