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    Great Unexpectations Chapter 27

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    Tina hummed in the kitchen, clad in a white robe, cleaning up the breakfast mess on the stove. Bette was in the bathroom cleaning up the breakfast mess on the daughter. "Boo. I still don’t understand how you get it on your feet", she cooed. Angie looked up from her seated position in the warm bath water and smiled, pointing at her feet. "Feet". Bette laughed and Angie splashed enthusiastically.

    Ten minutes later they emerged from the bathroom. One entirely clean and changed Angelica, and one entirely soaked and in need of a change Bette. "She really likes to splash, just an FYI."

    Tina chuckled looking at Bette’s wet hair and the few stray soap suds she’d overlooked. "Look what you did to Mama B", Tina said, taking Angie into her arms. "I’ve got her babe, if you wanna go ahead and take your shower".

    Bette kissed Tina and pulled her close, intentionally sharing her suds with Tina’s robe. Angie delighted in the transfer of white foamy bubbles onto her Mama T. Tina pulled back from the kiss and playfully scooped a fingertip full of suds onto Angie’s nose. Bette left them smiling and playing to take her shower.

    Watching Bette down walk down the hall, away from her, Tina admired her form. Angie fussed slightly, wanting down. Wanting to move around the room under her own steam. Tina kissed the top of her head and obeyed the young mistress’ command, letting her to the floor. Angie happily toddled to her crayons and coloring paper and began at once to create a masterpiece. Or what appeared to be a masterpiece when gazed upon by the eyes of two adoring parents.

    Tina watched momentarily before picking up the phone. She listened as it rang and heard a groggy Alice answer. "Hello", came her slow, tired greeting.

    "Rise and shine, Al. We need a favor."

    "Who is this?"

    "It’s Ed McMahon. I’ve got a big cardboard check for you. But you have to come to Angie’s house to pick it up."

    "Fuck, Tina", she groaned. "What time is it?"

    "It’s a little after ten. Can you come over in a bit and sit with Angie? Bette and I need to go see Faye."

    Comments

    1. Tina did Cagney and Lacey proud with that bit of detective work. Now, to repeat the latter half of Bette’s earlier thought, Will they be stopping on their way back?

    2. I always loved Tina. Great body and also a great mind. Loved Bette’s body and mind as well. Hopefully that will break the case wide open and allow Faye to have some closure before her final breath. My Cubs did not even make it past 3 games but they are not alone.

    3. Great update Red! And some gratutitous sex tossed in as well!! I love it. But ABBA?? Had to you been to Ikea and were feeling the Swedish love? I must admit the meatballs there could turn anyone into lovong all things Nordic! LOL Loved Bette saying “She’s with me.” Very cute. Well done, hope you’re already working on the next update! PPS

    4. good this is heating up; altho if someone phoned me at 5 for an 11 mtg, i’d kill ’em. Luckily B and T found something more constructive to do. Lmao. pps

    5. Any time the phone rings after/before a certain hour, the immediate reaction is to worry, and worry hard. Really, Richard could have waited an hour or so. But then, yeah, as Bette said, that worked out OK. And Tina, of course, is brilliant. Her choice of partner is already evidence of that. And I swear, Alice is as cute as Angie is. Great update, red. Thanks (and I’m glad things worked out).

    6. You just get better and better, red. Such a great read! Yaaay Tina, sexy sleuth that she is, and I love Bette’s “she’s with me” declaration.

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