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Collision Course 4.89 – Shattered
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Collision Course 4.89 – Shattered
Rosita opened her eyes, hearing banging and slamming in Alice’s small, almost inadequate kitchen. What was that girl doing? Thought Rosita to herself, not wanting to get up from her warm spot, her body was relaxed and her mind drifted.
The proposal had been spur of the moment, the reason behind it, long festering. Alice had always made her feel completely alive, even when they’d been fighting. Rosita was resigned to loving with as much heart and soul as she could, because life was much too short. Rachel Gibson had found that out on their last mission.
The blonde agent had met her death with more dignity than Rosita could have mustered in a time like that. Before all hell had broken loose, Rachel had told Rosita that it was time to stop fighting the losing fight, and join the battle that could still be won. Rachel had been talking about the battle for love, the battle for equality, the battle that raged on their home soil, not the ones abroad.
Rosita had returned to the states, been debriefed, and then tendered her resignation. Sydney Bristow understood, she hadn’t been happy about it, but there was nothing that she could do. Rosita was a free agent, and the only thing that Rosita could think about was Alice Pieszecki, and the mouth on her that never stopped, the same one that usually got her into trouble. Fighting, laughing or loving, Alice had been her first real love, more than the sexual, and far more than intellectual, Alice was her better half.
More banging in the kitchen and soft swearing and Rosita laughed, because for some reason unbeknownst to her, Alice was attempting to swear in Spanish. The usually sexy language didn’t roll off Alice’s tongue; it tumbled and fell flat on its face. Her ‘R’s didn’t roll; they rattled off Alice’s usually articulate tongue.
“Bella! What are you doing?” howled Rosita. Laughing and sitting up, feeling the tangled mass of silky hair falling over her shoulders, she desperately needed another shower after their after shower activities last night.
“Stay in bed! That’s an order from your superior officer!” bellowed Alice.
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I see you can do sweet and ye si believe ya,lol… Rosita and Alice a great match for each other love how they banter back and forth! Alirght tina is finally being assertive here and going after what she wnats, ahhh she finally grew up, thanks to amy and quin,lol nice to see how bette let tina take charge for once thanks to jo! :) happy holidays!
WooHoo!!! Bette and Tina sitting in a tree…K-I-S-S-I-N-G!!!! You’re going to seperate the twins? Wow…that was interesting. My dad is a twin. I can’t imagine the experiences he would have missed out on had they been seperated as children…buy, hey this is totally and completely your story! ;-) Thanks!
LMAO you had me laughing once again. This line just stood with me after I read it, and until the end. “”Gonna get a leg up on me?” quipped Alice brandishing Rosita’s prosthetic leg.” Don’t ask why, just that humor lingering. Only you lady. LMAO! I appreciated B&T in this one, and I really cannot wait for the rest. All good things must come to an end I guess. Good luck with the nursing grades. Ness says hello back at ya! She just picked up a medical game for the Wii I had gotten her. Take care Janet, and post when you can.
Love the proposal and especially that it was Tina doing the asking. Everyone so happy and in love… you’ve become quite the little cupid! Not looking forward to this one ending, but certainly understand it with your crazy schedule… have you penciled in time for a nap?? Hope you had a good Christmas and wishing you success in all you do for the New Year.
A bigger place is just what Alice needs. Brian worries me as a parent but I guess his personality is just an abrasive one, plus he does have a kid already. It’s good that Justin is there for baby Sam, he’s sweet. Nat should get back out there & try again. Hope your Holidays were well spent. Happy New Year!
the best part of my hospital training..a nice ass in scrubs IS a sight to be seen…without the eggs of course :) merry ho ho to you and yours!
You were right about me liking it.So the story will be wrapped up by Jan 14.Good luck with that.Merry Christmas.
See the twins not growning up together is sad,I guess a deal is a deal. Ru and Alice I guess eggs on you backside is better than in the face. Bette and Tina are just where I want them to be. You are going to be pulling a big load my Dear, Just take care of you while you are doing this. God speed on all of the things you are going to do. MMMMMerry Christmas to you and your.Happy New Year also thanks BVH
…and hardly miss a step. (my pc is working against me!) I hope Nat finds what she’s looking for… And another wedding! Dean Kenter does have a nice ring to it. Thanks for the chapter JM, and just in case, Happy New Year!
Shane has enough money, they can be in Pittsburgh the whole time