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Carmine Lips: Caramel Skin # 14
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Previously
I felt like the furious winds from Drake Passage.
The driest from Atacama Desert would be me…or… I could blossom like a delicate flower, the Añañuca Amarilla, on its sands.
I felt serene like the waters from Daniela Beach.
I was a witch and I could pronounce old enchtmants from the celts to keep her forever.
I sensed myself as depth as the Mariana Trench.
I was the cold waves from Guarda do Embaú beach when it found the warm waters from the Madre river.
I could walk throught Machu Pichu, breath its unique air and cried her name to the “old mountain”*
I…
I felt…
…free.
This …what she did to me…
And that was what she was to me: a force of nature.
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We took a bath and Bette went to the kitchen. She made us natural sandwiches and some lemon juice. But we didn’t eat sat at the table… I finally understood that to Bette, the furniture had other functions.
She took the beach towel “Or canga like the Brazilians would call it…”like she said and extended it on the white sand. The shadows from a tree protected us from the sun. In front of us the magnificence of the sun going to dawn. The curtains from another world opened itself. The sun. The skies blurred with orange. The air. The whiteness from the sand, the turquoise from the sea. She sat by my side and we let the view work its magic.
It was so beautiful that it hurts.
No…It’s not a bad pain…. It´s is that feeling that shrunk your chest. When you felt your heart tightened. That feeling that filled you when you’re at an unforgettable place with the one you most love, that special human being you found, the one you elected to you…. your love.
Bette was watching the show that was unfolding before her eyes.
I was admiring the view by my side.
Her profile.
Her hair. Fetters that restrained my body and soul forever. And still I was so…so… free…Yeah…I was so happy! I was overwhelmed by the feelings I carried inside. I felt the blood in my veins running slow and peacefully. I could dream eternally. There was a line of dreams wanting to be dreamed when I was by her side, in her presence.
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Tina is so right about cotton character panties!!!! I totally love them on my girl, more so than victoria secret, although those are hott in there own right.
Braz what a great Thanksgiving gift you gave us. I so loved how both women told each other what their emabarrasments were, and what they liked and who their freinds were. You along with a couple of others have a gift to make us see the story in our minds, eyes and its a beautiful picture, thank you Braz it was beautiful!!!
Senti sua falta!!!
that was beautiful the ABS is loving u right now
Great chapter loved every minute of it.
Heyyyyyy… just before going to bed, I found your post, and I just couldn’t NOT read it right away :-)) I missed you, I missed your words so much too ;-) I just loved how they talked to each other, about their likes, their lives, their embarrassments… that was sweet and tender and sooooooooo full of sensuality, just plain tender sharing of their most inner themselves… beautiful… perfect to just float away into sweet dreams……… thanks a lot Dear, and I promise I’ll make an effort to write you something, now that your computer has been healed – hope the virus was his, not yours ;-)
… Oh, and by the way, I agree with Tina : I love funny coloured cotton underpants, and printed pajamas too (flannel ones in winter too : bunnies, kitties, name what you want… and comics too) – they are not as sexy as Victoria’s secrets, but… when one is not as sexy as Bette or Tina, funny PJs are much nicer I think ;-)
Oh, dear Braz, what a pleasant surprise! A LONG chappy, which made us all fuzzy and moved. The intimate exchange of comments about best friends, panties and feelings developing between B&T are overwhelming. Thanks Braz. It seems you always get the best out of them; even on their embarrassing moments. We will write something to you later. As Helene78 said, we all have missed you a lot, dear friend. Take care. Big Hs & Ks – Lucero & Marsha
That was awesome and sweet. Love them, please post more, thanks! Is this story talk about how B&T first meet and continue in the Soft Spoken Secrets right? Maybe Im wrong. I go read another story, thanks!
Damn, that was sweet and passionate. To get to know the real person that you are falling in love with has got to be an awesome feeling.
I really hope this has a happy ending because if not, I’ll be sad. *gives the puppy dog eyes*
indeed i really enjoyed this one. especially the fragment with the butterfly kiss: i share this also with my love when we are in playful mood and yes i sometimes laughed out loud. thanks for another great experience.