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    Pretty Women, episode 15A

    Story written on December 22, 2007 by justloveB+T.
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    The balcony talk ‘The truth is, its totally irrelevant whether I like her or not. I will not let myself become emotionally involved in business.’ 2 classical beauties in a classical movie, rewriten

     

    * * * * * * * * *Music starts playing, Roy Orbison’s ‘Pretty woman’* * * * * * * * * *

     

    Words start rolling on the screen, letter by letter, and they form the following:

     

     

    * * * * * * * * * * * * * *   TINA KENNARD * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *& * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

      * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * BETTE PORTER * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     

     * * * * * * * * * * * * *Star in the JLBT production * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     

    * * * * * * * * * * * *PRETTY WOMEN * * * * * * * * * * * * *

    **************Last time on the JLBT production PRETTY WOMEN: ****************

     

    We see a reshot of Bette, Tina and Helena and Peggy Peabody sitting around the restaurant-table. Helena’s passionate rant before Peggy places a hand on her arm and carefully choses the words to tell Bette she knows Maxime McFay is her mother. We see Bettes cold response to this, and the relevation that her mother has passed away, followed by Helena leaving and Peggy getting up to tell Bette: ‘Watch it, Porter, Im gonna tear you apart…’ which is answered with: ‘I’m looking forward to it…’

    # the scene  fades away and we see the HOLLYWOOD sign, before

    the camera turns and we see Bette and Tina, wordlessly, enter the elevator. The blonde is casting a nervous look in the brunettes direction, who’s thoughtfully staring at the opposite wall, avoiding eyecontact. As they get out, Bette openes the door of the hotelroom and strides, without further ado, in the direction of the balcony, to open the doors#

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    2. hey… I was hoping to see ur post when I was in office yesterday. too bad the apartment i’m living in liverpool doesn’t have internet connection. now i’m in london shivering on the bed (so cold, nobody came to turn on the heater in the apartment). I wanted to read ur story now but my PDA phone screen is a bit too small for your generous post ;) so i’ll leave it until mon when I get bck to liverpool office only read it. promise ;) yea, i’ll be in uk until around mid of jan, u wanna come over to liverpool again? will provide u free stay ;) don’t worry, tat apatment got heater. oh god it’s really so cold without heater :s

    3. I am glad that you granted half of my chirstmas wish .. Do u remember the old commerical were the old lady says were’s the beef I am saying WERE IS THE BOF lol I hope u have happy holidays too.the part were bette remembers her mom hurt th ABS u still rock

    4. hey… I was hoping to see ur post when I was in office yesterday. too bad the apartment i’m living in liverpool doesn’t have internet connection. now i’m in london shivering on the bed (so cold, nobody came to turn on the heater in the apartment). I wanted to read ur story now but my PDA phone screen is a bit too small for your generous post ;) so i’ll leave it until mon when I get bck to liverpool office only read it. promise ;) yea, i’ll be in uk until around mid of jan, u wanna come over to liverpool again? will provide u free stay ;) don’t worry, tat apatment got heater. oh god it’s really so cold without heater :s

    6. jumping up and down! you posted it! what a good Christmas present. I hope that Bette will be willing to open and talk to Tina i think it could help her soo much, beside if feel great to be able to talk with someone wich you are not afraid to make a fool and u know that have her open arms to hold u, definitly Bette should try…!!!. Have a wonderful hollidays. many many hugs

    7. Somehow Tina needs to pump warmth and love back into Bette’s heart. The heart was ripped from her chest by her mother’s departure from her life and then turned over to an uncaring man. Bette needs to have someone (Tina) step in and heal that broken heart.

    10. Yay, you’re back with this story!! It’s one of my favorites! Loved this chapter, … it tugged at my heart! Oh please come back soon with another chapter! Happy Holidays! :)

    11. If I remeber correctly we might have piano sex in the next Chapter, right? That was my favorite scene in the entire movie! (oh and the part about Cinderella being a bitch, at least, the french version)

    13. Beautiful update! Thank you sooo much for posting. Hope you’ll have a great Christmas and a happy new year. Please post an update to this story again soon… Pretty pretty please…. I really can’t wait :P

    14. Hey you, my young friend. Was so suprise to see that you had posted. Tina will win in the end with her Hazel eyes and loving understanding ways, Have a Happy Christmas and New Year Thinking of you at this time thanks

    16. Very emotional chapter. How vulnerable B finds herself in front of T. That’s why she goes away. Can’t wait for next scene. Yeah, the piano one, was really powerful. We don’t doubt that you will make it as AWSOME as this chapter. Happy holidays to you, dear friend! Sincerely, Lucero & Marsha- your fans from Mexico City

    17. Oh hey my friend! I am now caught up, and want to thank you for your story. I love the way you write, and I love this movie too, and I know it’s tough but post when you can Hun! Happy Holidays if I don’t get to talk to ya, but I hope I can! LOL!

    19. You never ceased to amaze me with your writing… have I told u that? I think so yes. So much of the emotions, I could feel the fear (fear of height you described, I totally can relay on that ;)), broken hearted, care, desire… wow! And sorry about the redundant comments before :P the connection wasn’t so good and I didn’t know it was posted already. U have a very Merry Christmas and hope to see another post from you before new year :) Happy holiday!!

    20. Awww that must have hurt – glad to see the update but damn we want more. This story is so great that you can’t stop here :O) looking forward to the next post. And happy holidays to you too.

    21. Wow… Great chapter and still very faithful to the original movie. Bravo, my friend! And I do lobby with the others for the next chapter being the piano scene… Hehehe… Since it seems to be their priviledged way of communicating for now… Though we’re making progress it seems. It is a very interesting insight into the original movie that you’re giving us with the desciption of their inner feelings. Indeed, “Pretty woman” is more of a comedy of course, yet there are a lot of unspoken underlying dramatic truths that of course are overseen by most, if not all, viewers. It is thus quite interesting to explore with you the inner turmoils of each of the characters. For example, Tina (Vivian)’s reaction to Bette (Edward)’s harsh tone, and how she finds it natural to be talked to that way… I just hope that Bette will know how to show her that she deserves more than anyone else to be treated like a queen! But I know you’ll do that to perfection! Anyway, great chapter and looking forward to more! Happy holidays to you too my friend and my very best wishes for 2008! Hopefully this new year will bring us the long-awaited Tibette-love-flavored season and finally the birth into this world of our little “projet”… Thanks a lot and take care!

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