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    Shoot ‘Em Up: Chapter Seven

    Story written on November 30, 2007 by Akiracolorblind.
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    Shane looked back at Carmen. “But–like I said, you won’t have anywhere to go. Cops are looking for you, and they will put you away until the killer is found. I could disappear off the face of the Earth because I’ve done it before, and they will pin you for the murder.”

    “No,” Alice looked between the two women.

    “I’m going to stay here.” Shane nodded at Alice.

    “If you get hungry, there’s food in the fridge. I’ll let you ladies sleep.” She walked out of the bedroom and closed the door behind her.

    ———————————–

              Dana and Helena walked into Lucky 7, and Dana walked over to the bar. Bobby walked over to her.

    “What can I get ya?”

    “Information,” he looked at her weirdly. “Have you seen these two ladies in here a few nights ago?” Dana showed him two pictures of Carmen and Alice. He looked at the two pictures and shook his head no.

    “I’ve never seen these two ladies before in here.”

    “Well we know they were here,” Helena spoke up. “We found a pack of matches that came from here in one of their rooms.”

    “They probably were here, but I never saw them.”

    “Have you seen her?” Dana pulled out a picture of Shane. Bobby stared at the picture and then looked up at her.

    “Naw—I’ve never seen her before either.”

    “Well if you do see these three ladies, give us a call.” Helena handed him a card.

    “Sure do,” they walked out of the bar and walked toward the car.

    “He’s lying to us.”

    “How do you know?” They got into the car, and Dana put the key in the ignition.

    “He probably hasn’t seen the two girls, but I know he’s seen Shane. He hesitated. “He must be protecting her.” She put the car in the drive and pulled out of the parking lot.

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    “I made a mistake last night,” Shane picked at her fingernails.

    “What kind of mistake?” Dr. Willows wrote on her pad.

    “The woman that I met the other night, I made her upset.”

    “How did you make her upset?”

    Shane shook her head. “I just said some things to her that wasn’t right. I yelled at her.” She sighed heavily. “I’m falling for her, and this never happened to me.”

    “You never had a relationship.”  Shane shook her head again. “So have you tried to talk to her?”

    “No, I can’t. I’ve tried to talk to her, but she doesn’t want to listen to anything I have to say.”

    “Does she know?” Shane looked at Dr. Wilson. “Does she know your secret?”

    Shane looked at her stupidly. “Of course she does, and I’m trying to protect her, but she doesn’t want my protection.”

    “Well just give her some space and just let her come to you.” Shane nodded.

    “I guess I can try to do that.” She rolled her eyes and chuckled, and Dr. Wilson shook her head.

    “Have you killed anybody lately?” Shane looked at the doctor acutely.

    “No I haven’t,” she sighed. “I did a job, but I didn’t kill the person.”

    “Why didn’t you?”

    “I really don’t want to get into it.” She sighed. “Can I leave?”

    “Yeah,” Dr. Wilson nodded. Shane got up from her chair.

    “Thanks,” she walked out of the office.

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    Comments

    1. i enjoyed the chapter…cant wait to see what happens with shane and carmen…i also have a feeling that this wont be the last time that alice will be playing peacemaker until they both accept their feelings

    2. still worried about the shrink,I believe dr/patient confidentiallity only extends so far with shrinks…think thats how they got the Menendez bros, the shrink ratted to the cops. Great chap!

    3. to my list of impossible demands, i am going to add: bring carmen back into shane’s life on the show and have them play again. thanks for the fun stuff akira, especially since it’s always better than what they give us by faaaar. lol. pps

    4. just started reading this fic, good stuff, glad I found a sharmen writer..from searching your name you got lol tons of fics under your belt, care to list and completed ones so I can save the hassle of going through the 10+ pages of results? thanks…feel free to PM me..

    6. Gotta agree with Helebette big time. And I liked how Shane is worried about Carmen being mad at her (“I made a mistake last night. The woman that I met the other night, I made her upset.” You know, for being a killer, Shane can be totally cute). Lookin’ forward to the next update, for sure.

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