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Do I know you? Finale
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“With me what? Finish your thought”
“With you there is a lot of potential”
Bette pulled Helena over to hold her. As Helena rested her head on Bette’s chest she could her some irregularity in Bette’s heartbeat. She looked up at Bette and said “Your heart does not beat regularly. It kind of picks up then slows down.”
Bette smiled and told her, “I have a sinus arrhythmia. I think that’s what they called it. I’ve had it for years. My doctor picked it up some time ago. I was sent off to the Cardiologist. She told me I was fine. It was a benign and normal variant.”
“Are you sure? I don’t want to stress your heart and have you die on me. How the fuck would I explain that?”
Bette laughed. “It nothing, okay. Don’t worry. I promise you I’m fine. Look I run and I swim. And if the fucking we’ve done last night and this morning doesn’t convince you my heart is fine I don’t know what I can tell you.
Bette got quiet thinking about her heart beat and released a deep sigh. Helena noticed the changed in Bette’s mood and asked “Where are you? Where did you go just now?”
Rubbing Helena’s arms and back “No one has ever noticed it before. No one has listened to my heart like you did.”
“Come on. I can understand why Jodi would have not heard it but Tina should have.”
“I don’t know when it started but certainly by the time my doctor discovered it, Tina and I were out of sync. I don’t think she was listening to my heart any more. So she never heard it either”
Helena kissed Bette’s chest, “Promise me it’s nothing. I would not survive losing you now”
“Helena, you are being overly dramatic. I promise you I am fine, really.”
As they lay quietly contemplating their future the buzzing from Helena’s phone caught their attention. Helena reached over to see she has missed multiple calls mostly from her mother and Alice.
Alice had sent several text messages wondering where Helena was.
“Where R U? Call me”
“I saw Candi. She is looking for U”
“Tell me U are not with her. Please call me.”
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on to the next chapter! or segment of chapters! woooweee! i knew they could live happily onward and all that…good show, i loved this series squirl! pps pps pps…work indeed. i keep up through procastination. hehe, i hope you’ll do the same for us;)
Squirl this was a great finale and how Lolita turned out to know HElena from the past. And then the ending how Papi called Peggy telling her that all was well with the negociations, great once agian!!
Great ending girlie and now you made the start we expect many more stories of you. It’s a real pleasure to read your chapters, great job thanks.
Great series Squirl – please write more. I’m more than glad that you decided to roll your own even if it was because the other Belena writers were slacking. PS: ‘Weho Days’ is soldiering on but had to take a back seat to crummy real life.
And they lived happily ever after! lol This was a great and realistic fill-in to the S4 storyline, kid. Sure hope you’re on a roll now and will keep writing, thus flushing out some other dormant BeLena authors to get going again!
Hey Squirl ! This was a very smart way of putting and end to your story ( not to mention a quite delightful one ). That being said, you do realize you left plenty of room for a sequel, right ? If only because I’m sure these two have so many more techniques to explore… LOL !! Just kidding, but I know you’re dying to tell us about those techniques, aren’t you now ? LOL ! Anyway, besides all the great qualities of your story and writing, I wanted to congratulate you wholeheartedly on having the guts to write your own story, especially since there are so many great authors out there, authors most readers can’t help but compare the new ones to. At least, I know I would never be able to do what you did. So kudos to you, Squirl ! You made it !
Well, that was a very nice end to a very nice story – Thanks… but, please, don’t stop here… I’m like Bette : curious about the “five-point-tongue-technique”… if you made that up, you’ll have to work more to find a good story about it ;-))
Ok, well, I’ll have to get that lady in Amsterdam (I know who she is) to teach me the five point tongue technique so I can live up to my character! Great story Squirl. As I’ve said before, you’re sex scenes are absolutely delicious! I look forward to more from you.
Bravo. I just caught up on this beautiful masterpiece. There are a number of authors that I do end up reading in silence, but felt the need to let you know, that in following this tale, you have gained an additional reader. Thanks so much for sharing your talent with the site.
Very Nice ending!!!! Thank you for the story. I hope to read more of what you write.
Squirl, this was a very interesting read. I liked it so much. Thank you. Md
“This is a new beginning for me… for us. I am looking forward to what our future brings.” TiBetter or not, that says it all! Oh, and I changed my mind, leave Loita out of it! Bette and Helena don’t need a third person messing things up. Besides, they are totally hot without any help! Great job on this story…look forward to your next! Thanks!
nooooo, say it ain’t so…please continue, please, please continue…really enjoyed your writing, hope you post another belena fic…ciao
You so made me fall in-love with this Bette and Helena.
that was really really nice…and sweet…I like how Papi handled everything…lol…great story, sweetie