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Do I know you? Finale
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Chapter 16: Finale
After a short snooze they woke up realizing their time in the hotel was coming to an end.
Bette was playing with Helena’s curls as they laid on their sides looking at each other. They were enjoying a silent memory of their night of seemingly never ending passion.
“I still can’t get over that woman trying to hit on you while I was in the room next door or that guy offering his services as he stared at you working over that strawberry.”
“Bette, forget about it. I know once we leave this room I’ll have to deal with horny students, intellects, artists, men and women hitting on you. Not to mention Jodi your once and possibly future ‘friend with benefits’ and your ex-Tina who by all accounts still wants you back. I’ll be the one going crazy in a matter of time.”
“Helena, look at me and hear me. You are not exactly a troll. For me, what’s in the past is in the past. This is a new beginning for me… for us. I am looking forward to what our future brings. There is so much I want to do, see and experience with you. You challenge me. You tell me about myself. You don’t take me overly serious. I like that. I’ve had a partner who was totally devoted to me so much that she lost herself in me. We drifted apart. We were once walking on parallel roads that took a divergent path. We didn’t know it until it was took late. Then she resented me when I was not longer the person she thought I was. I don’t want to make that mistake again. I want to be with you when we are not hot and sexy and being hit on by strangers anymore.”
Helena was stunned at the proclamation. She knew that she had intense feelings for Bette but to hear it being returned was far more than she expected. “Bette, you keep talking like that and you’ll have me falling more and more in love with you. We have so much to learn about each other and so much room to grow. I have had my own insecurities about love but with you…” looking over Bette’s face and kissing her lightly on the lips.
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on to the next chapter! or segment of chapters! woooweee! i knew they could live happily onward and all that…good show, i loved this series squirl! pps pps pps…work indeed. i keep up through procastination. hehe, i hope you’ll do the same for us;)
Squirl this was a great finale and how Lolita turned out to know HElena from the past. And then the ending how Papi called Peggy telling her that all was well with the negociations, great once agian!!
Great ending girlie and now you made the start we expect many more stories of you. It’s a real pleasure to read your chapters, great job thanks.
Great series Squirl – please write more. I’m more than glad that you decided to roll your own even if it was because the other Belena writers were slacking. PS: ‘Weho Days’ is soldiering on but had to take a back seat to crummy real life.
And they lived happily ever after! lol This was a great and realistic fill-in to the S4 storyline, kid. Sure hope you’re on a roll now and will keep writing, thus flushing out some other dormant BeLena authors to get going again!
Hey Squirl ! This was a very smart way of putting and end to your story ( not to mention a quite delightful one ). That being said, you do realize you left plenty of room for a sequel, right ? If only because I’m sure these two have so many more techniques to explore… LOL !! Just kidding, but I know you’re dying to tell us about those techniques, aren’t you now ? LOL ! Anyway, besides all the great qualities of your story and writing, I wanted to congratulate you wholeheartedly on having the guts to write your own story, especially since there are so many great authors out there, authors most readers can’t help but compare the new ones to. At least, I know I would never be able to do what you did. So kudos to you, Squirl ! You made it !
Well, that was a very nice end to a very nice story – Thanks… but, please, don’t stop here… I’m like Bette : curious about the “five-point-tongue-technique”… if you made that up, you’ll have to work more to find a good story about it ;-))
Ok, well, I’ll have to get that lady in Amsterdam (I know who she is) to teach me the five point tongue technique so I can live up to my character! Great story Squirl. As I’ve said before, you’re sex scenes are absolutely delicious! I look forward to more from you.
Bravo. I just caught up on this beautiful masterpiece. There are a number of authors that I do end up reading in silence, but felt the need to let you know, that in following this tale, you have gained an additional reader. Thanks so much for sharing your talent with the site.
Very Nice ending!!!! Thank you for the story. I hope to read more of what you write.
Squirl, this was a very interesting read. I liked it so much. Thank you. Md
“This is a new beginning for me… for us. I am looking forward to what our future brings.” TiBetter or not, that says it all! Oh, and I changed my mind, leave Loita out of it! Bette and Helena don’t need a third person messing things up. Besides, they are totally hot without any help! Great job on this story…look forward to your next! Thanks!
nooooo, say it ain’t so…please continue, please, please continue…really enjoyed your writing, hope you post another belena fic…ciao
You so made me fall in-love with this Bette and Helena.
that was really really nice…and sweet…I like how Papi handled everything…lol…great story, sweetie