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Don´t you believe in miracles
THE PLANET: what´s going on?
While Bette left the planet Kit´s worried about her, but she ´s thinking about a woman who saw her alone drinking a martini,so she decided to talk to her
Kit:I´m sorry I don´t wanna bother you, but ,like I knew most of the people that always coming here this is your first time?
The mysteryious woman:yes you´re righjt
Kit:by the way my name is Kit ,so if you need something just tell me ok
The woman: well thanks a lot oh my name is Szanne Shore and I would really like to talk to you
Kit:well thank you you have a good ear when you decided to do it
Then Kit´s talking with their girls about a surprise party that she´d on mind , when she exclaimed
Kit: Carmen oh my God ,you can´t imagine how much I missed you my girl, where you have been?Why don´t you never called me
Carmen: well it took me a long time to recover well you know from who Shane treated me like a shit in front of my family , so I decided to stay with them for a while
Kit:and what are you doing here?
Carmen:well there´s a big chance to recorder a dj´s cd with the most populars djs from europe I hope to have luck
Kit: don´t worry baby girl you´ve talent
Alice: Ok I have a lot of news ,ok I´ll start about Bette, she went to NY with a woman her name´s jodie ,but thanks to God her stupid relationship it´s completely over
Carmen: and what about with Tina?
Alice: well like you know she left Bette for a man do you remember him ,Henry ,but she couldn´t stay with him I think that she missed her lesbian side and why not all her friends
Carmen: you could talk to Bette
Alice: not too much the only thing that Bette & Tina are together is Angelica but who knows I think that the doors´re still opens ,but I don´t know who will be the first to enter
Carmen: and what about with Helena?
Alice: she´s in prision it´s a long story she stole money from a fucking woman ,but she´ll be free soon I hope
Carmen: and what about Jenny
Alice: she took a new book the name is The woman in me it´s a best seller ,but she´s travelling most of the time
Alice: don´t you wanna know about Shane
Carmen I know that you´ll tell me in one or other way
Alice: she´s with a woman her name´s Paige she´s a kid of eight years old ,but Shane it´s not ready for a formal relatioship but I don´t know where she is now
Carmen: and what about you
Alice:I´s dating with a great woman but she´s a military woman she´s on Irak and she decided to come back ,but it´s ok no hard feeling anymore.
This is the end of the first chapter but not the end of the story .Thanks girls for their help about how to write a story I hope that you can help me more
My msn and e-mail: tinapl71@hotmail.com
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This is better. There is a bit more tweaking that needs to be done but your on the right track. I sent you a pm, so just let me know.