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    Shoot ‘Em Up: Chapter Seven

    Story written on November 30, 2007 by Akiracolorblind.
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    Shane looked back at Carmen. “But–like I said, you won’t have anywhere to go. Cops are looking for you, and they will put you away until the killer is found. I could disappear off the face of the Earth because I’ve done it before, and they will pin you for the murder.”

              Carmen and Alice sat in the bedroom, and Carmen wiped her face.

    “I don’t know how much of this shit I can take.” Carmen sniffed.

    “What can we do? She held a gun on us Carm. We’ll have to stick it out.” Alice sat next to Carmen.

    “I don’t want to be here.”

    “We don’t have anywhere to go,” Alice grabbed Carmen’s hand. “We have each other that’s all we got.”

              Shane sat back in her chair as she watched and listened to their conversation on the screen. She sighed heavily as she ran her fingers through her hair. She got up from the chair and walked towards the bedroom. She walked up to the door and knocked lightly. Alice got up from the bed and walked over to the door. She opened it and saw Shane standing in front of her with her hands in her pockets.

    “Hey.”                                           

    Alice crossed her arms. “Hi.”

    “Can I come in?”

    “This is your place—you have the right to come in,” Alice moved to the side to let Shane in.

    “I wanted to come in here and—,” she hesitated and sighed. “T-to apologize about what happened earlier.” She looked down at her feet. “I-I’m sorry for pulling the gun out on you. That’s not my style. I don’t force—.”

    “Then what’s your style?” Carmen butted in.

    Shane looked at Carmen. “Like I try to say before I was interrupted, I don’t force anyone into doing anything they don’t want to do.”

    “Well I don’t believe that, you’re a fuckin’ contract killer. You do this kind of shit for a living.”

    “Yeah I do, but I’m a different kind of person when you get to know me.”

    “I don’t want to know you. I don’t want to be here right now.”

    “If you want to then just fuckin’ leave,” Shane shouted. “There’s the fuckin’ door!”

    “Can you two just stop this?” Alice spoke up. Carmen crossed her arms and looked away. Shane sighed heavily and looked down at her feet again.

    “If you really want to leave, then leave. I won’t stop you.” Shane looked back at Carmen. “But—like I said, you won’t have anywhere to go. Cops are looking for you, and they will put you away until the killer is found. I could disappear off the face of the Earth because I’ve done it before, and they will pin you for the murder.” Carmen looked at Shane. “Do you want that?”

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    1. i enjoyed the chapter…cant wait to see what happens with shane and carmen…i also have a feeling that this wont be the last time that alice will be playing peacemaker until they both accept their feelings

    2. still worried about the shrink,I believe dr/patient confidentiallity only extends so far with shrinks…think thats how they got the Menendez bros, the shrink ratted to the cops. Great chap!

    3. to my list of impossible demands, i am going to add: bring carmen back into shane’s life on the show and have them play again. thanks for the fun stuff akira, especially since it’s always better than what they give us by faaaar. lol. pps

    4. just started reading this fic, good stuff, glad I found a sharmen writer..from searching your name you got lol tons of fics under your belt, care to list and completed ones so I can save the hassle of going through the 10+ pages of results? thanks…feel free to PM me..

    6. Gotta agree with Helebette big time. And I liked how Shane is worried about Carmen being mad at her (“I made a mistake last night. The woman that I met the other night, I made her upset.” You know, for being a killer, Shane can be totally cute). Lookin’ forward to the next update, for sure.

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