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    Something so right – chapter three

    Story written on December 9, 2007 by allyemmerson.
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    Bette has a bad Friday. B and T have breakfast together

     

    SOMETHING SO RIGHT – Chapter Three

     

    Bette glanced around Liquid – the same old boring faces pulling the same old moves. This was beginning to resemble the lesbian equivalent of Groundhog day -. If there was one Friday night she hadn’t wanted to hook up here this was the one. But Alice had been on the phone to her three times on Friday morning demanding to know why the ritual should not be observed – why Liquid needed their presence. Bette thought that the club might need them but she sure as hell didn’t need it. She wanted a night anywhere but at this snake pit. But friendship was important to her and she did care for Alice despite the number of times that the wack-job had succeeded in making her life hell.

     

    Bette bought three bottles of beer from the bar and was polite to the barmaid who flattered Bette’s tee-shirt. That bugged Bette -it was a black tee-shirt – nothing fancy. Okay so it had cost her $30 but at the end of the day – it was a tee-shirt. She went back to the table and put the bottles down and sat down

     

    “Okay – so what the hell is wrong with you ?” Alice demanded

     

    “Nothing “ Bette replied sourly.

     

    “Shane tell her “

    “If Bette isn’t happy she will tell us – leave her alone “

     

    “Thank you Shane “

    “Come on Bette – you have been elusive all week – tell us what you have been up to”

    “Working “ Bette replied “ working at my business. Doing 12 hour days and going to meetings and looking for new artists “

     

    “Bull – you have been running your own business for months and you have still had time to have a social life “

     

    “I have been busy “ Bette said again.

     

    “What’s her name ?” Alice prodded again at her friend

     

    “What the fuck ? “

    “What’s her name – there must be a woman – is it that blonde you bedded last week – she was hot – and you haven’t told us what happened – tell us “

    “Alice – Shane and I do not kiss and tell “

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    6. Loving Tina’s back story – finally something funny about where Tina came from – I’m loving watching Bette fall for Tina – this is truly a first last and forever relationship from the start. Great.

    8. Hello ally, once again you have taken my breath away. This story is so very powerful, and fun, I love that Bette is settling down and Tina… Woodstock… White Rabbit… that is so F#$%ing awesome… I love the ambiance of Woodstock… so free… so pure. You are amazing. Sincerely, JC (PS – I had to go to youtube to listen to that song… and guess what the Woodstock performance… just brilliant)

    10. I’m sure the breaking of Tina’s mother’s water only added to the mud factor-the summer of love=a large puddle of mud after the rains came. Evidently the good music and right combination of drugs helped to overcome the discomfort. I do love White Rabbit on the radio I turn it up and sing along, both really loudly. A truly bravura performance on Grace Slick’s part! Don’t Bogart that joint!

    12. Tina, the summer of love, oh wow, what fun. You make them seem so comfortable with one another but yet, there is that undertone of unease because Tina is unsure and Bette has to keep her Lothario ways in check so she doesn’t run Tina off. A very intresting juxtaposition and I can hardly wait until Tina loses her reticience and just goes for it and we know she will, for who can resist Ms. Hotness, one Bette Porter. PPS

    13. Tina’s Mom was high when she was born? Damn. Yeah, thats.. weid. I’m really happy that Bette likes Tina so much she isn’t spending all her time with her..and dogging her behind her back with other girls. However, Alice and Helena are both mad obnoxious. They should hook up..and leave everyone else alone. Can’t wait for more of this one. I looove beginning stories.

    14. Ally, I just read all 3 chapters of your new story and it’s fantastic. I also love the fact, unlike a lot of B&T stories, to get to know each other before jumping into the sack. Can’t wait for your next post!

    15. I am loving this story more with every chapter. Your talent is boundless. The connection between the two is so appealing… a definite case of opposites attracting. Enjoy your well-earned nap!

    16. Yes she does have to have her & what a whirlwind she will be with her hippie parents & you with your staid conservative but unfaithful do as I say not as I do father!!! Great story, SOUNDS LIKE IT WILL BE LOTS OF FUN PPS

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